RAASTAA JAB TERAA...............................................SAINI

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Raastaa   jab   teraa  judaa   dekhaa.
Hamne  bhee   raastaa  nayaa   dekhaa.

Raat    bhar  jisko  jaagtaa   dekhaa.
SaazishonN  meN  hee  mubtilaa dekhaa.

Kitnaa   befiqr   ek    muflis    hai.
Jab bhee dekhaa to ghar khulaa dekhaa.

Bin  jahez  aa  gayee  bahoo ghar meN.
Saas   bole   are   ye   kyaa  dekhaa.

Aaj   betee   chalee   madarse    jab.
Uskee  aankhoN  meN  khauf saa dekhaa.

Aankh  kholee  hai  jab se dunyaa meN.
Khud  ko  khud  khafaa-khafaa  dekhaa.

Zabt  karnaa  n  too  kabhee  seekhaa.
Jab  milaa  haath  meN chhuraa dekhaa.

Dostee   kaa   bhare  jo  dam  mujhse.
Uskaa   dushman  se  raabtaa   dekhaa.

Aaj  hairaan    hai   bahut   ‘saini’.
Waqt   esaa  naheeN   buraa    dekhaa.

Dr. Surendra Saini


रास्ता    जब  तेरा जुदा देखा ।
हमने    भी रास्ता नया देखा ।।

रात  भर  जिसको जागता देखा ।
साज़िशों  में  ही मुब्तिला देखा ।।

कितना  बेफ़िक्र एक मुफ़्लिस है ।
जब भी देखा तो घर खुला देखा ।।

बिन जहेज़ आ गयी  बहु घर में ।
सास  बोली  अरे ये  क्या देखा ।।

आज   बेटी   चली मदरसे जब ।
उसकी आँखों में  ख़ोफ़ सा देखा ।।

आँख  खोली है जब से दुन्या में ।
ख़ुद को ख़ुद से ख़फ़ा-ख़फ़ा देखा ।।

ज़ब्त करना न  तू  कभी सीखा ।
जब  मिला  हाथ  में छुरा देखा ।।

दोस्ती  का  भरे  जो दम मुझसे ।
उसका  दुश्मन  से राबता  देखा ।।

आज   हैरान   है बहुत 'सैनी '।
वक़्त   एसा   नहीं  बुरा देखा ।।

डाo सुरेन्द्र सैनी
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«Reply #1 on: January 16, 2013, 10:23:19 AM »
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beautifully written saini sir. dili mubarakbad qubool kare
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«Reply #2 on: January 16, 2013, 10:51:12 AM »
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Raastaa   jab   teraa  judaa   dekhaa.
Hamne  bhee   raastaa  nayaa   dekhaa.
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Raat    bhar  jisko  jaagtaa   dekhaa.
SaazishonN  meN  hee  mubtilaa dekhaa.

Kitnaa   befiqr   ek    muflis    hai.
Jab bhee dekhaa to ghar khulaa dekhaa.
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Bin  jahez  aa  gayee  bahoo ghar meN.
Saas   bole   are   ye   kyaa  dekhaa.
 Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard
Aaj   betee   chalee   madarse    jab.
Uskee  aankhoN  meN  khauf saa dekhaa.

Aankh  kholee  hai  jab se dunyaa meN.
Khud  ko  khud  khafaa-khafaa  dekhaa.
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Zabt  karnaa  n  too  kabhee  seekhaa.
Jab  milaa  haath  meN chhuraa dekhaa.
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Dostee   kaa   bhare  jo  dam  mujhse.
Uskaa   dushman  se  raabtaa   dekhaa.
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Aaj  hairaan    hai   bahut   ‘saini’.
Waqt   esaa  naheeN   buraa    dekhaa.

