"nahi ab zamee.n pe utrna nhi hai"

by aaina on June 14, 2009, 04:17:17 AM
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Nahi ab zamee.n pe utarna nahi hai
Udaano se mujhko darna nahi hai

Jo kehna na tha aaj tumne kaha hai
Is nashay se mujko nikalna nahi hai

Bata na zalim ye kaisi ada hai
Panaho.n mai aa kar bikharna nahi hai

Mujhay tune loota nigaho.n se apni
Magr iska koi bhi shikwa nhi hai

Meher ki tune meri zindagi mai aa ke
Nahi iska koi bhi badla nahi hai

Kabhi tujhko ruwaaii uthani pade jo
Samjh laina ke aslam insaa nahi hai
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #1 on: June 14, 2009, 05:22:49 AM »
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Wah kya khoob kaha .. Behad khoobsoorat Ghazal hai.. bahoot Khoob Aslam ji.
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«Reply #2 on: June 14, 2009, 05:25:34 AM »
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Nahi ab zamee.n pe utarna nahi hai
Udaano se mujhko darna nahi hai

Jo kehna na tha aaj tumne kaha hai
Is nashay se mujko nikalna nahi hai

Bata na zalim ye kaisi ada hai
Panaho.n mai aa kar bikharna nahi hai

Mujhay tune loota nigaho.n se apni
Magr iska koi bhi shikwa nhi hai

Meher ki tune meri zindagi mai aa ke
Nahi iska koi bhi badla nahi hai

Kabhi tujhko ruwaaii uthani pade jo
Samjh laina ke aslam insaa nahi hai


BAHAUT KHOOB AAINA SB
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shab
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«Reply #3 on: June 14, 2009, 06:07:55 AM »
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     bahut achche Aslam ji
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Sayyid Randeri
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«Reply #4 on: June 14, 2009, 06:31:24 AM »
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waah waah bohot khoob aslam ji... achha likha aapne.
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aaina
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«Reply #5 on: June 15, 2009, 08:22:39 PM »
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Wah kya khoob kaha .. Behad khoobsoorat Ghazal hai.. bahoot Khoob Aslam ji.

bhut Shukriya sophi ji hosla afzaaii ka bhut bhut shukriya
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aaina
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«Reply #6 on: June 15, 2009, 08:23:31 PM »
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BAHAUT KHOOB AAINA SB

thnxxxx so much K_A
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aaina
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«Reply #7 on: June 15, 2009, 08:24:11 PM »
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     bahut achche Aslam ji

thnxxxxxx so much shab
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Talat
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«Reply #8 on: June 16, 2009, 10:12:22 AM »
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Nahi ab zamee.n pe utarna nahi hai
Udaano se mujhko darna nahi hai

Jo kehna na tha aaj tumne kaha hai
Is nashay se mujko nikalna nahi hai

Bata na zalim ye kaisi ada hai
Panaho.n mai aa kar bikharna nahi hai

Mujhay tune loota nigaho.n se apni
Magr iska koi bhi shikwa nhi hai

Meher ki tune meri zindagi mai aa ke
Nahi iska koi bhi badla nahi hai

Kabhi tujhko ruwaaii uthani pade jo
Samjh laina ke aslam insaa nahi hai


Really very beautiful and sweet...Bohot Khoob Aslam Ji
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aaina
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«Reply #9 on: June 20, 2009, 09:02:43 AM »
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waah waah bohot khoob aslam ji... achha likha aapne.

hosla afzaaii ka bhut bhut shukriya sayyid sahab
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aaina
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«Reply #10 on: June 20, 2009, 09:03:27 AM »
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Really very beautiful and sweet...Bohot Khoob Aslam Ji

bhut bhut shukriya celmira ji
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aaina
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«Reply #11 on: June 23, 2009, 01:50:52 PM »
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wah Aslam Sahab Kya Khoob Andaaz e Bayaan Hai
Ek Dum Suljhe Hue Shayar Ho Aapto Janab..
Bhaut Khoob Keep It Up...

bhut bhut shukriya shihab hostal afzaai ka bhut bhut shukriya aur is mohabbat ka bhi thnxxx again
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Pooja
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«Reply #12 on: July 09, 2009, 06:28:32 AM »
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wah kaya baat hai... Good work aaina ji!!
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aaina
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«Reply #13 on: July 15, 2009, 10:23:23 PM »
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wah kaya baat hai... Good work aaina ji!!

thnxxx pooja ji
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«Reply #14 on: July 15, 2009, 10:36:43 PM »
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Wah Aaina ji,kamaal ka likha aapne,very nice ad wonderful creation. icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley tongue3
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