Qareeb aaou to deykhoon main: kahaan par kyaa hai?:Ghazals

abdbundeli

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Nazar uthhaaou to deykhoon main: wahaan par kyaa hai?
Qareeb aaou to deykhoon main: kahaan par kyaa hai?

Zindagee bhar, nigaah khojatee rahee hai jo;
Mujhey bataaou woh wahaan, to, yahaan par kyaa hai?

Kahaan chaley ho: raat saanwalee salonee hai?
Chup rahogey: na bataaougey zubaan par kyaa hai?

Tum sey, waisey bhi, chhupaa kyaa hai, jo ki, ho dil mein:
Poochhatey fir bhee baarahaa, ki, rawaan par kyaa hai?

Sabukarawee yeh sabaa, aa rahee hai kyaa ley kar?
Yuun to, zaahir hai shafaq surkh: nihaan par kyaa hai?

Kiskey kahney sey, yeh raanaaiyaan huyeen hain ayaan?
Uskee uuree mein numaayaan hai: bayaan par kyaa hai?

Mashriqee jaw mein bahr-e-zeest ki sadaayen hain:
Noujawaanee hai beymisaal, jawaan par kyaa hai?

Saafgoyi key bahaaney, 'abd', kahogey kyaa?
Khwaab khwaanee to nazariyaa hai: dawaan par kyaa hai?

- abd bundeli


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ParwaaZ

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Re: Qareeb aaou to deykhoon main: kahaan par kyaa hai?

«Reply #1 on: August 31, 2010, 05:35:08 PM »

Abd Bundeli Jee Aadaab O tasleemat"

Aapki nayi gazal per nazar gayi dekhe hai kia khushnumaa samaa bandha hai....

Quote from: abdbundeli on August 31, 2010, 02:44:05 PM

Nazar uthhaaou to deykhoon main: wahaan par kyaa hai?
Qareeb aaou to deykhoon main: kahaan par kyaa hai?

Waah Jee Apne aap meiN dono misare khoob rahe... Aur matla bhi achcha bana hai... Daad

Zindagee bhar, nigaah khojatee rahee hai jo;
Mujhey bataaou woh wahaan, to, yahaan par kyaa hai?

Masha Allah Bahut khoob..... Aik gehrai hai .... Daad janab

Tum sey, waisey bhi, chhupaa kyaa hai, jo ki, ho dil mein:
Poochhatey fir bhee baarahaa, ki, rawaan par kyaa hai?

Achcha Sher hai Janab, Par hume yahaaN rawaan Kafiyaa gairmunaseeb sa use hua lag raha hai...

Kiskey kahney sey, yeh raanaaiyaan huyeen hain ayaan?
Uskee uuree mein numaayaan hai: bayaan par kyaa hai?

Masha Allah bahur khoob daad janab....

Mashriqee jaw mein bahr-e-zeest ki sadaayen hain:
Noujawaanee hai beymisaal, jawaan par kyaa hai?

Behad khoob tanz kiya hai janab.... Daad..

Saafgoyi key bahaaney, 'abd', kahogey kyaa?
Khwaab khwaanee to nazariyaa hai: dawaan par kyaa hai?

- abd bundeli

Baut khoob janab Maqta bhi khoob raha daad....

Aik achchi aur behad khub kalaam per dil se daad Janab.....

Likhate rahiye.....
Khush rahiye......
Khuda hafez......


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Rajesh Harish

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Re: Qareeb aaou to deykhoon main: kahaan par kyaa hai?

«Reply #2 on: August 31, 2010, 10:20:20 PM »

Bahut khoob Abd Ji


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abdbundeli

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Re: Qareeb aaou to deykhoon main: kahaan par kyaa hai?

«Reply #3 on: September 01, 2010, 02:25:39 PM »

Quote from: ParwaaZ on August 31, 2010, 05:35:08 PM

Abd Bundeli Jee Aadaab O tasleemat"

Aapki nayi gazal per nazar gayi dekhe hai kia khushnumaa samaa bandha hai....

Aik achchi aur behad khub kalaam per dil se daad Janab.....

Likhate rahiye.....
Khush rahiye......
Khuda hafez......

Thanks a lot, ParwaaZ ji!
Is sher ko, is tarah padhhiyegaa to rawaan kaa isteymaal gairmunaasib nahin lageygaa!
Tum sey, waisey bhi, chhupaa kyaa hai, jo ki, ho dil mein:
Poochhatey fir bhee baarahaa, ki, 'rawaan, par, kyaa hai?'

Yani,
'Waisey bhi, jo ki dil mein ho, tumsey (aisaa)kyaa chhupaa huaa hai! (Dil mein kuchh na kuchh to taazindagee hi rawaan rahtaa hai!)
'(Iskey ba'ad bhi) tum baarahaa poochhtey ho, ki, wahaan par kyaa rawaan hai?'

Yuo're taking so much interest in my poems: naturally, pleases me a lot!
- abd bundeli


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abdbundeli

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Re: Qareeb aaou to deykhoon main: kahaan par kyaa hai?

«Reply #4 on: September 01, 2010, 04:28:26 PM »

Quote from: Rajesh Harish on August 31, 2010, 10:20:20 PM

Bahut khoob Abd Ji

Thanks Rajesh ji!

- abd bunde


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