nazar..sheba

by Sheba on February 20, 2010, 09:20:16 PM
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 ghuncha-e-noor main wo qamar nazar aata hai.....,                  qamar- moon
 gharib hai per wo jabar nazar aata hai.....,                    jabar- consoler

 khud hi dubayaa hai bahr main usney safina.....,                    bahr-sea
 nakhuda bhi abb qahar nazar aata hai.....,                         safina- ship

 is bahaar main mitt gaya chaman apna.....,  
 khaar bhi abb shajr nazar aata hai.....,                             khaar-thorn           shajr- tree

 tabha huey kai ghar dushmani ki aag main.....,
 dil bhi abb hajar nazar aata hai.....,                              hajar-stone

 toot gaye khawab sheba jo sajaaye they.....,
 ujaala bhi abb samar nazar aata hai.............!!!!!!        samar-darkness in night
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malli
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«Reply #1 on: February 21, 2010, 02:28:15 PM »
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Nice Ghazal Sheba sis
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«Reply #2 on: February 21, 2010, 04:57:01 PM »
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Wah wah Sheba ji bahut achha likha. Shandaar creation hai ye. Afreen.
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«Reply #3 on: February 22, 2010, 03:20:11 AM »
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Sheba,
bohot achcha likha hai...
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sbechain
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«Reply #4 on: February 23, 2010, 01:21:58 PM »
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Nice Ghazal Sheba sis

thanx malli ji
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«Reply #5 on: February 23, 2010, 01:22:27 PM »
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Wah wah Sheba ji bahut achha likha. Shandaar creation hai ye. Afreen.

thank u riyaz ji
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«Reply #6 on: February 23, 2010, 01:22:52 PM »
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Sheba,
bohot achcha likha hai...

thank u bharat ji
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«Reply #7 on: February 25, 2010, 09:13:01 AM »
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Bahut Khub Sheba Ji
Khaskar Yeh Line Mujhey Bahut Pasand Aayi

Good Job Ji...


Khuh Rahiye...

~Shihab~



thank u shihab ji
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«Reply #8 on: February 25, 2010, 09:27:21 AM »
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Bahut khoob Sheba Ji
SARVESH RASTOGI
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«Reply #9 on: February 25, 2010, 10:49:18 AM »
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Bahut bahut Khoob Shebaji  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #10 on: February 25, 2010, 11:45:40 AM »
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ghuncha-e-noor main wo qamar nazar aata hai.....,                  qamar- moon
 gharib hai per wo jabar nazar aata hai.....,                    jabar- consoler

 khud hi dubayaa hai bahr main usney safina.....,                    bahr-sea
 nakhuda bhi abb qahar nazar aata hai.....,                         safina- ship

 is bahaar main mitt gaya chaman apna....., 
 khaar bhi abb shajr nazar aata hai.....,                             khaar-thorn           shajr- tree

 tabha huey kai ghar dushmani ki aag main.....,
 dil bhi abb hajar nazar aata hai.....,                              hajar-stone

 toot gaye khawab sheba jo sajaaye they.....,
 ujaala bhi abb samar nazar aata hai.............!!!!!!        samar-darkness in night

Bohot bohot khoob Sheba Ji
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«Reply #11 on: March 02, 2010, 12:08:15 PM »
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Bahut khoob Sheba Ji
SARVESH RASTOGI

thank you sarvesh ji
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«Reply #12 on: March 02, 2010, 12:08:54 PM »
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Bahut bahut Khoob Shebaji  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

thank you khawaish ji
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«Reply #13 on: March 02, 2010, 12:09:26 PM »
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Bohot bohot khoob Sheba Ji

thank you celmira ji
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«Reply #14 on: April 12, 2010, 01:04:03 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause
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