New ghazal

by Zaif on October 04, 2013, 11:09:17 AM
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Rakhta hun gham ka jee mein ghubaar lapet kar..
Qalam chalti hai in dino auzaar lapet kar..

Tham kar dekhun peeche, mujhe waqt kahan hai?
Main chalta hun paaw mein raftaar lapet kar..

Footpath wale kya bune kambal ke khaab?
So lete hain chupchaap akhbaar lapet kar..

Kabhi zindagi se tajurbe sikhenge hum bhi,
Ham bhi dekhenge kabhi dastaar lapet kar..

Is gali se tum guzre to mehak utha zarra-zarra,
Kahan chal diye daaman me gulzaar lapet kar?

Fursat mile to aake dekh dil ka ashiyaan,
Rakhta hun sine se tera pyaar lapet kar..

- Zaif  Winking

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«Reply #1 on: October 04, 2013, 11:29:50 AM »
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waah waah zaif ji bohut khub bohut umda likha hai
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«Reply #2 on: October 04, 2013, 11:49:32 AM »
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«Reply #3 on: October 04, 2013, 12:18:46 PM »
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«Reply #4 on: October 04, 2013, 02:36:03 PM »
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Zaif ji aapki ghazal mujhe bahu pasand aati hai.. har sher bahut hi gehri soch aur gehre khayaal se saja hota hai.. aaj ki ghazal ke sabhi ashaar behad khoob hai.. aapko meri dili mubarakbad qubool ho..

Footpath wale kya bune kambal ke khaab?
So lete hain chupchaap akhbaar lapet kar..

Is gali se tum guzre to mehak utha zarra-zarra,
Kahan chal diye daaman me gulzaar lapet kar?
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«Reply #6 on: October 04, 2013, 05:40:25 PM »
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Ap sbhi ka tahe-dil se shukriya.
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«Reply #7 on: October 04, 2013, 07:29:32 PM »
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Zaif Sahaab Aadaab...!

WaaH janab kia kahne aapke khayaaloN ke behad inqalaabi khayaalaat haiN aapke... bahut khoob janab...

Sabhi ashaar behad khoob rahe... kafi umdaa kalaam huyi hai...
Is khoob kalaam par humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... bazm meiN aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez...
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«Reply #8 on: October 05, 2013, 08:53:49 AM »
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«Reply #9 on: October 05, 2013, 03:47:17 PM »
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Rakhta hun gham ka jee mein ghubaar lapet kar..
Qalam chalti hai in dino auzaar lapet kar..

Tham kar dekhun peeche, mujhe waqt kahan hai?
Main chalta hun paaw mein raftaar lapet kar..
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Footpath wale kya bune kambal ke khaab?
So lete hain chupchaap akhbaar lapet kar..

is ashaar per ek RAU banta hai,
waah nahi aah nikli hai ise padhker


Kabhi zindagi se tajurbe sikhenge hum bhi,
Ham bhi dekhenge kabhi dastaar lapet kar..
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Is gali se tum guzre to mehak utha zarra-zarra,
Kahan chal diye daaman me gulzaar lapet kar?
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Fursat mile to aake dekh dil ka ashiyaan,
Rakhta hun sine se tera pyaar lapet kar..
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
- Zaif  Winking



dekha jaye to har ashaar per RAU dena banta hai ,
lekin kuch bandishein hai , ek RAU ko hi har ashar per diya hua samjhiye
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«Reply #10 on: October 05, 2013, 03:54:28 PM »
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Rakhta hun gham ka jee mein ghubaar lapet kar..
Qalam chalti hai in dino auzaar lapet kar..

Tham kar dekhun peeche, mujhe waqt kahan hai?
Main chalta hun paaw mein raftaar lapet kar..

Footpath wale kya bune kambal ke khaab?
So lete hain chupchaap akhbaar lapet kar..

Kabhi zindagi se tajurbe sikhenge hum bhi,
Ham bhi dekhenge kabhi dastaar lapet kar..

Is gali se tum guzre to mehak utha zarra-zarra,
Kahan chal diye daaman me gulzaar lapet kar?

Fursat mile to aake dekh dil ka ashiyaan,
Rakhta hun sine se tera pyaar lapet kar..

- Zaif  Winking




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