Dr. Surendra Saini


रास्ता    जब  तेरा जुदा देखा ।
हमने    भी रास्ता नया देखा ।।

रात  भर  जिसको जागता देखा ।
साज़िशों  में  ही मुब्तिला देखा ।।

कितना  बेफ़िक्र एक मुफ़्लिस है ।
जब भी देखा तो घर खुला देखा ।।

बिन जहेज़ आ गयी  बहु घर में ।
सास  बोली  अरे ये  क्या देखा ।।

आज   बेटी   चली मदरसे जब ।
उसकी आँखों में  ख़ोफ़ सा देखा ।।

आँख  खोली है जब से दुन्या में ।
ख़ुद को ख़ुद से ख़फ़ा-ख़फ़ा देखा ।।

ज़ब्त करना न  तू  कभी सीखा ।
जब  मिला  हाथ  में छुरा देखा ।।

दोस्ती  का  भरे  जो दम मुझसे ।
उसका  दुश्मन  से राबता  देखा ।।

आज   हैरान   है बहुत 'सैनी '।
वक़्त   एसा   नहीं  बुरा देखा ।।

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«Reply #3 on: January 16, 2013, 10:59:10 AM »
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«Reply #4 on: January 16, 2013, 11:00:21 AM »
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bahut khoob, jabardast, kya baat hai, subhaanallah aur n jaane kya kya
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«Reply #6 on: January 16, 2013, 11:18:51 AM »
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Saini Sahaab Aadaab!


Behad khoob kalaam kahi hai janab.... bade umdaa aur gehre khayaaloN
ko khoob lafz diye hai jee... Usual Smile


Badi sanjeeda aur umdaa kalaam rahi... is kalaam par humari dheroN
dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...


Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda hafez... Usual Smile
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«Reply #7 on: January 16, 2013, 11:54:13 AM »
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waaaah waaaah sainiji.... bahut khub....

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«Reply #8 on: January 16, 2013, 12:10:59 PM »
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wah wah wah bohut khoob sir bohut pyari ghazal hai
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«Reply #9 on: January 16, 2013, 12:20:55 PM »
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Raastaa   jab   teraa  judaa   dekhaa.
Hamne  bhee   raastaa  nayaa   dekhaa.

Raat    bhar  jisko  jaagtaa   dekhaa.
SaazishonN  meN  hee  mubtilaa dekhaa.

Kitnaa   befiqr   ek    muflis    hai.
Jab bhee dekhaa to ghar khulaa dekhaa.

Bin  jahez  aa  gayee  bahoo ghar meN.
Saas   bole   are   ye   kyaa  dekhaa.

Aaj   betee   chalee   madarse    jab.
Uskee  aankhoN  meN  khauf saa dekhaa.

Aankh  kholee  hai  jab se dunyaa meN.
Khud  ko  khud  khafaa-khafaa  dekhaa.

Zabt  karnaa  n  too  kabhee  seekhaa.
Jab  milaa  haath  meN chhuraa dekhaa.

Dostee   kaa   bhare  jo  dam  mujhse.
Uskaa   dushman  se  raabtaa   dekhaa.

Aaj  hairaan    hai   bahut   ‘saini’.
Waqt   esaa  naheeN   buraa    dekhaa.

Dr. Surendra Saini


रास्ता    जब  तेरा जुदा देखा ।
हमने    भी रास्ता नया देखा ।।

रात  भर  जिसको जागता देखा ।
साज़िशों  में  ही मुब्तिला देखा ।।

कितना  बेफ़िक्र एक मुफ़्लिस है ।
जब भी देखा तो घर खुला देखा ।।

बिन जहेज़ आ गयी  बहु घर में ।
सास  बोली  अरे ये  क्या देखा ।।

आज   बेटी   चली मदरसे जब ।
उसकी आँखों में  ख़ोफ़ सा देखा ।।

आँख  खोली है जब से दुन्या में ।
ख़ुद को ख़ुद से ख़फ़ा-ख़फ़ा देखा ।।

ज़ब्त करना न  तू  कभी सीखा ।
जब  मिला  हाथ  में छुरा देखा ।।

दोस्ती  का  भरे  जो दम मुझसे ।
उसका  दुश्मन  से राबता  देखा ।।

आज   हैरान   है बहुत 'सैनी '।
वक़्त   एसा   नहीं  बुरा देखा ।।

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waah lajawab ghazal sir ,...bohat c daad,..............
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«Reply #10 on: January 16, 2013, 12:31:12 PM »
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Dr. Saheb,

Behad gehre khayaal, aur pyaari adayigi
pyaari peshkash rahi aapki, hamari dili daad khubool kijeye.
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«Reply #11 on: January 16, 2013, 12:54:13 PM »
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 रात  भर  जिसको जागता देखा । साज़िशों  में  ही मुब्तिला देखा ।।

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«Reply #12 on: January 16, 2013, 02:16:33 PM »
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bahut khoob Saini ji...!!!
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bahut khoob , saini saheb.
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