my first ghazal to yo india.

by sidra0484 on April 16, 2015, 07:43:07 AM
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ummeed hai pasand aayegii ....


logoN tumhaare shahar se anjaan abhii hoon ,
anjaan  hoon to kyaa huaa beimaan nahii hoon.

ummeed hai milegi mujhe bhi yahaan jagah,
barson se kisii ghar ki talabgaar rahii hoon.

kuch dost meraa saath naa deNge na suneNge,
lekin main janatii hoon ke har baar sahii hoon.

taa-umr jise dhooNDhte phire ho tum yahaaN,
dekho to Gaur se mujhe main khwaab wahii hoon.

mujhko azeez hain merii ye zindagee ke Gham,
inke baGhair do kadam bhii chal na sakii hoon....
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«Reply #1 on: April 16, 2015, 08:33:59 AM »
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bahut khub sidraji....
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«Reply #2 on: April 16, 2015, 08:52:58 AM »
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bohat khub waaaahhhhhhhhh wellcome to Yoindia Shayariadab family
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«Reply #3 on: April 16, 2015, 09:52:16 AM »
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ummeed hai milegi mujhe bhi yahaan jagah,
barson se kisii ghar ki talabgaar rahii hoon.

Aap aye bahar aayi
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«Reply #4 on: April 16, 2015, 01:46:55 PM »
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«Reply #5 on: April 16, 2015, 04:44:07 PM »
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bahut khoob bas zaraa qaafiyon par dhyaan de len  god bless u
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«Reply #6 on: April 16, 2015, 08:36:40 PM »
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bahut hee sundar ehsaas hai.
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«Reply #7 on: April 17, 2015, 05:53:58 AM »
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Bahut khub. dheron daad.
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Barsoon se kisi ghar ki talabgaar rhi hoon..
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«Reply #10 on: April 18, 2015, 03:56:43 AM »
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 Hats off to you!
Most Welcome..
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«Reply #12 on: April 22, 2015, 06:21:49 PM »
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waah waah waah waah kyaa kehne Sidra ji, bahut khoob likhaa hai aapne, aapka Yoindia mein haardik swaagat hai, aate rahiye , likhte rahiye....!!!
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