RAASTA KYON RO DIYA - SARVESH RASTOGI

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PAAON KI PEEDA SAMAJH KAR RAASTA KYON RO DIYA
GHAAO HI TO AASRA THE GHAAO KO KYON DHO DIYA

EK ARSE KHANZARON KI HI FASAL HOGI YAHAN
HAI ZAALIM BAAGWAN YE BEEJ KAISA BO DIYA

MAAL LUTATA DEKH KAR AB BANTANE KI SOCH LI
AAH MERE RAHNUMA YE KYA KIYA YE KYON KIYA

KAUN SI SAAZISH HUI KUCHH BHI SAMAJH PAYE NA HUM
NAAV KE HI NAAVIKON NE BEECH DHAAR DUBO DIYA

ZINDAGI BHAR SIRF YE HI GHAM HAME TADPAYEGA
JABKI MANZIL SAAMNE THI HUMNE KYON DUM KHO DIYA

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«Reply #1 on: July 17, 2009, 01:40:58 PM »
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PAAON KI PEEDA SAMAJH KAR RAASTA KYON RO DIYA
GHAAO HI TO AASRA THE GHAAO KO KYON DHO DIYA

EK ARSE KHANZARON KI HI FASAL HOGI YAHAN
HAI ZAALIM BAAGBAN YE BEEJ KAISA BO DIYA

MAAL LUTATA DEKH KAR AB BANTANE KI SOCH LI
AAH MERE RAHNUMA YE KYA KIYA YE KYON KIYA

KAUN SI SAAZISH HUI KUCHH BHI SAMAJH PAYE NA HUM
NAAV KE HI NAAVIKON NE BEECH DHAAR DUBO DIYA

ZINDAGI BHAR SIRF YE HI GHAM HAME TADPAYEGA
JABKI MANZIL SAAMNE THI HUMNE KYON DUM KHO DIYA

SARVESH RASTOGI
Phone 9810391523
sarveshrastogi1960@yahoo.co.uk

Baaqiyee bahut hee zordaar gazal hai aapkee! Bahut hi khoob!
         - abd bundeli
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«Reply #2 on: July 17, 2009, 04:18:24 PM »
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Bahut Khoob Sarvesh Ji
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«Reply #3 on: July 17, 2009, 04:49:59 PM »
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Waah Rastogi ji...

ghaao hi yaad the us safar ki, jisme sara jivan guzaar diya,
bas chune wale the manzil ko, ki maanjhi ne manjhdhar me utaar diya.
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«Reply #4 on: July 17, 2009, 04:53:24 PM »
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 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smileywah wah wah kaya baat hai sarvesh ji ... bahoot khoob!!

ajj kal dil ke dard ko paraye he samjhte hai
apne to hume bhavuk kah, doosro ke sung hanste hai

Mrigchika si yah khushia aor khud ko humara kahne wale
Pass aa aa kar, dil dukha, apne raste badalate hai


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«Reply #5 on: July 17, 2009, 10:13:56 PM »
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Wah Wah Sarvesh Ji! Bahut achhi Ghazal likhi hai aapne!  Bahut Bahut khoob! Applause


Pooja Ji... Aapne bhi bahut achha likha hai! Applause
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«Reply #6 on: July 17, 2009, 10:44:54 PM »
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Wah bahut khoob likha aapne Sarvesh ji,beautiful gazal,really touching. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: July 18, 2009, 12:45:11 AM »
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Baaqiyee bahut hee zordaar gazal hai aapkee! Bahut hi khoob!
         - abd bundeli

Tahedil se shukriya Bundeli Saheb
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«Reply #8 on: July 18, 2009, 12:59:01 AM »
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Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Sarvesh Ji,...Bahoot hi gehri hai aapki iss Ghazal mea.. bahoot Khoob!

Waah Pooja Di.. bahoot bahoot Khoob!

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«Reply #9 on: July 18, 2009, 01:22:51 AM »
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Bahut Khoob Sarvesh Ji

Shukriya Rajesh Ji
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«Reply #10 on: July 18, 2009, 02:09:30 AM »
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Waah Rastogi ji...

ghaao hi yaad the us safar ki, jisme sara guzaar diya,
bas chune wale the manzil ko, ki maanjhi ne manjhdhar me utaar diya.


Shukriya Vikk Ji
and thanks for nice sher
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«Reply #11 on: July 18, 2009, 03:00:30 AM »
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bahut bahut achche sarvesh bhai kya kahoon aapki prashansha main...... hindi ghazal writers main aap sach main agrani hai
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«Reply #12 on: July 18, 2009, 04:16:01 AM »
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Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smileywah wah wah kaya baat hai sarvesh ji ... bahoot khoob!!

ajj kal dil ke dard ko paraye he samjhte hai
apne to hume bhavuk kah, doosro ke sung hanste hai

Mrigchika si yah khushia aor khud ko humara kahne wale
Pass aa aa kar, dil dukha, apne raste badalate hai




Bahut bahut shukriya Pooja Ji
Very very nice addition by you
So grateful, thanks again
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«Reply #13 on: July 18, 2009, 05:34:40 AM »
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bhut khoob sarvesh sahab
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«Reply #14 on: July 18, 2009, 06:07:30 AM »
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Bahoot khoob sarvesh ji...
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