Pareshaan Hai Mera Dil, Meri Aankhen Bhi Hain Nam Kuchh Kuchh.....Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'

by Satish Shukla on May 29, 2011, 12:10:45 AM
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«Reply #15 on: June 06, 2011, 12:21:08 AM »
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Junaid Sahab,

Aapne jo comment mere matle par kiya hai, shukriya lafz
bahut chhota hai aur jo she'r mujhe nazr kiya hai utana
qabil bhi naheen hoon, is site par ab tak meri poori ghazal
bhee post naheeN ho payee hai aakhiree she'r aaj hee post
kiya hai maine kewal maqta post karna baaki hai.

Signature ka she'r bhi isee ghazal ka ek she'r hai
aur mera pahla khayal bhi..aur aaj ki post ka she'r
mere ab tak ke behatreen she'rs mein se ek. Takreeban
10 saal pahle ye ghazal chhap chuki hai. Teen-chaar saal
pahle Lucknow kee ek nashisht men ye ghazal padhee thi to
chaar-paaNch news papers meN is she'r ke doosre misre ko
nashisht kee report kee heading banaya tha, she'r aapki
nazr hai..

mere ehsaas par bhee chhaa gayee wahdaaniyat dekho
mujhe bhee aa rahee hai ab to khushboo-e-haram kuchh kuchh

Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'

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«Reply #16 on: June 06, 2011, 12:39:39 AM »
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Sheba Ji,

Jawaab dene aur pasand karne ke liye
bahut bahut shukriya.

Is ghazal ke aur she'r bhi isee site par
post kar chuka hoon, thodi mehnat karni
padegee ummeed hai woh bhi pasand aayenge.

Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'

 
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