Saath tum ho, to, yah khushee bhi saath deygee zaroor!

by abdbundeli on April 08, 2010, 03:12:12 PM
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«Reply #15 on: April 09, 2010, 07:36:27 AM »
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BEHTREEN ABD Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Thanks a lot, khamosh_aawaaz ji!

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«Reply #16 on: April 09, 2010, 07:38:49 AM »
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Bahut khoob Abd ji,very beautiful gazal.Malli ji aapne bhi bahut khoob likha. Thumbs UP Applause Applause Applause Applause

Thanks a lot, Madhu!

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«Reply #17 on: April 09, 2010, 07:40:33 AM »
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Good one Abd Ji

Thanks a lot, Rajesh ji!

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«Reply #18 on: April 09, 2010, 07:44:04 AM »
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abd ji bahut khub.....this gazal is amazing way to express the feeling......GOOD WORK ABD JI...
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«Reply #19 on: April 09, 2010, 09:46:35 AM »
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Aap to bura maan gai Malli ji. Ye gazal kisne likhi hai maloom nahi lekin Shak aapne khud paida kiya hai. Ye puri gazal meter mein hai lekin aakhri sher meter mein nahi hai iski wajah hai usme "Malli" lafz galat jagah jodna. Ye kaise ho sakta hai ke koi shayar puri ghazal meter mein likhe aur ek sher meter mein na likhe.

Achha chaliye isi gazal ki zameen mein ek  aur sherlikhkar dikhaiye.

Aaj maine aapki dusri posts bhi padhi aur paaya ke unmein kuchh poems kisi aur ki hain. for example:

Is baat se khafa nahi ,shikwa nahi mujhe
Mere qareeb reh ke bhi wo samjha nahi mujhe

Yoindia par aapne ye gazal 21.2.2010 ko post ki thi jo Kashif  Durrani ki hai. Na to aapne NM likha na hi Poetry Launge mein post kiya. Agar google mein search karein to bahut jagah ye gazal aapko mil jayegi. Guest ko yahan link dene ki permission nahi hai isliye link nahi de saka.

Aapse request hai ke kisi aur ki creation post karein to uske shayar/kavi ka naam bhi likhen ya kam se kam apne naam se post na karein. Agar aapki creation koi apne naam se kahin publish kare to aapko kaisa lagega. Thanks.
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«Reply #20 on: April 09, 2010, 01:00:20 PM »
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abd ji bahut khub.....this gazal is amazing way to express the feeling......GOOD WORK ABD JI...
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Bahut-bahut shukriyah Pallavi ji! Mujhey khushee huye, ki, is gazal key kisee sher ney aapkey 'mamtaa bharey' dil-o-dimaag ko, eik lamhey key liye hi sahee, 'aandolit' to zaroor hi kiyaa hai!

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