Raahi Khoob Na Rahber Acche

by suman59 on August 31, 2012, 10:15:54 PM
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Raahi khoob na rehbhar accha
jo de saat vo dilbar accha

nakli phoolon ki sejhon se
kanton ka hai bistar accha

nazron mein mehrayee ho to,
lagta hai her manzer accha

jis ghar mein ho jhagde herdam
us ghar se toh khandhar accha

jhoot ki meeti nadhiyo se to
sach ka kadva sagar accha

mandir-masjid sab ghar uske
per lage vo beghar accha

soorat se kya lena dena
seerat ka ho zewar accha
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«Reply #1 on: August 31, 2012, 11:17:58 PM »
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wah wah, bahut khoob
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«Reply #2 on: September 01, 2012, 01:05:37 AM »
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Bahut behatrin ashaar pesh kiye hai aapne.
acche khayaalon se labrej
wah wah wah
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«Reply #3 on: September 01, 2012, 02:28:51 AM »
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bahut acha likha hai....aap ki lekhan shelly bahut achi hai....aap ko hamari taraf se badhayi....
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«Reply #4 on: September 01, 2012, 04:42:51 AM »
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bahut bahut bahut badhiya peskas suman ji.. Usual Smile
Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: September 01, 2012, 05:15:43 AM »
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Raahi khoob na rehbhar accha
jo de saat vo dilver accha

nakli phoolon ki sejhon se
kanton ka hai bistar accha

nazron mein mehrayee ho to,
lagta hai her manzer accha

jis ghar mein ho jhagde herdam
us ghar se toh khandhar accha

jhoot ki meeti nadhiyo se to
sach ka kadva sagar accha

mandir-masjid sab ghar uske
per lage vo beghar accha

soorat se kya lena dena
seerat ka ho jewar accha

Waah Waaah Suman ji bahut simple par bahut dilkash qalaam dheron daad qabool kijiye . Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #6 on: September 01, 2012, 07:00:23 AM »
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bohut hi khoobsurti se in harfoon ko lafzon mein pinaya hai...mubarak ho
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«Reply #7 on: September 01, 2012, 07:14:19 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut bahut khoob likha hai Suman ji... bahut khoob,...!!!
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«Reply #8 on: September 01, 2012, 10:31:58 AM »
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Suman Jee Aadaab!


Waah jee kia baat hai bade hi khoob kalaam kah rahi
haiN aap... aik ke bad aik dhamakedaar kalaam ... Usual Smile

Kafi umda aur behad khoob ahsaas O khayaal kahe hai
jee... Sabhi ashaar behad khoob rahe... Usual Smile

Is khoob kalaam par humari dheroN dili daad hazir hai..
Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...

Shaad O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile



Raahi khoob na rehbhar accha
jo de saat vo dilb
er accha

Kia baat hai bahut khoob... Zindagi ke safar
meiN dilbar ka muqaam raahi yaa koi rehbar hi pata hai.. Usual Smile
 


nakli phoolon ki sejhon se
kanton ka hai bistar accha

WaaH masha Allaah kia baat kahi hai behad umdaa..
bahut khoob jee aise sher behad kam kalam se nikalte hai..  


nazron mein mehrayee ho to,
lagta hai her manzer accha

Waah jee waah sahiN farmayaa daad daad  

jis ghar mein ho jhagde herdam
us ghar se toh khandhar accha

Hmmmm Aray aise ghar se toH padosiyoN ke
hone ahsaas rahta hai.. tongue3


jhoot ki meeti nadhiyo se to
sach ka kadva sagar accha

Bahut khoob behad sahiN ... Usual Smile

mandir-masjid sab ghar uske
per lage vo beghar accha

Bahut umdaa jee bahut khoob daad daad daad.. Usual Smile

soorat se kya lena dena
seerat ka ho jewar accha

Kia kahne waah jee waah bahut umdaa.. Usual Smile

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«Reply #9 on: September 01, 2012, 10:33:04 AM »
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Raahi khoob na rehbhar accha
jo de saat vo dilver accha

nakli phoolon ki sejhon se
kanton ka hai bistar accha

nazron mein mehrayee ho to,
lagta hai her manzer accha

jis ghar mein ho jhagde herdam
us ghar se toh khandhar accha

jhoot ki meeti nadhiyo se to
sach ka kadva sagar accha

mandir-masjid sab ghar uske
per lage vo beghar accha

soorat se kya lena dena
seerat ka ho jewar accha



veriiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii-naaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaice maine aapkii seerat dekh lii Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #10 on: September 01, 2012, 09:57:40 PM »
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bahot bahot khoob Suman ji..hamesha ki tarah
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«Reply #11 on: September 02, 2012, 08:37:23 AM »
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wah wah, bahut khoob

shukriya nandbahu jee
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«Reply #12 on: September 02, 2012, 08:42:32 AM »
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Bahut behatrin ashaar pesh kiye hai aapne.
acche khayaalon se labrej
wah wah wah

shukriya mkv jee
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«Reply #13 on: September 02, 2012, 08:43:14 AM »
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bahut acha likha hai....aap ki lekhan shelly bahut achi hai....aap ko hamari taraf se badhayi....

bahut bahut shukriya gaytri jee
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«Reply #14 on: September 02, 2012, 08:43:49 AM »
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bahut bahut bahut badhiya peskas suman ji.. Usual Smile
Applause Applause

shukriya Touhid  jee
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