Qad mere saaye ka ..........................MKV

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Maine koshish to kee muskara dooN zara
Geet uske liye koi gaa dooN zara

Bhool jaaun jo usne kiya mere sang
Farz apna jo hai vo nibha dooN zara

Raah me chaar suu khaar bikhre hue
Uski raahoN se jaake hata dooN zara

Jo khataayeN huee waqt ka khel hai
Zakhm dil me chhupe jo dikha dooN zara

Qad mere saaye ka ghatta hi jaa raha
Aa rahee dopahar ye  bata dooN zara

Naam jisne muhabbat se rakkha ‘Chiragh’
Uski khaatir main khud ko mita dooN zara
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«Reply #1 on: February 25, 2014, 03:37:22 PM »
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Maine koshish to kee muskara dooN zara
Geet uske liye koi gaa dooN zara

Bhool jaaun jo usne kiya mere sang
Farz apna jo hai vo nibha dooN zara

Raah me chaar suu khaar bikhre hue
Uski raahoN se jaake hata dooN zara

Jo khataayeN huee waqt ka khel hai
Zakhm dil me chhupe jo dikha dooN zara

Qad mere saaye ka ghatta hi jaa raha
Aa rahee dopahar ye  bata dooN zara

Naam jisne muhabbat se rakkha ‘Chiragh’
Uski khaatir main khud ko mita dooN zara




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RAU IZ DUE


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«Reply #2 on: February 25, 2014, 04:01:41 PM »
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वाह....वाह....वाह....

बहुत ही बेहतरीन ग़ज़ल....

ढेरों दाद और दिली मुबारकबाद....

Qad mere saaye ka ghatta hi jaa raha
Aa rahee dopahar ye  bata dooN zara

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«Reply #3 on: February 25, 2014, 04:36:48 PM »
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Waah waah Mukesh ji.
'Qad mere saaye ka ....'. Kya kahne .
Khubsurat Ghazal hai.
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«Reply #4 on: February 25, 2014, 05:19:05 PM »
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«Reply #5 on: February 25, 2014, 07:38:38 PM »
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«Reply #6 on: February 25, 2014, 07:45:30 PM »
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«Reply #7 on: February 25, 2014, 08:38:46 PM »
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bahut khoob...... Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: February 25, 2014, 08:46:08 PM »
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Maine koshish to kee muskara dooN zara
Geet uske liye koi gaa dooN zara
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Bhool jaaun jo usne kiya mere sang
Farz apna jo hai vo nibha dooN zara
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Raah me chaar suu khaar bikhre hue
Uski raahoN se jaake hata dooN zara
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Jo khataayeN huee waqt ka khel hai
Zakhm dil me chhupe jo dikha dooN zara
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Qad mere saaye ka ghatta hi jaa raha
Aa rahee dopahar ye  bata dooN zara
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Naam jisne muhabbat se rakkha ‘Chiragh’
Uski khaatir main khud ko mita dooN zara

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wah wah wah bahut khoob icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower!
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«Reply #9 on: February 25, 2014, 11:00:16 PM »
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Maine koshish to kee muskara dooN zara
Geet uske liye koi gaa dooN zara

Bhool jaaun jo usne kiya mere sang
Farz apna jo hai vo nibha dooN zara

Raah me chaar suu khaar bikhre hue
Uski raahoN se jaake hata dooN zara

Jo khataayeN huee waqt ka khel hai
Zakhm dil me chhupe jo dikha dooN zara

Qad mere saaye ka ghatta hi jaa raha
Aa rahee dopahar ye  bata dooN zara

Naam jisne muhabbat se rakkha ‘Chiragh’
Uski khaatir main khud ko mita dooN zara



Waah Waah Waah....Kya Kehne..

Bahut Khooob Mukesh jee..

Qad mere saaye ka ghatta hi jaa raha
Aa rahee dopahar ye  bata dooN zara


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«Reply #10 on: February 25, 2014, 11:23:56 PM »
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waah waah waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah, Mukesh bhai, khoobsoorat ghazal, bahut khoob, maza aa gaya padh kar, khaas taur pe aakhir ke donoN sher:

Qad mere saaye ka ghatta hi jaa raha
Aa rahee dopahar ye  bata dooN zara

Naam jisne muhabbat se rakkha ‘Chiragh’
Uski khaatir main khud ko mita dooN zara

DheroN daad aur ek Rau meri taraf se qubool kareN.
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«Reply #11 on: February 25, 2014, 11:47:16 PM »
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Maine koshish to kee muskara dooN zara
Geet uske liye koi gaa dooN zara

Bhool jaaun jo usne kiya mere sang
Farz apna jo hai vo nibha dooN zara
Applause Applause Applause Applause

Raah me chaar suu khaar bikhre hue
Uski raahoN se jaake hata dooN zara

Jo khataayeN huee waqt ka khel hai
Zakhm dil me chhupe jo dikha dooN zara

Qad mere saaye ka ghatta hi jaa raha
Aa rahee dopahar ye  bata dooN zara
Applause Applause Applause Applause

Naam jisne muhabbat se rakkha ‘Chiragh’
Uski khaatir main khud ko mita dooN zara



bahot khoob mkv bhai Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #12 on: February 26, 2014, 12:05:46 AM »
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bhut hi badiya bhut hi khooob sir.......padhkar maja aya!!!
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«Reply #13 on: February 26, 2014, 01:30:31 AM »
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Maine koshish to kee muskara dooN zara
Geet uske liye koi gaa dooN zara

Bhool jaaun jo usne kiya mere sang
Farz apna jo hai vo nibha dooN zara

Raah me chaar suu khaar bikhre hue
Uski raahoN se jaake hata dooN zara

Jo khataayeN huee waqt ka khel hai
Zakhm dil me chhupe jo dikha dooN zara

Qad mere saaye ka ghatta hi jaa raha
Aa rahee dopahar ye  bata dooN zara

Naam jisne muhabbat se rakkha ‘Chiragh’
Uski khaatir main khud ko mita dooN zara





Bahut Hi Khoob.!!
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«Reply #14 on: February 26, 2014, 02:23:28 AM »
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Maine koshish to kee muskara dooN zara
Geet uske liye koi gaa dooN zara

Bhool jaaun jo usne kiya mere sang
Farz apna jo hai vo nibha dooN zara

Raah me chaar suu khaar bikhre hue
Uski raahoN se jaake hata dooN zara

Jo khataayeN huee waqt ka khel hai
Zakhm dil me chhupe jo dikha dooN zara

Qad mere saaye ka ghatta hi jaa raha
Aa rahee dopahar ye  bata dooN zara

Naam jisne muhabbat se rakkha ‘Chiragh’
Uski khaatir main khud ko mita dooN zara

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