Na Mujhko Ab Tum Rok Paoge -Panna 6:Ghazals

smardia

Guest

«Reply #75 on: October 14, 2009, 08:10:12 PM »

Poojaji aapne padha aur dard ko mahsoos kiya.....
aur aapki bhawukta ne aapko rula diya..... tearyeyed

Dard bantne se .... kam ho jaata hai...aisa mehsoos huaa
Aapka bahut bahut aabhaar......
Aur intzaar promise ki hui kuchh aur lines ka....
Aapki likhi lines badi shikshatmac hai....
Tassali dene wali hain......
Clapping Smiley

Kaai baar hum dard likhte hain jo kavita ban jaati hai.....
Mere saath aisa he huaa....kuchh shabdo mai vyakt karu tou...

Kavita bani thee tab, jariya dard bhulane ka
Shabd ban dard baha,behti jaise nadiya akeli
Bypaas hota avrodhon ko chhod,banana naya raasta
Ab nahi rakha maine purane shikvo se koi vaasta

Jo hai aaj haquikat usi ko maan liya mukkadar
Karm-fal maan jeena sikh liya,ho gya be-fikra
Dard sehna aur halaton pe muskurana mujhe aa gya
Anter ka vish,shabdo k jaal mai ghol bahana aa gya

Ab har roj main karta hu hriday-manthan
Man mai hai vishwaash,futega ek din amrit ka nirjhar.....
Sneh v samta se paripurn hoga mera jeevan
Prem ras k bahenge jharne,hriday marusthal banega chaman....

Quote from: Pooja on September 18, 2009, 03:52:55 AM

Apki kavita ne to ansoo se Rula diya smardia ji!! ek ek shabd dil ko chirta hua.. her sawal ke samne sir jhuka ro diya..... behad bhauk, bebasi ko darshati hu.... such kahu shabd nahi hai.. kuch palo ko bas jaise sans aor zindagi sab ruk gaya is kavita ko padte padte.... Jalad kuch likhne ki koshish hogi... magar abhi ke liye jo man mai ayya hai likhne ja rahi hu Kaha bado ne jahan jaago wahi sawera phir kahein ko sinche ansoo se apna besera Maali ne kab kanto ko dekh maani haar sinchta raha bas dil se, chahe jeevan ho kitna bhi ghanera heriday ke ghav ko bana apni majbooti insaani iraade agge kon hai thehra (Ruka) apne dukh bhulane ko, nikalo dunia main ghar ghar main thehra hai Dukh bethera (Bahoot)

Quote from: Pooja on September 18, 2009, 03:52:55 AM

Apki kavita ne to ansoo se Rula diya smardia ji!! ek ek shabd dil ko chirta hua.. her sawal ke samne sir jhuka ro diya.....
behad bhauk, bebasi ko darshati hu.... such kahu shabd nahi hai.. kuch palo ko bas jaise sans aor zindagi sab ruk gaya is kavita ko padte padte....

Jalad kuch likhne ki koshish hogi...

magar abhi ke liye jo man mai ayya hai likhne ja rahi hu

Kaha bado ne jahan jaago wahi sawera
phir kahein ko sinche ansoo se apna besera

Maali ne kab kanto ko dekh maani haar
sinchta raha bas dil se, chahe jeevan ho kitna bhi ghanera

heriday ke ghav ko bana apni majbooti
insaani iraade agge kon hai thehra (Ruka)

apne dukh bhulane ko, nikalo dunia main
ghar ghar main thehra hai Dukh bethera (Bahoot)


