MUKAMMAL JAHAAN......///..........................................///......IFTAKHAR

by Iftakhar Ahmad on April 15, 2013, 08:12:51 AM
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«Reply #15 on: April 18, 2013, 09:15:48 AM »
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bahut ahcha likha hai iftakhar saaaheb, khaas taur pe 2nd last sher haasil-e-ghazal laga mujhe, aage v bas yuNhi likhte rahiye...
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«Reply #16 on: April 18, 2013, 09:03:54 PM »
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superbbb ghazal Iftikhar saahab
Subhash bhai, bahut bahut shukriya tawajj: dene aur hausla afzaai karne ka.
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«Reply #17 on: April 18, 2013, 09:05:33 PM »
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Bohat Khub!!!

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Shireen jee, hausla afzaai ke liye bahut bahut shukriya.
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«Reply #18 on: April 19, 2013, 01:55:00 AM »
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wah wah ...............!
Sheba jee bahut bahut shukriya.
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«Reply #19 on: April 19, 2013, 01:56:30 AM »
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Ifteqaar Sahaab Aadaab..!



WaaH waaH waaH janab kia baat hai behad khoobsurat aur umdaa kalaam kahi hai janab.... bade hi umdaa aur dilkash ahsaas O
khayaal rahe... Is khoobsurat aur umdaa kalaam par humari hazaaroN
dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye... bazm ko roshan karte rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye..

Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile


Bahut bahut shukriya Parwaaz saheb meri ghazal pe tawajj: dene aur iss qadar hausla afzaai ke liye.
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«Reply #20 on: April 19, 2013, 01:57:34 AM »
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Behad umda kalam rahi iftakhar ji. har ek ashaar khoob rahe. padhkar dil khush hua. dili mubarakbad ko qubool kare

Aqsh jee, bahut bahut shukriya.
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«Reply #21 on: April 20, 2013, 02:08:11 AM »
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ZameeN    ho    gai     aasmaaN    ho    gaya
Mukammal   mera   ab   jahaaN   ho   gaya

Tujhe    paa    ke     raushan    hui    zindagi
DarakhshaaN falak  kehkeshaaN  ho gaya


Nazeer-e-qamar   ka    jo   charcha   chida
Tera   naam   mujh   se   bayaaN  ho  gaya


Chupaaye   rakha    muddatoN   haal-e-dil
Wo    ek    roz    aakhir    ayaaN    ho   gaya


Giraaya   jo  ghooNghat   hai  tune  sanam
Qamar  baadloN   meiN    nihaaN   ho  gaya


Usse  dekh  ke   yak   ba  yak  bazm  meiN
Nazar    ruk    gai     be-zubaaN    ho    gaya

Tujhe   paa   ke    dilbar    mere   ‘Iftakhar’
Chaman   ho   gaya    aashiyaaN  ho   gaya




*DarakhshaaN: Raushan
*Nazeer-e-qamar: ChaaNd ka mukaabla
*AyaaN: Ujaagar
*Yak ba yak: Achaanak se


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«Reply #22 on: April 20, 2013, 02:12:51 AM »
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bahut khoob , mashaallah bahut achhi ghazal hai .
har sher khubsurat . bahut si daad aur mubarakbad.
Bahut bahut shukriya Hasan saheb hausla afzaai ke liye.
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«Reply #23 on: April 20, 2013, 02:14:54 AM »
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bahut ahcha likha hai iftakhar saaaheb, khaas taur pe 2nd last sher haasil-e-ghazal laga mujhe, aage v bas yuNhi likhte rahiye...
Bhusan jee, bahut bahut shukriya hausla afzaai ke liye.
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«Reply #24 on: April 20, 2013, 02:15:52 AM »
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3rd sher khoob rahaa Applause Applause Applause
Shukriya Aadil saheb.
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«Reply #25 on: May 29, 2013, 06:34:11 PM »
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«Reply #26 on: June 12, 2013, 03:00:50 AM »
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Congratulations,

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