Nadaa nikle Hum hi

by @kaash on January 11, 2011, 01:10:51 PM
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nadaa nikle hum hi
tha muqaddar gham hi

khud pe auron ke saath
karte rahe sitam hi

gham se nahi shikayat
ye to the karam hi

aksar bebarish bhi
rahe chasm nam hi

zindagi me hamesha 'kaash'
hote nahi bharam hi
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«Reply #1 on: January 11, 2011, 02:48:32 PM »
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bahut khubsurat peshkash Akaash ji.
bahut gehri baat kah di aapne.
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«Reply #2 on: January 11, 2011, 06:12:40 PM »
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Kaash Sahab Aadaab!


Masha Allah Janab kia khoob kalaam kahi hai..
Kam lafzoN meiN kafi gehre aur sahiN ashaar
kahe hai janab dil se daad kabool kijiye..

 Applause Applause Applause         




nadaa nikle hum hi
tha muqaddar gham hi

Kia baat hai... am lafzoN meiN matla kahna behad mushkil sa hai.. par aapne behad khoob kaha daad Usual Smile         


khud pe auron ke saath
karte rahe sitam hi

Waah janab gehri baat hai daad Usual Smile         

gham se nahi shikayat
ye to the karam hi

Masha Allah kia kahne daad daad daad Applause Applause Applause         

aksar bebarish bhi
rahe chasm nam hi

Baht khoob janab daad..           

zindagi me hamesha 'kaash'
hote nahi bharam hi

Kia baat hai behad sahiN ... bahut khoob daad  Applause         


Kafi achchi kalaam se nawaaza hai kaash sahab ...
Is khoobtar kalaam per dil ki gehrai se daad kabool kijiye..

Likhate rahiye...
Khush O aabad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez.... Usual Smile         

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«Reply #3 on: January 11, 2011, 07:04:06 PM »
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Kaash ji behad kam shabdon me lekin bilkul kasa hua tana-ban buna aapne....behtreen peshkash ke liye dheron daad
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«Reply #4 on: January 12, 2011, 03:58:24 AM »
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wah... wah kashji... khub likha hai...
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«Reply #5 on: January 12, 2011, 03:59:40 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
bht accha likha hai aapne kaash ji..too guud
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«Reply #6 on: January 13, 2011, 10:02:35 AM »
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Nice Kaash JI
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«Reply #7 on: January 13, 2011, 10:08:18 AM »
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«Reply #8 on: January 15, 2011, 10:02:56 AM »
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Bahut Achhey Janaab Kaash Saheb...
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«Reply #9 on: January 27, 2011, 07:53:29 PM »
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nadaa nikle hum hi
tha muqaddar gham hi

khud pe auron ke saath
karte rahe sitam hi

gham se nahi shikayat
ye to the karam hi

aksar bebarish bhi
rahe chasm nam hi

zindagi me hamesha 'kaash'
hote nahi bharam hi


kamm lafzo mein gahri baat khubsurat andaz .daaad qabul kaen  kaash ji
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«Reply #10 on: February 05, 2011, 01:08:32 PM »
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nadaa nikle hum hi
tha muqaddar gham hi

khud pe auron ke saath
karte rahe sitam hi

gham se nahi shikayat
ye to the karam hi

aksar bebarish bhi
rahe chasm nam hi

zindagi me hamesha 'kaash'
hote nahi bharam hi


bahut khoob kaash sb kam lafzo mein gahri baatein
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