	Logged

Similar Poetry and Posts (Note: Find replies to above post after the related posts and poetry)
	KYA KYA MITA PAOGE by VIKAS KAMAT in Shayri-E-Dard « 1 2 All »
	~~~HAME HEE PAOGE~~~ by Ravinder in Shayri-E-Dard
	¤¤Tum Bhula Na Paoge¤¤ by waheed_rose2004 in Shayri for Dard -e- Judai
	tum mujhe yu bhula na paoge by samnoj in Mazahiya Shayri(Funny Shayari) « 1 2 ... 12 13 »
	Bicharr ke mujh se tum bhi jee na paoge by pkgoyal in Shayri for Dard -e- Judai

khwahish

WeCare
Khaas Shayar

Rau: 166

Offline

Gender: Male

Waqt Bitaya:
272 days, 5 hours and 50 minutes.

Posts: 11814
Member Since: Sep 2006

Re: Na Mujhko Ab Tum Rok Paoge

«Reply #76 on: October 16, 2009, 10:26:13 AM »

Bahut bahut Bahut Khoob Pooja..

Pehle Bhi iss Thread Par Aa Chuka Hoon,Par Aaj Phir Aapki Likhi Hui Poetries Padhi,Dil Nihaal Ho gaya..Bahut Hi gehre Aur Zindagi Se Juddi Hui baatein Kahi hai Aapne..Bahut Bahut Khoob..Har Lafz Sach Ka Aaena Hai..

Bahut Ache..

Smardia Ji Shayad Pehli Baar Aapki Likhi Kavita Padhne Ko mili Hai Mujhe..

Kya Kahoon,Apane To Aankhein Nam Kar di..Bahut Hi Gehre Jazbaat Smardia Ji..

Aap Ki kalam Ne Bhi Sach ko Kaagaz Par Utaara Hai,Khaas Kar Apaki Woh kavita "Kya Main Maali Tha Bekaar"

Isse Keh Sakte Poetry At It's Best!!!!

bahut bahut Khoob Smardia Ji..

Bahut AChe


	Logged

smardia

Guest

Re: Na Mujhko Ab Tum Rok Paoge

«Reply #77 on: October 16, 2009, 11:13:28 AM »

Khwaishji aapka bahut bahut shukriya.... wave

aapne meri rachna ko dhayan se padha aur saraha dil khush ho gaya.....
Kavi ko aur kya chahiye...appriciation aur taliyen....
Yo par meri aur bhi rachnayen hain....
Traffic Jaam....
Pratibandh....
Pehli Barkha
Chand Tum Darpan Ho...
Vish pyale...adi aadi...sabhi ras main...

Quote from: khwaish on October 16, 2009, 10:26:13 AM


	Logged

khwahish

WeCare
Khaas Shayar

Rau: 166

Offline

Gender: Male

Waqt Bitaya:
272 days, 5 hours and 50 minutes.

Posts: 11814
Member Since: Sep 2006

Re: Na Mujhko Ab Tum Rok Paoge

«Reply #78 on: October 16, 2009, 08:04:14 PM »

Quote from: smardia on October 16, 2009, 11:13:28 AM

Khwaishji aapka bahut bahut shukriya.... wave

Jee Zaroor Smardia Ji..Aage Zaroor Yeh koshish Hogi Ke Aapki Likhi Baaki bhi Rachnaye Main Padh sakoon..

Filhaal, Abhi Ke Liye phir Bahut bahut Khoob Smardiaji..


	Logged

khwahish

WeCare
Khaas Shayar

Rau: 166

Offline

Gender: Male

Waqt Bitaya:
272 days, 5 hours and 50 minutes.

Posts: 11814
Member Since: Sep 2006

Re: Na Mujhko Ab Tum Rok Paoge

«Reply #79 on: October 16, 2009, 08:21:31 PM »

Quote from: Pooja on July 14, 2009, 04:51:52 PM

Khwaish ji is thread mai to apka jawab anna chahiye tha... bahoot nainsaafi kar di apne to!!

shukaria apko yah gazal pasand aai!!

Maafi Chaahta Hoon Pooja,bahut der Kardi Iss Thread Par vaapas Aane Mein, Par Ek koshish Zaroor karunga,Iss Topic Se related Kuch likhne Ki,Zindagi Si juudi Kuch baatein Likh Raha Hoon,Zaroor Padhiyega..

Har Gham Apne Dil Mein Jo Seh Jaate Hai
Wahin Auron Ke Dil Mein Reh Jaate Hai!!!

Himmat Rakhne Walo ki Hi Jeet Hoti Hai,
Waqt Aane Par Woh Qayamat Se Bhi Ladd Jaate Hai!!!

Ek din Phir Aayegi bahaar uske Dar Par!!
Yaad Rakh,Gham to Parinde Ki tarah hote Hai,
