RAASTA KYON RO DIYA - SARVESH RASTOGI

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«Reply #30 on: July 22, 2009, 07:04:38 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause

bahot bahot khoob likha hai Sarvesh ji

bahot achi ghazal likhi hai aapne


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«Reply #31 on: July 22, 2009, 07:40:25 AM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya Bundeli Saheb

Rastogi ji, you're most welcome! Aapkee beyhtareen gazal key 'sammaan' mein, peish hain, yah chaar laaineyn:

Ham naheen jaantey, ham ney kyaa kho diyaa?
Rang un kaa charhhaa thaa, wahee dho diyaa!
Ab bhataktey hain dar-dar unhain khojtey:
Deykh ahad-o-talab: raastah ro diyaa!

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«Reply #32 on: September 01, 2009, 01:36:55 AM »
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Shukriya Bundeli Saheb
Aapke bol mere liye Mantra se kam nahin
Thanks a lot
SARVESH RASTOGI
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«Reply #33 on: September 01, 2009, 06:37:27 AM »
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Shukriya Bundeli Saheb
Aapke bol mere liye Mantra se kam nahin
Thanks a lot
SARVESH RASTOGI
Your sweet words speak a lot about the grand person that dwells with-in your self. May HE B L E S S you with all that you ever desire! My Best Wishes Are Always With You!
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«Reply #34 on: September 01, 2009, 06:45:07 AM »
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sarvesh ji
aapne kamaal kar diya
itna accha likha hai ki bas mat poochein
Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #35 on: September 01, 2009, 09:38:17 AM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya Grimreaper Saheb
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«Reply #36 on: February 18, 2010, 10:40:08 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #37 on: February 19, 2010, 09:13:06 AM »
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Bahut bahut Khooob Sarveshji..

Humesha Ki tarah Lajwaab!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bahut Ache Abd Saheb Ji.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #38 on: February 19, 2010, 12:24:13 PM »
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Bahut bahut Khooob Sarveshji..

Humesha Ki tarah Lajwaab!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bahut Ache Abd Saheb Ji.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


Thanks a lot, khwaish ji!

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«Reply #39 on: February 19, 2010, 12:46:28 PM »
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PAAON KI PEEDA SAMAJH KAR RAASTA KYON RO DIYA
GHAAO HI TO AASRA THE GHAAO KO KYON DHO DIYA

EK ARSE KHANZARON KI HI FASAL HOGI YAHAN
HAI ZAALIM BAAGWAN YE BEEJ KAISA BO DIYA

MAAL LUTATA DEKH KAR AB BANTANE KI SOCH LI
AAH MERE RAHNUMA YE KYA KIYA YE KYON KIYA

KAUN SI SAAZISH HUI KUCHH BHI SAMAJH PAYE NA HUM
NAAV KE HI NAAVIKON NE BEECH DHAAR DUBO DIYA

ZINDAGI BHAR SIRF YE HI GHAM HAME TADPAYEGA
JABKI MANZIL SAAMNE THI HUMNE KYON DUM KHO DIYA

SARVESH RASTOGI
Phone 9810391523
sarveshrastogi1960@yahoo.co.uk


Bohot Khoob Sarvesh Ji
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«Reply #40 on: February 19, 2010, 12:47:26 PM »
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Rastogi ji, you're most welcome! Aapkee beyhtareen gazal key 'sammaan' mein, peish hain, yah chaar laaineyn:

Ham naheen jaantey, ham ney kyaa kho diyaa?
Rang un kaa charhhaa thaa, wahee dho diyaa!
Ab bhataktey hain dar-dar unhain khojtey:
Deykh ahad-o-talab: raastah ro diyaa!

                             - abd bundeli



Beautiful lines Babu Ji
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«Reply #41 on: February 19, 2010, 12:55:51 PM »
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Beautiful lines Babu Ji

Thanks a lot, bitia Talat!

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«Reply #42 on: February 22, 2010, 10:54:23 AM »
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Lot of thanks and welcome for very nice clapping Sheba Ji
Sorry for delay in acknowledgement
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«Reply #43 on: February 22, 2010, 11:20:05 AM »
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Bohat Achche Sarwesh Ji,.
Abd Ji,.

Mashallah Bohat Achcha Laga Pardhke,.



Ek Numaaish Zindagi Se Karke,.
Hasraton Ko Saare Mitaa Diya,.

Roshni Tez Karni Chahi Maine,.
Aur Galti Se Charaag Bujhaa Diya,.

Kaun Rakhta Hai Saath Azaad Parindon Ko,.
Maine Apni Tamanna Zaahir Ki, Mujhe Sabne Urdaa Diya,.

Kaun Apna Kaun Paraya, Halaat Ne Mujhe Parakhna Sikhaa Diya,.

Ab Kaun Aayega Dil Mein Mere,.
Darwaaza Iska Maine Bandh Karaa Diya,.

-Azeem-
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«Reply #44 on: February 22, 2010, 11:30:26 AM »
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Ek Numaaish Zindagi Se Karke,.
Hasraton Ko Saare Mitaa Diya,.

Roshni Tez Karni Chahi Maine,.
Aur Galti Se Charaag Bujhaa Diya,.

Kaun Rakhta Hai Saath Azaad Parindon Ko,.
Maine Apni Tamanna Zaahir Ki, Mujhe Sabne Urdaa Diya,.

Kaun Apna Kaun Paraya, Halaat Ne Mujhe Parakhna Sikhaa Diya,.

Ab Kaun Aayega Dil Mein Mere,.
Darwaaza Iska Maine Bandh Karaa Diya,.

-Azeem-

Bahaut dard bhara likha hai Azeem bhai..dil ko choote gaye alfaaz...
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