Pareshaan Hai Mera Dil, Meri Aankhen Bhi Hain Nam Kuchh Kuchh.....Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'

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pareshaaN hai mera dil, meri aaNkheN bhi haiN nam kuchh kuchh
asar aNdaaz mujh par ho raha hai, tera gham kuchh kuchh

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«Reply #1 on: May 29, 2011, 12:25:45 AM »
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wah. Bhut khoob.
Bilkul ghalib style.
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«Reply #2 on: May 29, 2011, 10:16:15 AM »
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Bahut..bahut..Shukriya Imdad Bhai...

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«Reply #3 on: May 29, 2011, 10:35:53 AM »
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pareshaaN hai mera dil, meri aaNkheN bhi haiN nam kuchh kuchh
asar aNdaaz mujh par ho raha hai, tera gham kuchh kuchh

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«Reply #4 on: May 29, 2011, 10:37:17 AM »
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gud…
taalib e ilm na hua hume andaaz e bayan ka……
bujhta hua chiraag bhi bataa jata hai kuch kuch……!!!
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«Reply #5 on: May 29, 2011, 11:03:50 AM »
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sarfira ji,

jawab dene ke liye bahut baht shukriya..
kya khoob she'r kaha hai aapne..achchha laga.

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«Reply #6 on: May 29, 2011, 11:14:52 AM »
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Bahut..bahut Shukriya Anshumali ji,

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«Reply #7 on: May 29, 2011, 01:52:42 PM »
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naaaice one
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«Reply #8 on: May 29, 2011, 03:03:08 PM »
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khamosh aawaaz ji,

Thanks for your reply..

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«Reply #9 on: May 29, 2011, 04:51:15 PM »
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bht khoob sateesh ji...
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«Reply #10 on: May 29, 2011, 05:14:46 PM »
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manzil-e-ishq Ji,

tahe dil se Shukriya..jawab dene ke liye..

saath nibhate rahen jyada bore naheen karoonga..
ek she'r aur ek maqta hi bacha hai post karne ko
baki she'r is site men post kar chuka hoon.

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«Reply #11 on: May 31, 2011, 02:40:04 PM »
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Wah wah wah Satish Shukla Ji, maza aa gaya aapka sher paRhkar aur barjasta dil se ye aawaaz aaii:

Arooz-o-fun meiN likhta ja raha hai kya qalam kuchh kuchh
Tumhaare sher meiN dekha hai maiN ne dam-ba-dam kuchh kuchh

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pareshaaN hai mera dil, meri aaNkheN bhi haiN nam kuchh kuchh
asar aNdaaz mujh par ho raha hai, tera gham kuchh kuchh

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«Reply #12 on: May 31, 2011, 09:44:44 PM »
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Ansari Sahab,

khag(bird) hi jane khag ki bhasha, she'r ke jawab men
sawa sher kah diya aapne tabeeyat khush ho gayee.

Bahut bahut shukriya, jawab dene ke liye..

yoon hi saath dete rahiyega.

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«Reply #13 on: June 05, 2011, 04:56:12 PM »
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azeezam raqeem aadab o tasleemat ,,

wah kahen ya aah ,, allah allah kamal ka matla kaha hai apne .. ik nahi balke hazarah dad o mubarak baad ke mustahiq hain app .. is mahefil me bhr o arooz ka idrak jaane wale hazrat kaam hi hain .. apki maujodgi yaqeenan bazm ke liye faqr ka baaic hai ........apke mayari kalamo se istefadah hasil karne ka mauqa dete rahenge ... allah apko umr-e-nuh ata kare... apko parh ke be sahaqtah ye do misre zubaan se rawan ho gaaye .. matla hi kahiye ... apki nazr kar raha hon jo ke apki shaqsiyat pe mabni bhi hai,,,,


baad arse ke koi aisa sukhanwar dekha
humne darwesh ke kaase me samandar dekha ...


allah apko mazeed nawaze ...


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«Reply #14 on: June 05, 2011, 05:06:29 PM »
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pareshaaN hai mera dil, meri aaNkheN bhi haiN nam kuchh kuchh
asar aNdaaz mujh par ho raha hai, tera gham kuchh kuchh

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