Na Mujhko Ab Tum Rok Paoge

by Pooja on July 13, 2009, 07:25:11 PM
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maine kabhi khud Gazal ke section mai likhne ki koshish nahi ki... magar ajj khud ko dard mai likhne se rokne ke liye... is section ka sahara le rahi hu...

yah ek aourat ke man ki bhawna hai... Jo bahoot kuch dekhne ke baad ab wapis purani zindagi ki taraf dekhna bhi nahi chahti... aor jab aourat koi baat man mai than leti hai to usko rokna mushkil he nahi asmbhav hota hai ( Mera yah man.na hai)

Asha hai jo bhi likha apko pasand ayega:


Hawa hu, hawa ko na rok paoge
Karoge jabardasti to iski andhi main bikhar jaoge
Na mujhko ab tum Rok paoge…

Thi andhkaar mai barso, mil chuki hu roshani se ab
Na kar koshish, iski chamak se he jal jaoge
Na mujhko ab tum Rok paoge…

Ansoo bahaye jayada ke Pooja pi gai ansoo
Na cher phir se zakham, iske dariya main beh jaoge
Na mujhko ab tum Rok paoge…

Banjar ho chuki kab ki armaano ki mehfil
Chue jo zajbaat, khud tadap ke rah jaoge
Na mujhko ab tum Rok paoge…

Na rok saki khudai bhi aourat ke man ko
Hawain ho tum, gardisho main kho jaoge
Na mujhko ab tum Rok paoge…
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«Reply #1 on: July 13, 2009, 07:31:12 PM »
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 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Bohot Khoob Pooja...dil chu gayi aapki ye shayari.
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«Reply #2 on: July 14, 2009, 12:53:58 AM »
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Wah Pooja ji,dard se bhara hua gazal likhi aapne,mindblowing
 :icon_thumleft:wonderful creation. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #3 on: July 14, 2009, 04:36:10 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Pooja Didi,!! Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley
Aksar ek aurat bahut kuch sehti hai, par jab uss sehan shakti ki intaha hoti hai to waisa hi hota hai jaisa aapne likha hai..behtreen..!!! Clapping Smiley

Kab tak bandhi rehti mein tere gamo ke jaal se,
Aakhir ek din to chootna hi tha mujhe iss haal se..

Jis kadar royi hoo.n mein teri har yaad-baat se,
Kaash teri aankh bhi bhare kabhi mohabbat ki maar se,

Aaj tune nikala hai mujhe apne dilo-jahan se,
Bahut royega tu uss din jab chali jaoungi mein iss jahan se..

Shally.



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«Reply #4 on: July 14, 2009, 04:50:02 AM »
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Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Bohot Khoob Pooja...dil chu gayi aapki ye shayari.

Shukaria Celmira ji..
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«Reply #5 on: July 14, 2009, 04:50:52 AM »
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Wah Pooja ji,dard se bhara hua gazal likhi aapne,mindblowing
 :icon_thumleft:wonderful creation. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Thanks Madhu ji, apke comments hamesha motivate karte hai aor kuch naya aor acha likhne ke liye.. issi tarah sath dete rahiyega!!
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«Reply #6 on: July 14, 2009, 04:52:04 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Pooja Didi,!! Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley
Aksar ek aurat bahut kuch sehti hai, par jab uss sehan shakti ki intaha hoti hai to waisa hi hota hai jaisa aapne likha hai..behtreen..!!! Clapping Smiley

Kab tak bandhi rehti mein tere gamo ke jaal se,
Aakhir ek din to chootna hi tha mujhe iss haal se..

Jis kadar royi hoo.n mein teri har yaad-baat se,
Kaash teri aankh bhi bhare kabhi mohabbat ki maar se,

Aaj tune nikala hai mujhe apne dilo-jahan se,
Bahut royega tu uss din jab chali jaoungi mein iss jahan se..

Shally.





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wah kaya baat hai shally bahoot he acha likha hai apne... Good work
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«Reply #7 on: July 14, 2009, 05:35:02 AM »
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kya baat hai  pooja ji.......

JAA CHUKI HUN DOOR TUMSE,
KI AB KABHI  APNE PAAS, HUMKO NA PAAOGE,
LAKH KOSHISH KARO,NA MUJHKO AB TUM ROK PAOGE.

AB TAK TOH THI MAIN SEEDI-SAADI,
HAR BAAT PE TERE KARTI THI YAKEEN,
JAISE BAJTI TERI BIN,WAISE NAACHTI RAAT AUR DIN.
AB TOH BAN CHUKI HUN NAAGIN,DAS JAAUNGI-NA MUJHKO AB TUM ROK PAOGE.

DIKHAWE KE LIYE KARTE THE, PYAAR MUJHSE,
PAR HAR WAQAT TERA DIL,KISI AUR KE LIYE TARSE,
SAHAN KARTI THI HAR WAQAT TERE SITAM,JO TUNE THE BARSE,
AAJ AGAR MEIN KISI AUR KO CHAHUNGI,
TUM BARDAAST NA KAR PAOGE AUR NA MUJHKO AB TUM ROK PAOGE.

