Resham ke kachhe dhaage si ik preet lagaaye baitha hu.....

by vipul kumar on December 26, 2010, 05:14:52 PM
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Resham ke kachhe dhaage si ik preet lagaaye baitha hu...
Maazi ki puraani yaado se daaman ko sajaaye baitha hu....

Ab vasl-o-sohbat ke yaaro na aur dikhao khwaab mujhe,
Pahle hi Rishto.n ke tukde siine me chubhaaye baitha hu...

phulo.n ki khwahish me maine kitna kuchh bardaasht kiya,
aur ab dekho k kaanto.n me daaman uljhaaye baitha hu....

Pasand ho shaayad ab bhi unko Dhua.n kisi ke jalne ka,
ik umr hui main apne ghar ko aag lagaaye baitha hu...

Har gali gali har kuuche me charche hai apne rishto.n ke,
Kya paagalpan hai fir bhi main tujhe sab se chhupaaye baitha hu...

Koi aayega to jodega in tuute kaanch ke purjo.n ko,
Main kab se apne sapno ko jholi me sajaaye baitha hu....

Koi aaya hai na aayega is dasht me mujhko maalum hai,
Fir bhi main raste par kab se palke.n bichhaye baitha hu...

Wo loutegi to dekhegi k Jhuth nahi thi preet Meri ,
Ab Isiliye diiwano si main shaql banaaye baitha hu...

Dil ko bhi ik shikwa tha kal tak diidaar-e-JaaNa ka,
So ab main aankho me uski tasviir banaaye baitha hu....

Mujhko khabar hai YaaRa wo meri duniya ko chhod gayaa,
Fir bhi ab jhuthe waado.n se dil ko bahlaaye baitha hu...!!
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«Reply #1 on: December 26, 2010, 05:34:24 PM »
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wah wah Vipul.
ek aur dhamaaka.
yaar superb gazabb jhakashhhhhhhhhh
mind blowing.
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«Reply #2 on: December 26, 2010, 05:53:13 PM »
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Thanks nirala ji....
Meri dono kalaam padhne ke liye aur pasand karnne ke liye....

Waise ek aur bhi post ki hui hai.
And i am sure wo aapko aur sabhi dosto ko pasand aayegi...
Shukriya....!!
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«Reply #3 on: December 26, 2010, 06:22:34 PM »
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Vipul Jee Aadaab!

Shayad paheli martaba padh raheN hai hum aapko... Usual Smile
Wakai behad khoob khayaal aur aikdum achchi bayaani ki hai aapne....

Har ashar aik se badhkar aik hai...
Aapke is ahsaas o Khayaal aur khubsurat lafzi daste ko
Dil se daad hazir hai.... Usual Smile

likhate rahiye.....
Aate rahiye.......
Khush O aabad rahiye.....
Khuda Hafez...... Usual Smile          




Resham ke kachhe dhaage si ik preet lagaaye baitha hu...
Maazi ki puraani yaado se daaman ko sajaaye baitha hu....

Waah Jee behad khoob behad shayarana andaaz raha aapka daad Usual Smile          


Ab vasl-o-sohbat ke yaaro na aur dikhao khwaab mujhe,
Pahle hi Rishto.n ke tukde siine me chubhaaye baitha hu...

Masha Allah kia baat kahi hai janab...
Bahot umdaa bayaani rahi dil se daad kabool kijiye.. Usual Smile          



Pasand ho shaayad ab bhi unko Dhua.n kisi ke jalne ka,
ik umr hui main apne ghar ko aag lagaaye baitha hu...

Achcha sher hai aur tanz bhi achcha raha ... Daad......
Hume duje misre meiN kuch chnage sujha hai, Dekhiye aapko kaisa lagta hai..          



Pasand ho shayad ab bhi unko dhuaaN kisi ke jalne ka
Unke Ishq meiN dil ko maiN abtak jalaaye baitha huN          


Koi aayega to jodega in tuute kaanch ke purjo.n ko,
Main kab se apne sapno ko jholi me sajaaye baitha hu....

Waah janab behad khoob daad:)          


Wo loutegi to dekhegi k Jhuth nahi thi preet Meri ,
Ab Isiliye diiwano si main shaql banaaye baitha hu...

achca hai.... icon_scratch          


Mujhko khabar hai YaaRa wo meri duniya ko chhod gayaa,
Fir bhi ab jhuthe waado.n se dil ko bahlaaye baitha hu...!!


Bahut khoob achcha sher hai.. Usual Smile          


         
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«Reply #4 on: December 26, 2010, 06:48:41 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya Parwaaz jii...
Hamare kalaam ko itna waqt aur tawajjo dene ke liye....
Shukriya...


