Pee raha hun... ~ Shoaib ~

by admani on February 28, 2014, 10:38:23 PM
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Haal kya poochte ho, bus jee raha hun
Tumhaari yaadon ko nichorr* ke, pee raha hun

Mere haathon mein sharaab dekh kar kyun ghabra gaye?
Jo zakham tum ne diye, woh bhar hi raha hun

Zamana be-wafai ka ilzaam deta hai mujhe
Tumhaari izzat ki khaatir, mein hont* see raha hun

Aye zaalim, meri wafai ka azam* tou dekho
Tumhari har yaad ke sadqay mein, aik ghoont pee raha hun

Merey peenay ke andaaz mein bus itna farq hai 'Shoaib'
Log khoon pee rahe hain, mein sharaab pee raha hun...


nichorr - squeeze
hont - lips
azam - commitment
safaayi - confession
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बहुत खूब...
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«Reply #3 on: March 01, 2014, 02:19:14 PM »
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good one shoaib ji.. khoooooob.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #4 on: March 01, 2014, 04:55:48 PM »
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Haal kya poochte ho, bus jee raha hun
Tumhaari yaadon ko nichorr* ke, pee raha hun

Mere haathon mein sharaab dekh kar kyun ghabra gaye?
Jo zakham tum ne diye, woh bhar hi raha hun

Zamana be-wafai ka ilzaam deta hai mujhe
Tumhaari izzat ki khaatir, mein hont* see raha hun

Aye zaalim, meri wafai ka azam* tou dekho
Tumhari har yaad ke sadqay mein, aik ghoont pee raha hun

Merey peenay ke andaaz mein bus itna farq hai 'Shoaib'
Log khoon pee rahe hain, mein sharaab pee raha hun...

nichorr - squeeze
hont - lips
azam - commitment
safaayi - confession
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«Reply #5 on: March 01, 2014, 08:12:30 PM »
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waah waah
bohat shukriya Usual Smile
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बहुत खूब...
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good one shoaib ji.. khoooooob.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #8 on: March 01, 2014, 08:35:58 PM »
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wah janaab khoob kahi, peete raho I mean jeete raho
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«Reply #9 on: March 01, 2014, 09:26:51 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Waaaaaaaaah shoaib ji... bahut hi achchi peshkash rahi... dheron dheron daaaaaaaad...
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«Reply #10 on: March 03, 2014, 05:18:18 PM »
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Good One.
Thankyou sir!
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wah janaab khoob kahi, peete raho I mean jeete raho
HAHA. Bohat shukriya Usual Smile
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«Reply #12 on: March 03, 2014, 05:19:36 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Waaaaaaaaah shoaib ji... bahut hi achchi peshkash rahi... dheron dheron daaaaaaaad...
Bohat bohat shukriya Aqsh jee Usual Smile
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