Rahein sab khush jinhe maiyn janta hoon

by Syed Mohd Mahzar on November 05, 2012, 04:55:28 PM
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Rahein sab khush jinhe maiyn janta hoon
maiyn pahley yeh duaa hi mangta hoon

naqaboun se na chehre chup sakeynge
jo rahzan hain unhe pahchanta hoon

lo karte hain khudai woh mujhi per
sanam jo roz maiyn hi dhalta hoon

mere apne hi ranj kiya kum hain
parousi ke bhi gham ko batta hoon

jo peyroun per chahektey hain parindey
yeh kitney khush hain aksar souchta hoon

meri aankhon ne dekhe hain wo manzar
wahi maiyn aaj dashte nainawa hoon

             .........Syed Mohd Mahzar
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«Reply #1 on: November 05, 2012, 05:03:45 PM »
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Bahot khoob Mahzar sahab. Umda ghazal hai.

Sabhi aisi ghazal likhte kahan hain
Hain shayir aap aala jaanta hoon

Hazaron daad
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«Reply #2 on: November 05, 2012, 05:13:00 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahut khoob
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«Reply #3 on: November 05, 2012, 05:28:54 PM »
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 Applause Applause
bahut khoob
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«Reply #4 on: November 05, 2012, 05:41:39 PM »
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«Reply #5 on: November 05, 2012, 05:48:35 PM »
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Bohut khoob umda Ghazal kahi hai mahzer saheb, dherrron daaad qubool kijiye, aur aise hi likhte rahiye..............
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«Reply #6 on: November 05, 2012, 08:04:19 PM »
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waah waah dheron daad
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«Reply #7 on: November 06, 2012, 02:03:03 PM »
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Bahot khoob Mahzar sahab. Umda ghazal hai.

Sabhi aisi ghazal likhte kahan hain
Hain shayir aap aala jaanta hoon

Hazaron daad

Hauslaafzai ka bahut bahut shukriya, aapki ellila ke liye raz hay ki main shayer nahi hoon, sirf shayri ka shauq hay, ayse hi kuch ulta deedha kah leta hoon lekin aapne mujhe "aala" bana diya
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«Reply #8 on: November 06, 2012, 02:04:37 PM »
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«Reply #9 on: November 06, 2012, 04:37:49 PM »
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waah waah dheron daad
Aapka bahut bahut shukriya.....
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«Reply #10 on: November 06, 2012, 04:39:22 PM »
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waah waah dheron daad
Daad dene ka shukriya
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«Reply #11 on: November 07, 2012, 02:41:09 PM »
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Bohut khoob umda Ghazal kahi hai mahzer saheb, dherrron daaad qubool kijiye, aur aise hi likhte rahiye..............
Aapka mamnoon hoon ki aapko ghazal pasan aayi...
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«Reply #12 on: November 07, 2012, 02:43:52 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #13 on: December 27, 2012, 03:48:05 PM »
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Very nice work.. Aap ki agli peshkash ka intezaar rahega.
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«Reply #14 on: December 27, 2012, 08:41:43 PM »
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waah waah, bahut hi khoob, waah
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