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«Reply #5 on: December 27, 2010, 08:33:49 AM »
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ohooooooooo.........

vipul dear......kya lkiha he apne......majedaar....lawajab...

words ....theme ....and height......all r wonderfull dear....

lage raho dear.....
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«Reply #6 on: December 27, 2010, 08:58:57 AM »
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Ek aur mast rachna aapki Vipul ji..... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Kya khoob likhte ho,dil ko hamaare tum ayse chhute ho
Padhne ko kalaam tera hum chashma lagaaye baithe hain

Kuchh aur naya-naya milega padhne k liye ab hum sab ko
Dekho aysee anokhee aass lagaye hum tou baithe hain

Resham ke kachhe dhaage si ik preet lagaaye baitha hu...
Maazi ki puraani yaado se daaman ko sajaaye baitha hu....

Ab vasl-o-sohbat ke yaaro na aur dikhao khwaab mujhe,
Pahle hi Rishto.n ke tukde siine me chubhaaye baitha hu...

phulo.n ki khwahish me maine kitna kuchh bardaasht kiya,
aur ab dekho k kaanto.n me daaman uljhaaye baitha hu....

Pasand ho shaayad ab bhi unko Dhua.n kisi ke jalne ka,
ik umr hui main apne ghar ko aag lagaaye baitha hu...

Har gali gali har kuuche me charche hai apne rishto.n ke,
Kya paagalpan hai fir bhi main tujhe sab se chhupaaye baitha hu...

Koi aayega to jodega in tuute kaanch ke purjo.n ko,
Main kab se apne sapno ko jholi me sajaaye baitha hu....

Koi aaya hai na aayega is dasht me mujhko maalum hai,
Fir bhi main raste par kab se palke.n bichhaye baitha hu...

Wo loutegi to dekhegi k Jhuth nahi thi preet Meri ,
Ab Isiliye diiwano si main shaql banaaye baitha hu...

Dil ko bhi ik shikwa tha kal tak diidaar-e-JaaNa ka,
So ab main aankho me uski tasviir banaaye baitha hu....

Mujhko khabar hai YaaRa wo meri duniya ko chhod gayaa,
Fir bhi ab jhuthe waado.n se dil ko bahlaaye baitha hu...!!

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«Reply #7 on: December 27, 2010, 09:04:40 AM »
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bht bht umda peshkesh vipul ji...
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«Reply #8 on: December 27, 2010, 09:05:18 AM »
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Shukriya Matrix ji and koyal ji and Manzil-e-ishq....
Saath dete rahiye, aate rahiye, padhte rahiye.....
Kuchh kami ho to ginvate bhi rahiye...
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«Reply #9 on: December 27, 2010, 10:06:48 AM »
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bahooot khoobsoorati se buni gai is behtreen rachna ko dheron daad aur aapko badhai
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«Reply #10 on: December 27, 2010, 02:13:10 PM »
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Bahut Khub Vipul JI
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«Reply #11 on: December 27, 2010, 03:47:32 PM »
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Waaaaaah bhai waaaaaaaah kamaal ka kalaam hai aap kaa Vipul jee!aap ko pahlee baar paRhaa or paRhte hee rah gaye.......ek dilkash kalaam ke liye dil se dheroN daad .......
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«Reply #12 on: December 30, 2010, 04:58:42 AM »
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kya baat hai.... kamal ka likha hai Vipulji.. dil ke khayal kitne gahre hain..

bahut bahut daad..

khush rahen.... abaad rahen...


Resham se kachche dhagon ki ik preet lagaaye baitha hu...
Maazi ki puraani yaado se daaman ko sajaaye baitha hu....

Ab vasl-o-sohbat ke yaaro na aur dikhao khwaab mujhe,
Pahle hi Rishto.n ke tukde siine me chubhaaye baitha hu...

phulo.n ki khwahish me maine kitna kuchh bardaasht kiya,
aur ab dekho k kaanto.n me daaman uljhaaye baitha hu....

Pasand ho shaayad ab bhi unko Dhua.n kisi ke jalne ka,
ik umr hui main apne ghar ko aag lagaaye baitha hu...

Har gali gali har kuuche me charche hai apne rishto.n ke,
Kya paagalpan hai fir bhi main tujhe sab se chhupaaye baitha hu...

Koi aayega to jodega in tuute kaanch ke purjo.n ko,
Main kab se apne sapno ko jholi me sajaaye baitha hu....

Koi aaya hai na aayega is dasht me mujhko maalum hai,
Fir bhi main raste par kab se palke.n bichhaye baitha hu...

Wo loutegi to dekhegi k Jhuth nahi thi preet Meri ,
Ab Isiliye diiwano si main shaql banaaye baitha hu...

Dil ko bhi ik shikwa tha kal tak diidaar-e-JaaNa ka,
So ab main aankho me uski tasviir banaaye baitha hu....

Mujhko khabar hai YaaRa wo meri duniya ko chhod gayaa,
Fir bhi ab jhuthe waado.n se dil ko bahlaaye baitha hu...!![/b]
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«Reply #13 on: December 31, 2010, 12:39:56 PM »
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Shukriya...
Aap sab ki daad aur Duao.n ke liye......
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«Reply #14 on: December 31, 2010, 01:24:52 PM »
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buhat khoob... achha laga parh kar..
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