......paani per kuch likhaa nahiN kaRte,,,

by laaiba on November 19, 2014, 12:14:43 PM
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reii.t per ghAr banaa nahiN kaRte
paani per kuch likhaa nahiN kaRte

khamshee mein nihaN jo hote hein
raa.z sab per khulaa nahiN kaRte

jo muhabbat se dil men bAs jaaye
ussko dil se judaa nahiN kaRte

kheii.l chahat kaa to niraalaa hai
maa.t mein bhi gilaa nahiN kaRte

kou.n   samjhe ga  dil ki baaton ko
sab se sab kuch kahaa nahiN kaRte
 
ash.q aankhon se beh hi jaane do
gham ko dil men rakhaa nahiN kaRte

!! laaiba shah!!
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«Reply #1 on: November 19, 2014, 12:20:53 PM »
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Mohtarma laaiba sahiba! salam

buhat khoobsurat peshkash hay... daad haazir hay...

ye misra hamen wazan men maaloom nahi ho raha.. may be umr ka taqaaza ho...

khamshee mein joH nihaN hote hein

baaki aap behter samajhti hen...

ek bar phir bharpoor daad k saath..

dua-go
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«Reply #2 on: November 19, 2014, 12:25:30 PM »
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aadaab  v b jee
shukriaa jaldi mein likha gaya ab dekhiye gaa pls Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: November 19, 2014, 12:26:29 PM »
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«Reply #4 on: November 19, 2014, 12:32:38 PM »
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jo muhabbat se dil men bAs jaaye
ussko dil se judaa nahiN kaRte
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
waah waah laaibaji
bahut khoob ghazal kahi hai aapne

ek rau ke saath dheron daaaaaaaaaaaaaad
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«Reply #5 on: November 19, 2014, 12:34:03 PM »
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shukriaa suresh g
shukriaa rau kaa Usual Smile
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«Reply #6 on: November 19, 2014, 12:35:42 PM »
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Quote from: laaiba on November 19, 2014, 12:14:43 PM

reii.t per ghAr banaa nahiN kaRte
paani per kuch likhaa nahiN kaRte

khamshee mein nihaN jo hote hein
raa.z sab per khulaa nahiN kaRte

jo muhabbat se dil men bAs jaaye
ussko dil se judaa nahiN kaRte

kheii.l chahat kaa to niraalaa hai
maa.t mein bhi gilaa nahiN kaRte

kou.n   samjhe ga  dil ki baaton ko
sab se sab kuch kahaa nahiN kaRte
 
ash.q aankhon se beh hi jaane do
gham ko dil men rakhaa nahiN kaRte

!! laaiba shah!!


wah wah wah icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower!
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«Reply #7 on: November 19, 2014, 12:38:06 PM »
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shukriaa shukriaa shukriaa sheba Usual Smile
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«Reply #8 on: November 19, 2014, 12:47:41 PM »
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reii.t per ghAr banaa nahiN kaRte
paani per kuch likhaa nahiN kaRte


kheii.l chahat kaa to niraalaa hai
maa.t mein bhi gilaa nahiN kaRte

kou.n   samjhe ga  dil ki baaton ko
sab se sab kuch kahaa nahiN kaRte
 
ash.q aankhon se beh hi jaane do
gham ko dil men rakhaa nahiN kaRte

Waaah waaah ek arse se baad apko padha hai
behtreen wohi andaz wohi gehrai lafzon mein

Daad qubool kijiye Rau ki haqdaar ghazal .

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«Reply #9 on: November 19, 2014, 12:54:51 PM »
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bohat shukriaa sahal g N shukriaa rau ke liye ,....
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«Reply #10 on: November 19, 2014, 02:13:28 PM »
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Quote from: laaiba on November 19, 2014, 12:14:43 PM

reii.t per ghAr banaa nahiN kaRte
paani per kuch likhaa nahiN kaRte

khamshee mein nihaN jo hote hein
raa.z sab per khulaa nahiN kaRte

jo muhabbat se dil men bAs jaaye
ussko dil se judaa nahiN kaRte

kheii.l chahat kaa to niraalaa hai
maa.t mein bhi gilaa nahiN kaRte

kou.n   samjhe ga  dil ki baaton ko
sab se sab kuch kahaa nahiN kaRte
 
ash.q aankhon se beh hi jaane do
gham ko dil men rakhaa nahiN kaRte

!! laaiba shah!!
Bahut Khoob.
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«Reply #11 on: November 19, 2014, 02:36:30 PM »
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beautiful ghazal dher saaree  daad
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«Reply #12 on: November 19, 2014, 02:40:27 PM »
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AGRACHE AAPKO MAINE KAM HI PARHA HAI MAGAR JUB BHI PARHTA HUN DIL BAGH BAGH HO JAATA HAI ...AAPKI SHAIRI KHOOB PARWAAN CHARH RAHI HAI ..ALLAH MAZEED NAWAZE ..SHANDAAR GHAZAL KAHI HAI AAPNE ....DAD O MUBARAK BAAD HAZIR HAI AAPKI GHAZAL PER ..
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«Reply #13 on: November 19, 2014, 02:55:30 PM »
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अति सुंदर गजल |  Applause Applause Clapping Smiley भले ही पानी मे कुछ लिख नही सकते
                                         पर हम पानी मे आग तो लगा सकते
             आर के रस्तोगी
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«Reply #14 on: November 19, 2014, 03:27:40 PM »
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Very nicely grafted & brilliantly composed
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