Ek Naa Ek Din Udd Jaate Hai!!!

Tujhe Dekh Kar Hua Hai Yeh Mehsoos Ke,
Zindagi Ek Chalta-Phirta Karvaan Hai!!
Jisme Ache Log bhi Saath mein Juud Jaate Hai!!!

Na Soch Ke Tu Akela Hi pareshaan Hai "Khwaish"
MajbooriyaN Jab Insaan Ko Jhanjodhti Hai,
Ache-Ache Log bhi Iske Vazan Tale Dabb Jaate Hai!!!

Hauslo Buland Ho To Phir Kuch bhi Mushkil Nahi,
varna Dard Aur Halaat Ke Darr se Log Toot Ke Bikhar Jaate Hai!!!!

"Khwaish" Ka Tajurba Hai Yeh Dost Ke,
Kisi Raah par Pathar Ki Chot Se kabhi Naa Darna!!
Chot Dene Wale Pathar Hi Aakhir Mein Raah Dikhlaate Hai!!!!

Jinhe kaanto par Chalne Ki Aadat Ho Unhe Phir Kaanto Se darr Kaisa??
Iss Duniya Mein Zakhm Khaakar Hi Log Jeena Seekh Jaate Hai!!!!!


	Logged

smardia

Guest

Re: Na Mujhko Ab Tum Rok Paoge

«Reply #80 on: October 21, 2009, 11:21:43 AM »

wah...wah kya baat hai Khwaish ji bahoot khoob likha hai ji aapne... Clapping Smiley

Quote from: khwaish on October 16, 2009, 08:21:31 PM


	Logged

khwahish

WeCare
Khaas Shayar

Rau: 166

Offline

Gender: Male

Waqt Bitaya:
272 days, 5 hours and 50 minutes.

Posts: 11814
Member Since: Sep 2006

Re: Na Mujhko Ab Tum Rok Paoge

«Reply #81 on: October 23, 2009, 04:54:13 PM »

Quote from: smardia on October 21, 2009, 11:21:43 AM

wah...wah kya baat hai Khwaish ji bahoot khoob likha hai ji aapne... Clapping Smiley

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Smardia Ji..Jo Aapne Iss Ghazal Ko Padhne Mein Apna Keemti Waqt Diya..

Aapne Comment Kiya Acha Laga Ke Kisi Ne To Isse Padha


	Logged

Roja_malar

Guest

Re: Na Mujhko Ab Tum Rok Paoge

«Reply #82 on: November 16, 2009, 11:30:54 PM »

Quote from: khwaish on October 16, 2009, 08:21:31 PM

Bahut bahut khoob bhaiya...


	Logged

Roja_malar

Guest

Re: Na Mujhko Ab Tum Rok Paoge

«Reply #83 on: November 16, 2009, 11:41:41 PM »

Gadle paani mein nazar aaya na chehra apna
Roshni le gaya aankhon ki andhera apna

Ghar se nikle the ki raston ke ghane jungle mein
Gum huwe aise ki rasta bhi na paya apna

Dard ka chashma hua khushaq to khaak udti hai
Dil hai mara, jism hai sahara apna

Kaali raaton mein chamak udta hai jugnu ki tarah
Kaafila subah ka jo humne lutaya apna

Humne sau rang bare jehan ki tasviron mein
Fir bi kagaz pe koyi rang na ubra apna

Naav khol diye hai magar ab sochti hu
Koyi sahil hai na dariya, na safina apna

Chehra ujada hai to aaine ki ilzam na do
Hum hi bigde hai jo hai shehar mein charcha apna

Cheen gayi humse jo us rooh ki awaz, "Roja"
Lafz ka shola bhuja dil ki na dhadakta apna

Safina = naav


	Logged

Pooja

Guest

Re: Na Mujhko Ab Tum Rok Paoge

«Reply #84 on: November 19, 2009, 06:41:11 PM »

Quote from: khwaish on October 16, 2009, 08:21:31 PM

wah wah wah ek ek line kamal ki likhi hai apne khwaish ji... magar yah lines.... bahoot sahi kahi

"Khwaish" Ka Tajurba Hai Yeh Dost Ke,
Kisi Raah par Pathar Ki Chot Se kabhi Naa Darna!!
Chot Dene Wale Pathar Hi Aakhir Mein Raah Dikhlaate Hai!!!!

apne likha dil ko bahoot acha laga... ajj waqat ki kami hai... magar jab bhi waqat mila mai jaroor kuch aor likhne ki koshish karugi...


	Logged

Pooja

Guest

Re: Na Mujhko Ab Tum Rok Paoge

«Reply #85 on: November 19, 2009, 06:42:27 PM »

Quote from: ANAAMIKA on October 14, 2009, 06:32:24 PM

