PAL.................(K_A)

by khamosh_aawaaz on August 01, 2009, 07:27:51 PM
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                    JAATE JAATE SITAMGAR KO APNAA BANAA DAALAA,
                    SHIDDAT BAAD PATHAR KO SHISHAA BANAA DAALAA,
                    
                    KIYAA THAA ROSHAN MEHFIL MERI JISNE KABHI,
                    APNI ANAA KI KHATIR USE MITAA DAALAA,
                    
                    SAMJHAA THA JISEY PIGHAL JAAYEGAA MOHABBAT MAIN,
                    AASHIYAANA MERAA OOSI NE JALAA DAALAA,
            
                    CHIRAAG JO ROSHAN KARTAA RAHAA ANDHERAA APNAA,
                    EK SHAAM TOOFAAN NE USE BUJHAA DAALAA,

                    THE WABASTAA JIS SE KHAWAAB MERE KHAMOSH,
                    OOSI SHAKHS  NE USKI TAABEER MITAA DAALAA,

                  
                    


                    
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«Reply #1 on: August 02, 2009, 06:06:07 AM »
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bahut achche khamosh bhai
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«Reply #2 on: August 02, 2009, 07:56:42 AM »
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Waah Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Khamosh ji
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«Reply #3 on: August 03, 2009, 11:14:33 AM »
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Bohot Khoob Khamosh Ji
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«Reply #4 on: August 03, 2009, 11:23:13 AM »
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bahut accha likha hai aapne khamosh ji
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«Reply #5 on: August 04, 2009, 11:00:18 AM »
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Quote from: -Saahil- on August 02, 2009, 06:06:07 AM
bahut achche khamosh bhai

THANX SAAHIL JI
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«Reply #6 on: August 04, 2009, 11:00:52 AM »
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Quote from: Sophi on August 02, 2009, 07:56:42 AM
Waah Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Khamosh ji

THANK U SOPHI JI
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«Reply #7 on: August 04, 2009, 11:01:20 AM »
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Quote from: @kaash on August 03, 2009, 09:30:50 AM
bahot umda likha hai KA ji,very nice

THANX KAASH JI
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«Reply #8 on: August 04, 2009, 11:02:00 AM »
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Quote from: Celmira on August 03, 2009, 11:14:33 AM
Bohot Khoob Khamosh Ji

SHUKRIYAA DR. SAHIBAA
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Quote from: poppoetry on August 03, 2009, 11:23:13 AM
bahut accha likha hai aapne khamosh ji

thanx popp ji
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«Reply #10 on: August 07, 2009, 03:15:46 PM »
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Wah Khamosh Ji
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«Reply #11 on: August 08, 2009, 12:31:16 PM »
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Quote from: SARVESH RASTOGI on August 07, 2009, 03:15:46 PM
Wah Khamosh Ji

THANX SR
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #13 on: April 11, 2010, 07:23:52 PM »
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Bahut Khub Khamosh Ji
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Wow Khamosh ji,bahut khoobsurat gazal pesh kiya aapne.mindblowing creation.keep it up.too good. Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause icon_thumleft
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