Saath tum ho, to, yah khushee bhi saath deygee zaroor!

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Saath tum ho, to, sarkhushee bhi saath deygee zaroor!
Saath tum ho, to, yah khushee bhi saath deygee zaroor!!

Samoom-e-tund, naseem-e-sahar mein badleygee;
Saath tum ho, to, maykashee bhi saath deygee zaroor!

Shaakh-e-gulbun pai khilkhilaayengey naye gunchey;
Saath tum ho, to, yah hansee bhi saath deygee zaroor!

Ranj-o-gam mein bhi, dil-e-shaad muskuraayegaa;
Saath tum ho, to, dilkashee bhi saath deygee zaroor!

Khizaan parast fazaa mein bhi baarisheyn hongeen;
Saath tum ho, to, baarishee bhi saath deygee zaroor!

'Abd', tamaam kaayinaat aaj hai mushtaaq:
Saath tum ho, to, raamishee bhi saath deygee zaroor!

                               - abd bundeli


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sarkhushee = halkaa nashaa; Samoom-e-tund = Tej loo ki aandhee;
naseem-e-sahar = subah ki khushboo bharee 'sheetal mand sameeran';
Shaakh-e-gulbun = gulaab ki daalee; dil-e-shaad = khushiyoun sey bharaa dil;
dilkashee = sundartaa;
Khizaan parast fazaa = patjharh ki poojaa karneywaalee khulee huyee haree-bharee jagah; baarishee = barshaa key mousam sey haasil honeywaaleen (sougaateyn);
tamaam kaayinaat = 'sampoorna brahmand' i.e. the entire universe;
mushtaaq = 'utsuk', i.e. eagar;
raamishee = 'gaayakee', gulookaaree i.e. sweet oral recitation of verses.
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«Reply #1 on: April 08, 2010, 03:24:00 PM »
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Tadap ki aah ki aansu ki, ab shikayat kya ?
Jo dil ko dard na de vo bhala Mohabbat kya?

Ye sheesha ek na ek din zarur tootega
Tamaam umr karega koyi hifazat kya?

Haraam ki ye kamayi, ye botale ye glass
Hum apne bacchon ko denge yahi virasat kya?

Vohi gawah hai mera vohi hai musif bi
Kisi vakil ki yaaron mujhe zarurat kya?

Kisi se milne ki fursat nahi kisi ko "malli"
Gayi salaam dua ki bi ab ravayat kya?
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«Reply #2 on: April 08, 2010, 03:35:15 PM »
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bahoot khoob ... aur apka shuriya jo aap ne hamari guzarish pe kathin lafz ke maani'e darj kardiye.. thanks







Ranj-o-gam mein bhi, dil-e-shaad muskuraayegaa;
Saath tum ho, to, dilkashee bhi saath deygee zaroor!
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«Reply #3 on: April 08, 2010, 05:06:00 PM »
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wah very very beautiful bundeli ji.. wah

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«Reply #4 on: April 08, 2010, 05:09:31 PM »
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Tadap ki aah ki aansu ki, ab shikayat kya ?
Jo dil ko dard na de vo bhala Mohabbat kya?

Ye sheesha ek na ek din zarur tootega
Tamaam umr karega koyi hifazat kya?

Haraam ki ye kamayi, ye botale ye glass
Hum apne bacchon ko denge yahi virasat kya?

Vohi gawah hai mera vohi hai musif bi
Kisi vakil ki yaaron mujhe zarurat kya?

Kisi se milne ki fursat nahi kisi ko "malli"
Gayi salaam dua ki bi ab ravayat kya?



wah wah very very nice malli ji...

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«Reply #5 on: April 08, 2010, 05:43:52 PM »
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Ye to saraasar copy pase hai Malli ji. Aakhri sher mein apna naam to jod diya lekin ye behr se bahar ho gaya. Take care.
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Tadap ki aah ki aansu ki, ab shikayat kya ?
Jo dil ko dard na de vo bhala Mohabbat kya?

Ye sheesha ek na ek din zarur tootega
Tamaam umr karega koyi hifazat kya?

Haraam ki ye kamayi, ye botale ye glass
Hum apne bacchon ko denge yahi virasat kya?

Vohi gawah hai mera vohi hai musif bi
Kisi vakil ki yaaron mujhe zarurat kya?

Kisi se milne ki fursat nahi kisi ko "malli"
Gayi salaam dua ki bi ab ravayat kya?