Poojaji aur Surendraji aap sab ne bahut dil ko chhune wali lines likhi hain....
Baar Baar padhne ko jee karta hai....keep it up...
Tariff karne se...Na Mujhko Ab Tum Rok Paoge

Clapping Smiley

Apki likhi kuch lines bhi aa jaati to ia thread ki shobha mai char chand lag jaate....

tahe dil se shukaria Anamika !!


	Logged

Pooja

Guest

Re: Na Mujhko Ab Tum Rok Paoge

«Reply #86 on: November 19, 2009, 06:43:34 PM »

Quote from: smardia on October 14, 2009, 08:10:12 PM

Poojaji aapne padha aur dard ko mahsoos kiya.....
aur aapki bhawukta ne aapko rula diya..... tearyeyed

Apke shabd hamesha Haqiqat aor zajbaato ka sangam hote hai... ek ek line kamaal ki buni hai apne... jalad he kuch likhne ki koshish hogi!!!


	Logged

KOYAL46

Guest

Re: Na Mujhko Ab Tum Rok Paoge

«Reply #87 on: December 05, 2009, 01:51:09 PM »

Pooja-ji badi joshilee aur bhaavpurn Gazal hai aapki....
Naari-jaati ko jagaati...uksaati...
uski shakti ka usko aabhaash karati rachna hai aapki..... Clapping Smiley

Saat taliyon ki salaami kabool farmaiye.....

Main bhee yahi keh sakti hu......

Na mujhko ab tum rok paoge.....
Khol purane thread main padh lungi..
Dair se aayee par ab na rahungi vanchit..
Roj kuchh old rachnaon ko kholna hoga uchit...

Quote from: Pooja on July 13, 2009, 07:25:11 PM

maine kabhi khud Gazal ke section mai likhne ki koshish nahi ki... magar ajj khud ko dard mai likhne se rokne ke liye... is section ka sahara le rahi hu...

yah ek aourat ke man ki bhawna hai... Jo bahoot kuch dekhne ke baad ab wapis purani zindagi ki taraf dekhna bhi nahi chahti... aor jab aourat koi baat man mai than leti hai to usko rokna mushkil he nahi asmbhav hota hai ( Mera yah man.na hai)

Asha hai jo bhi likha apko pasand ayega:

Hawa hu, hawa ko na rok paoge
Karoge jabardasti to iski andhi main bikhar jaoge
Na mujhko ab tum Rok paoge…

Thi andhkaar mai barso, mil chuki hu roshani se ab
Na kar koshish, iski chamak se he jal jaoge
Na mujhko ab tum Rok paoge…

Ansoo bahaye jayada ke Pooja pi gai ansoo
Na cher phir se zakham, iske dariya main beh jaoge
Na mujhko ab tum Rok paoge…

Banjar ho chuki kab ki armaano ki mehfil
Chue jo zajbaat, khud tadap ke rah jaoge
Na mujhko ab tum Rok paoge…

Na rok saki khudai bhi aourat ke man ko
Hawain ho tum, gardisho main kho jaoge
Na mujhko ab tum Rok paoge…


	Logged

khwahish

WeCare
Khaas Shayar

Rau: 166

Offline

Gender: Male

Waqt Bitaya:
272 days, 5 hours and 50 minutes.

Posts: 11814
Member Since: Sep 2006

Re: Na Mujhko Ab Tum Rok Paoge

«Reply #88 on: April 29, 2010, 07:24:56 AM »

Quote from: Pooja on November 19, 2009, 06:41:11 PM

pooja..Aapke jawaab Ka Abhi Tak Intezaar Ho raha Hai..

Aur Bahut Bahut Shukriya Jo Aapne padha Aur Saraha


	Logged

ANAAM

Guest

Re: Na Mujhko Ab Tum Rok Paoge

«Reply #89 on: May 02, 2011, 12:39:43 AM »

Lo Aaj hum achanak pahunch gaye ess thread par......
Bahut he sunder bana hai ye thread.....POOJAJI....Smardiaji....Khwaishji..... sab ne mast likha hai........mein bhi kuchh likhu aysaa mann ho raha hai......
Na mujhko ab tum rok paoge........


	Logged

Pages: 1 2 3 4 5 [6]

Yoindia ShayariAdab > Shayri ( Poetry ) or Shayari > Ghazals > Topic: Na Mujhko Ab Tum Rok Paoge