PARI SI SUNDAR BAALA...........................................IFTAKHAR

by Iftakhar Ahmad on February 19, 2013, 04:43:24 AM
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Sabhi dostoN aur seniors ko mera aadaab,
Maine pehli baar ek hindi ghazal likhi hai, aapki khidmat meiN pesh kar raha huN, mulaaheza farmaaiyega.
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Madbhara    nayan    madhushaala
Wo     pari     si      sundar     baala


Nayan   to    uske     nayan   nahiN
Saakshaat      mad      ka      pyaala


Mitti     nahiN      hai     uska     tan
Pushp      ki       su-sajjit       maala



Saundarya   to    uska     aisa    hai
Oat-proat          karne          waala



Rang-roop dekh  rah  gaya awaak
Lag   gaya     mere     muNh   taala



Ab tak mann ko thaam rakha thaa
Lag    gai    mere     mann    jwaala


Uske       roop       ne       'Iftakhar'
Mantr-mugdh      kar      hi    daala


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«Reply #1 on: February 19, 2013, 05:21:46 AM »
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Hindi ghazal mein bahut khubsurat koshosh ki hai , Iftakhar saheb.
Sundar shabdon se saji ek khubsurat rachna hai . bahut mubarakbad
pesh hai .
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«Reply #2 on: February 19, 2013, 05:27:48 AM »
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bohut khoob ahmed bhai achi koshish hai daaad qubool kareN
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«Reply #3 on: February 19, 2013, 05:28:25 AM »
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Sabhi dostoN aur seniors ko mera aadaab,
Maine pehli baar ek hindi ghazal likhi hai, aapki khidmat meiN pesh kar raha huN, mulaaheza farmaaiyega.
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Madbhara    nayan    madhushaala
Wo     pari     si      sundar     baala


Nayan   to    uske     nayan   nahiN
Saakshaat      vish      ka      pyaala


Mitti     nahiN      hai     uska     tan
Pushp      ki       su-sajjit       maala



Saundarya   to    uska     aisa    hai
Oat-proat          karne          waala



Rang-roop dekh  rah  gaya awaak
Lag   gaya     mere     muNh   taala



Ab tak mann ko thaam rakha thaa
Lag    gai    mere     mann    jwaala


Uske       roop       ne       'Iftakhar'
Mantr-mugdh      kar      hi    daala





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«Reply #4 on: February 19, 2013, 05:48:40 AM »
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waah waah bahut khoob
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«Reply #5 on: February 19, 2013, 07:21:35 AM »
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Just Awesome composition iftakhar ji. Dheron daad
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«Reply #6 on: February 19, 2013, 11:25:41 AM »
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Ifteqaar Sahaab Aadaab!


Kia baat hai janab, badi hi dilnaseeN kalaam kahi hai...
Aapki hindi toH behad khoob hai... Usual Smile

Sundarta ka varnan behad upmatmak aur kavyatmak raha..
sabhi sher achche rahe... Usual Smile

Humari dheroN daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye.. Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye..
Shaad O aabaad rahiye..

Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile

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«Reply #7 on: February 19, 2013, 01:21:14 PM »
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bht bht sundar rachna Ahmad sahab
kamaal ki paribhaha vayakt ki hai aapne to
dher saari badhaiyan swikaar karen
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«Reply #8 on: February 19, 2013, 01:22:37 PM »
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bht bht sundar rachna Ahmad sahab
kamaal ki paribhaha vayakt ki hai aapne to
dher saari badhaiyan swikaar karen
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«Reply #9 on: February 19, 2013, 02:47:39 PM »
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bahut umda koshish rahi
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«Reply #10 on: February 19, 2013, 06:05:14 PM »
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Bahut khoob iftakhar bhai
aapne to kamaal kar diya..
itni suddha hindi me likha hai ki dil khush ho gaya.
mai aap ki taraf badh raha hun..aur aap meri taraf..(hindi)

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«Reply #11 on: February 19, 2013, 08:14:37 PM »
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Hindi ghazal mein bahut khubsurat koshosh ki hai , Iftakhar saheb.
Sundar shabdon se saji ek khubsurat rachna hai . bahut mubarakbad
pesh hai .
Bahut bahut shukriya Hasan saheb hausla afzaai ke liye.
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«Reply #12 on: February 19, 2013, 08:38:21 PM »
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bohut khoob ahmed bhai achi koshish hai daaad qubool kareN
Shukriya Aarish bhai.
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«Reply #13 on: February 20, 2013, 01:20:27 AM »
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #14 on: February 20, 2013, 11:08:28 AM »
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very nice
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