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«Reply #6 on: April 08, 2010, 07:56:33 PM »
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«Reply #7 on: April 08, 2010, 08:19:33 PM »
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Bahut khoob Abd ji,very beautiful gazal.Malli ji aapne bhi bahut khoob likha. Thumbs UP Applause Applause Applause Applause
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Ye to saraasar copy pase hai Malli ji. Aakhri sher mein apna naam to jod diya lekin ye behr se bahar ho gaya. Take care.

Accha yeh copy paste hai? to aap sahi ka naam yahan de dete. rahi naam "malli" dalne ka.... hmm wo thi mai hi jahan pe aapne pada tha. Ek request, in case aapko yeh mera likha nahi hai laga to yo pe add karke hame batate. aapka id hi to copy paste hai.

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«Reply #9 on: April 09, 2010, 03:18:42 AM »
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Saath tum ho, to, sarkhushee bhi saath deygee zaroor!
Saath tum ho, to, yah khushee bhi saath deygee zaroor!!

Samoom-e-tund, naseem-e-sahar mein badleygee;
Saath tum ho, to, maykashee bhi saath deygee zaroor!

Shaakh-e-gulbun pai khilkhilaayengey naye gunchey;
Saath tum ho, to, yah hansee bhi saath deygee zaroor!

Ranj-o-gam mein bhi, dil-e-shaad muskuraayegaa;
Saath tum ho, to, dilkashee bhi saath deygee zaroor!

Khizaan parast fazaa mein bhi baarisheyn hongeen;
Saath tum ho, to, baarishee bhi saath deygee zaroor!

'Abd', tamaam kaayinaat aaj hai mushtaaq:
Saath tum ho, to, raamishee bhi saath deygee zaroor!

                               - abd bundeli


P.S.
sarkhushee = halkaa nashaa; Samoom-e-tund = Tej loo ki aandhee;
naseem-e-sahar = subah ki khushboo bharee 'sheetal mand sameeran';
Shaakh-e-gulbun = gulaab ki daalee; dil-e-shaad = khushiyoun sey bharaa dil;
dilkashee = sundartaa;
Khizaan parast fazaa = patjharh ki poojaa karneywaalee khulee huyee haree-bharee jagah; baarishee = barshaa key mousam sey haasil honeywaaleen (sougaateyn);
tamaam kaayinaat = 'sampoorna brahmand' i.e. the entire universe;
mushtaaq = 'utsuk', i.e. eagar;
raamishee = 'gaayakee', gulookaaree i.e. sweet oral recitation of verses.


Good one Abd Ji
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«Reply #10 on: April 09, 2010, 03:19:30 AM »
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Tadap ki aah ki aansu ki, ab shikayat kya ?
Jo dil ko dard na de vo bhala Mohabbat kya?

Ye sheesha ek na ek din zarur tootega
Tamaam umr karega koyi hifazat kya?

Haraam ki ye kamayi, ye botale ye glass
Hum apne bacchon ko denge yahi virasat kya?

Vohi gawah hai mera vohi hai musif bi
Kisi vakil ki yaaron mujhe zarurat kya?

Kisi se milne ki fursat nahi kisi ko "malli"
Gayi salaam dua ki bi ab ravayat kya?


Nice one Malli Ji
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«Reply #11 on: April 09, 2010, 07:25:35 AM »
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Tadap ki aah ki aansu ki, ab shikayat kya ?
Jo dil ko dard na de vo bhala Mohabbat kya?

Ye sheesha ek na ek din zarur tootega
Tamaam umr karega koyi hifazat kya?

Haraam ki ye kamayi, ye botale ye glass
Hum apne bacchon ko denge yahi virasat kya?

Vohi gawah hai mera vohi hai musif bi
Kisi vakil ki yaaron mujhe zarurat kya?

Kisi se milne ki fursat nahi kisi ko "malli"
Gayi salaam dua ki bi ab ravayat kya?


Thanks malli ji!

Waah kyaa baat hai:
"Tadap ki aah ki aansu ki, ab shikayat kya ?
 Jo dil ko dard na de vo bhala Mohabbat kya?"
                 
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«Reply #12 on: April 09, 2010, 07:29:38 AM »
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bahoot khoob ... aur apka shuriya jo aap ne hamari guzarish pe kathin lafz ke maani'e darj kardiye.. thanks



Ranj-o-gam mein bhi, dil-e-shaad muskuraayegaa;
Saath tum ho, to, dilkashee bhi saath deygee zaroor!


You're welcome, nazar ghouri ji!
Thanks for your kind appreciation!

                    - abd bundeli
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«Reply #13 on: April 09, 2010, 07:33:15 AM »
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Good one Abd Ji

Thanks Rajesh ji!

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«Reply #14 on: April 09, 2010, 07:34:38 AM »
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wah very very beautiful bundeli ji.. wah

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Thanks Jasbir ji!

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