Raqeeb hee raqeeb hain, ki, ab meree nigaah mein!

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Sukoon khojtey hain log, meyri har karaah mein!
Patah naheen ayaan hai kyaa, mazeed waah-waah mein?

Ajeeb daastaan hai yeh; ajeeb hamsafar hun main;
Na jaaney kiskey saath huun azeem khwaabgaah mein!

Shareek beywajah nahin rahaa hun is zama’at mein;
Milaa hai chain-e-zeyhn, yaar, teyri waah-waah mein!

Khataa key ba’ad, fir, khataa huyee hai mujhsey baarahaa;
Sazaa milee hai, baarahaa rahaa hun ab karaah main!

Haseen dilrubaa mein hain, ‘abd’, hazaar khuubiyaan:
Raqeeb hee raqeeb hain, ki, ab meyri nigaah mein!

                      - abd bundeli

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«Reply #1 on: November 01, 2013, 07:50:52 PM »
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Sukoon khojtey hain log, meyri har karaah mein!
Patah naheen ayaan hai kyaa, mazeed waah-waah mein?


Ajeeb daastaan hai yeh; ajeeb hamsafar hun main;
Na jaaney kiskey saath huun azeem khwaabgaah mein!

Shareek beywajah nahin rahaa hun is zama’at mein;
Milaa hai chain-e-zeyhn, yaar, teyri waah-waah mein!

Khataa key ba’ad, fir, khataa huyee hai mujhsey baarahaa;
Sazaa milee hai, baarahaa rahaa hun ab karaah main!

Haseen dilrubaa mein hain, ‘abd’, hazaar khuubiyaan:
Raqeeb hee raqeeb hain, ki, ab meyri nigaah mein!

                      - abd bundeli



wah wah abd bundeli sb aap bahut bahut khoobsurat ghazal likha hai. meri bahut bahut daad sweekar kariyega.  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Thumbs UP
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«Reply #2 on: November 01, 2013, 08:19:12 PM »
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waaah abd sahab waah bohut khub
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«Reply #3 on: November 01, 2013, 09:13:28 PM »
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Sukoon khojtey hain log, meyri har karaah mein!
Patah naheen ayaan hai kyaa, mazeed waah-waah mein?

Ajeeb daastaan hai yeh; ajeeb hamsafar hun main;
Na jaaney kiskey saath huun azeem khwaabgaah mein!

Shareek beywajah nahin rahaa hun is zama’at mein;
Milaa hai chain-e-zeyhn, yaar, teyri waah-waah mein!

Khataa key ba’ad, fir, khataa huyee hai mujhsey baarahaa;
Sazaa milee hai, baarahaa rahaa hun ab karaah main!

Haseen dilrubaa mein hain, ‘abd’, hazaar khuubiyaan:
Raqeeb hee raqeeb hain, ki, ab meyri nigaah mein!

                      - abd bundeli




bahot bahot bahot khoobsurat peshkash hai aapki Bundeli saab.... kyaa kehne, aapki waah waah pe waah waah hi nikal rahi hai... daaad pesh hain is kaamyaab ghazal pe..

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«Reply #4 on: November 01, 2013, 09:59:37 PM »
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वाह....वाह....बुल्देली जी....बहुत खूब....ढेरों दाद...
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«Reply #5 on: November 01, 2013, 10:09:07 PM »
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wah wah abd bundeli sb aap bahut bahut khoobsurat ghazal likha hai. meri bahut bahut daad sweekar kariyega.  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Thumbs UP

Bahut-bahut shukriyah, Suman ji!
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«Reply #6 on: November 01, 2013, 10:10:07 PM »
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waaah abd sahab waah bohut khub


Bahut-bahut shukriyah, 'Saahill' ji!
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«Reply #7 on: November 01, 2013, 10:11:09 PM »
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bahot bahot bahot khoobsurat peshkash hai aapki Bundeli saab.... kyaa kehne, aapki waah waah pe waah waah hi nikal rahi hai... daaad pesh hain is kaamyaab ghazal pe..

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वाह....वाह....बुल्देली जी....बहुत खूब....ढेरों दाद...


Bahut-bahut shukriyah, Amit ji!
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«Reply #9 on: November 01, 2013, 11:06:40 PM »
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bahut bahut bahut khoob bundeli sahab....dheron dheron daad...
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«Reply #10 on: November 01, 2013, 11:10:27 PM »
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Haseen dilrubaa mein hain, ‘abd’, hazaar khuubiyaan:
Raqeeb hee raqeeb hain, ki, ab meyri nigaah mein!

Khub Sahab Applause


Shad o Aabaad Rahiye

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«Reply #14 on: November 02, 2013, 04:49:38 AM »
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bahut bahut bahut khoob bundeli sahab....dheron dheron daad...
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Bahut-bahut shukriyah, 'Musaahib' ji!
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