Mufliso.N ke ghar lekin khudkushi ka Darr bhi hai ( Qadeertoopchi )

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Yaarane Bazm aadab o tasleemat ,,

Ik Taweel arse ke baad apki bazm me tashreef farma hun apni ik muqtaqsar ghazal ke saat umid hai apni khimti ara se nawazenge ...


Haaye shahr-e-munsif kya ye tujhe khabar bhi hai
Sar kataane ki saff me begunah ka sar bhi hai



Betiya.N meri yun to khush hamesha raheti hain
Mufliso.N ke ghar lekin khudkushi ka darr bhi hai



Haat sainkdo.N yun to uthte hai.N duao.N ko
Khuch hain beasar lekin khuch me to asar bhi hai



Kya kahon ke tere bin hai mera guzaar kaise
Roz marta jeeta hon kya tujhe khabar bhi hai



gham qadeer aate hain par ye dars dete hain
mushkilo.N ke har shab ki khushnuma saher bhi hai




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«Reply #1 on: March 01, 2011, 01:47:16 PM »
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Yaarane Bazm aadab o tasleemat ,,

Ik Taweel arse ke baad apki bazm me tashreef farma hun apni ik muqtaqsar ghazal ke saat umid hai apni khimti ara se nawazenge ...


Haaye shahr-e-munsif kya ye tujhe khabar bhi hai
Sar kataane ki saff me begunah ka sar bhi hai



Betiya.N meri yun to khush hamesha raheti hain
Mufliso.N ke ghar lekin khudkushi ka darr bhi hai



Haat sainkdo.N yun to uthte hai.N duao.N ko
Khuch hain beasar lekin khuch me to asar bhi hai



Kya kahon ke tere bin hai mera guzaar kaise
Roz marta jeeta hon kya tujhe khabar bhi hai



gham qadeer aate hain par ye dars dete hain
mushkilo.N ke har shab ki khushnuma saher bhi hai




Qadeertoopchi


Bahut bahut Aur bahut Khoob Qadeer Bhai..

Har Ek Sher Apne Hisse Ki Kahani kehta Hua..

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«Reply #2 on: March 01, 2011, 02:07:03 PM »
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bahut khub qadeerji... kamal ki shayari hai aapki.... bahut khub...

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«Reply #3 on: March 01, 2011, 02:24:57 PM »
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Yaarane Bazm aadab o tasleemat ,,

Ik Taweel arse ke baad apki bazm me tashreef farma hun apni ik muqtaqsar ghazal ke saat umid hai apni khimti ara se nawazenge ...


Haaye shahr-e-munsif kya ye tujhe khabar bhi hai
Sar kataane ki saff me begunah ka sar bhi hai



Betiya.N meri yun to khush hamesha raheti hain
Mufliso.N ke ghar lekin khudkushi ka darr bhi hai



Haat sainkdo.N yun to uthte hai.N duao.N ko
Khuch hain beasar lekin khuch me to asar bhi hai



Kya kahon ke tere bin hai mera guzaar kaise
Roz marta jeeta hon kya tujhe khabar bhi hai



gham qadeer aate hain par ye dars dete hain
mushkilo.N ke har shab ki khushnuma saher bhi hai




Qadeertoopchi


behtreen kalaam bahut hi umda bayaan janab qadeer sb
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«Reply #4 on: March 01, 2011, 02:27:33 PM »
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Qadeer sahab hello :
aapko pahli baar parha mashaallah bahut khubsurat sachhi ehsaaso aur haqeeqat se labrez ghazal kahi aapne.
behtareen .
bahut bahut achha laga aapka kalaam.
har sher khasamkhash hai ji.
ek sawaal aya aapke ghazal parhne ke baad.
" kya kahun ke tere bin--"
2nd last sher--isme aapne khud ka indication dia hai--
baaki ke saare lajawaab sher ke mayne bahut umda aur sachhe hai lekin ye ek sher jo kaafi khubsurat hai iss ghazal me kaise sazaya aapne !!
kuch jawaab dijiyega--
thanx
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«Reply #5 on: March 01, 2011, 08:21:24 PM »
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Yo ki iss mehfil main, meri nazar main ek institution hai
Qadeer sahab ap..Mere bhai koshish kara karo kay zada aya karo..
Akhri do toh dil main bas gaye..
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Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #6 on: March 01, 2011, 08:54:16 PM »
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Betiya.N meri yun to khush hamesha raheti hain
Mufliso.N ke ghar lekin khudkushi ka darr bhi hai

Haat sainkdo.N yun to uthte hai.N duao.N ko
Khuch hain beasar lekin khuch me to asar bhi hai


Bahut khoob ... Qadeer Sahab !

Jab bhi ... jitni baar iss ghazal ko padhoN ... ek nayaa asar choDh jaati hai ... bahut khoobsurat ehsaas bayaan kiye hai aapne ... adaayegi bhi asardaar rahi ... ek umdaa peshkash ... !

tahe dil se daad hazir hai ...  Applause Applause Applause

aise hi likhte rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen ... !

duaaoN ke saath ... !
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«Reply #7 on: March 02, 2011, 12:20:57 AM »
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Janab Qadir Sahab Aadaab!

Badi mudat baad aapki kalaam se ruberu hokar behad achcha lag raha hai.... Usual Smile

Is behad aur umdaa gazal ki bayaani hi nahi balki khayaaloN ki gehraai bahut bahut umdaa hai... Usual Smile
Waqai dilfareb shayari ka muzahera kiya hai aapne Usual Smile
Dil se daad O mubarakbaad kabul kijiye Usual Smile         



Yaarane Bazm aadab o tasleemat ,,

Ik Taweel arse ke baad apki bazm me tashreef farma hun apni ik muqtaqsar ghazal ke saat umid hai apni khimti ara se nawazenge ...


Haaye shahr-e-munsif kya ye tujhe khabar bhi hai
Sar kataane ki saff me begunah ka sar bhi hai

Bahut achcha aur sidha matla kaha hai janaab ...
         



Betiya.N meri yun to khush hamesha raheti hain
Mufliso.N ke ghar lekin khudkushi ka darr bhi hai

Waah waah janab ....... Kia umdaa khayaal kahaa hai Masha Allah ... Bahut umdaa Usual Smile
Allah aapke zarf ko buland kare... aameen Usual Smile         



Haat sainkdo.N yun to uthte hai.N duao.N ko
Khuch hain beasar lekin khuch me to asar bhi hai

Behad sahiN farmaya janab....


Jaane kiski duaaoN ka asar sambhalta hai mujhe..         
MaiN dubta huN to daryaa bhi uchalta hai mujhe.. NM




Kya kahon ke tere bin hai mera guzaar kaise
Roz marta jeeta hon kya tujhe khabar bhi hai


Bahut khoob daad Usual Smile         

gham qadeer aate hain par ye dars dete hain
mushkilo.N ke har shab ki khushnuma saher bhi hai

Bahut umdaa sher kaha hai janab daad daad daad Usual Smile         



Qadeertoopchi


Is khub khayaali aur dilfareb kalaam par
dil se daad kabul kijiye aur bazm meiN shirkat karte rahiye..

Allah aapki kalam meiN aur bhi zor o taqat bakhshe..
Khush O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez .... Usual Smile         

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«Reply #8 on: March 02, 2011, 01:56:41 AM »
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