TERE ANDHKAR SE NIKAL CHUKI HUN MAIN,
CHAL PADI HUN AAJ ROSHNI KI RAHA PAR.
DAM HAI TOH  DIKHA, MUJHE AAJ ROK KAR,
BAN CHUKI HUN AANDHI-TOOFAN,NA MUJHKO AB TUM ROK PAOGE.



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«Reply #8 on: July 14, 2009, 05:56:41 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Khooob Pooja.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bahut Hi Inspiring Aur Dil Ko Chuu Jaane Wale Jazbaat Pesh Kiye Hai Aapne..

Shally Aapne bhi Bahut Bahut Khoob Likha Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Cara Ji,Aapne Bhi Lajawaab Likha hai..Bahut Ache Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #9 on: July 14, 2009, 07:09:49 AM »
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Wah beautiful lines Shally ji and Cara ji, Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #10 on: July 14, 2009, 07:30:57 AM »
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Shukaria Celmira ji..

 Shocked Even More Shocked Even More Shocked Even More

Pooja DiDi aap ne mujhe JI kyun bola ?
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«Reply #11 on: July 14, 2009, 10:03:07 AM »
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bahut khoob Pooja Ji .... acche khayalaat hai.

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«Reply #12 on: July 14, 2009, 11:39:52 AM »
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maine kabhi khud Gazal ke section mai likhne ki koshish nahi ki... magar ajj khud ko dard mai likhne se rokne ke liye... is section ka sahara le rahi hu...

yah ek aourat ke man ki bhawna hai... Jo bahoot kuch dekhne ke baad ab wapis purani zindagi ki taraf dekhna bhi nahi chahti... aor jab aourat koi baat man mai than leti hai to usko rokna mushkil he nahi asmbhav hota hai ( Mera yah man.na hai)

Asha hai jo bhi likha apko pasand ayega:


Hawa hu, hawa ko na rok paoge
Karoge jabardasti to iski andhi main bikhar jaoge
Na mujhko ab tum Rok paoge…

Thi andhkaar mai barso, mil chuki hu roshani se ab
Na kar koshish, iski chamak se he jal jaoge
Na mujhko ab tum Rok paoge…

Ansoo bahaye jayada ke Pooja pi gai ansoo
Na cher phir se zakham, iske dariya main beh jaoge
Na mujhko ab tum Rok paoge…

Banjar ho chuki kab ki armaano ki mehfil
Chue jo zajbaat, khud tadap ke rah jaoge
Na mujhko ab tum Rok paoge…

Na rok saki khudai bhi aourat ke man ko
Hawain ho tum, gardisho main kho jaoge
Na mujhko ab tum Rok paoge…



Wah Kya Baat hai Pooja Ji.. Behad Khubsoorat Gazal Likhi Hai aapne.. Ek Aurat Ki Soch aur Jazzbaaton Ko Bakhoobi Pesh kiya hai aapne.. Really Great Work.. Bahut Bahut Khoooooooooob..
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


Cara aapne Bhi Lajawab Likha Hai.. Applause Applause

Aur Shally Dear aapke Likhe Lafz to Dil tak Utar gaye.. Kamaal Likha hai.. Applause Applause


**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #13 on: July 14, 2009, 12:26:41 PM »
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Waah Pooja ji...Abhi char hi din hue hain hume yaha se jude...
par banda kayal hua ja raha hai aapka.
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«Reply #14 on: July 14, 2009, 12:35:43 PM »
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maine kabhi khud Gazal ke section mai likhne ki koshish nahi ki... magar ajj khud ko dard mai likhne se rokne ke liye... is section ka sahara le rahi hu...

yah ek aourat ke man ki bhawna hai... Jo bahoot kuch dekhne ke baad ab wapis purani zindagi ki taraf dekhna bhi nahi chahti... aor jab aourat koi baat man mai than leti hai to usko rokna mushkil he nahi asmbhav hota hai ( Mera yah man.na hai)

Asha hai jo bhi likha apko pasand ayega:


Hawa hu, hawa ko na rok paoge
Karoge jabardasti to iski andhi main bikhar jaoge
Na mujhko ab tum Rok paoge…

Thi andhkaar mai barso, mil chuki hu roshani se ab
Na kar koshish, iski chamak se he jal jaoge
Na mujhko ab tum Rok paoge…

Ansoo bahaye jayada ke Pooja pi gai ansoo
Na cher phir se zakham, iske dariya main beh jaoge
Na mujhko ab tum Rok paoge…

Banjar ho chuki kab ki armaano ki mehfil
Chue jo zajbaat, khud tadap ke rah jaoge
Na mujhko ab tum Rok paoge…

Na rok saki khudai bhi aourat ke man ko
Hawain ho tum, gardisho main kho jaoge
Na mujhko ab tum Rok paoge…


 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
bahut hi khoob likha hai aap ney ji .... aur sach bhi likha hai aap ney...
par aaj aisi kya baat ho gayi joh itney dard meh likha hai aap ney...


jasbir singh

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