Raat hotey hee, sarey baam roshnee hogee!

by abdbundeli on September 05, 2012, 08:02:23 AM
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Chaand nikleygaa dhundhalkey mein aaj, shaam key ba'ad!
Kuchh nayaa hogaa mahalley mein aaj, shaam key ba'ad!!

Raat hotey hee, sarey baam roshnee hogee;
Shama'a jaleygi nahin, go ki, aaj, shaam key ba'ad!

Kiskey aaney ki khabar sey hain shajar-o-gul mushtaaq?
Kiskey koochey mein tahal hogee aaj, shaam key ba'ad?

Un ney, haalaanki, hamain ittilaa nahin dee hai;
Fir bhi, ham bhi wahin pahuncheyngey aaj, shaam key ba'ad!

'Abd', andheyroun-ujaaloun mein jang hai jaaree;
Na jeet paayegaa andhiyaaraa aaj, shaam key ba'ad!

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«Reply #1 on: September 05, 2012, 09:14:33 AM »
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bahut khoob.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #2 on: September 05, 2012, 09:24:12 AM »
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bahut khoob.. Usual Smile

Shukriyah, Touhid ji!
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«Reply #3 on: September 05, 2012, 10:00:09 AM »
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Bahut badhiya Sir
Acche khayaalaat pesh kiye hai aapne.
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«Reply #4 on: September 05, 2012, 11:52:49 AM »
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wah wah bahut khoob
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«Reply #5 on: September 05, 2012, 08:24:08 PM »
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #6 on: September 06, 2012, 01:32:23 AM »
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Bahut badhiya Sir
Acche khayaalaat pesh kiye hai aapne.
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Shukriyah, Mukesh ji! Bahut-bahut shukriyah!
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«Reply #7 on: September 06, 2012, 01:33:57 AM »
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wah wah bahut khoob


Bahut-bahut shukriyah, Suman ji!
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«Reply #8 on: September 06, 2012, 01:35:00 AM »
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bahut khoob

Shukriyah, 'nandbahu' ji!
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«Reply #9 on: September 06, 2012, 04:39:10 AM »
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Chaand nikleygaa dhundhalkey mein aaj, shaam key ba'ad!
Kuchh nayaa hogaa mahalley mein aaj, shaam key ba'ad!! Laughing hard Laughing hard Thumbs UP Thumbs UP

Raat hotey hee, sarey baam roshnee hogee;
Shama'a jaleygi nahin, go ki, aaj, shaam key ba'ad! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Kiskey aaney ki khabar sey hain shajar-o-gul mushtaaq?
Kiskey koochey mein tahal hogee aaj, shaam key ba'ad? Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Un ney, haalaanki, hamain ittilaa nahin dee hai;
Fir bhi, ham bhi wahin pahuncheyngey aaj, shaam key ba'ad! Applause Applause Applause

'Abd', andheyroun-ujaaloun mein jang hai jaaree;
Na jeet paayegaa andhiyaaraa aaj, shaam key ba'ad! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP

                       - abd bundeli




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«Reply #10 on: September 06, 2012, 08:52:14 AM »
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Aap bahoot achchaa likhte hai esme koi shak nahee hai. Hamne aapke bahoot saaree gajley paree hai sab ek se badkar ek rahee hai. Aap apnee gazal ke aakhir me apnaa naam jaroor likh diyaa kare jisse aapkee koi rachnaa bin pade naa choot jaaye.
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«Reply #11 on: September 06, 2012, 09:17:43 AM »
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veriiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii------------naaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaice-ABD

Loads of thanks, Khamosh!
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«Reply #12 on: September 06, 2012, 09:25:02 AM »
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Aap bahoot achchaa likhte hai esme koi shak nahee hai. Hamne aapke bahoot saaree gajley paree hai sab ek se badkar ek rahee hai. Aap apnee gazal ke aakhir me apnaa naam jaroor likh diyaa kare jisse aapkee koi rachnaa bin pade naa choot jaaye.

Shukriyah, Maasoom ji! Mujhey yah jaankar khushee huyee, ki, aap meyree gazaloun ko pahney mein 'ruchi' leytey hain! Aaindah, jaisaa aapney chaahaa hai karney kee a'aadat daaluungaa!
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«Reply #13 on: September 06, 2012, 10:03:13 AM »
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arrey bhai Abd Sahab, kya kehte ho.. Matlab janab kya hi khoob kehte ho,,
Khayalat ko kis khoobsoorti se lafzi jama pehnate ho,
Ek adna si daad hamari b qubool kare Janab, Usual Smile
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«Reply #14 on: September 06, 2012, 11:12:28 AM »
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arrey bhai Abd Sahab, kya kehte ho.. Matlab janab kya hi khoob kehte ho,,
Khayalat ko kis khoobsoorti se lafzi jama pehnate ho,
Ek adna si daad hamari b qubool kare Janab, Usual Smile

Bahut-bahut shukriyah, Yasir ji! Aapkee 'daad' itnee 'pyaaree' hai, ki, mujhey aisaa lagaa jaisey ham-aap roo-b-roo hon! Khush rahiye! Tandurust rahiye!
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