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Sabhee Ke Haq Ke Liye...Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb' / सभी के हक़ के लिए...सतीश शुक्ला 'रक़ीब'

by Satish Shukla on October 27, 2011, 12:03:54 PM

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अता किया है जो रब ने तुझको संवार दे तू नसीबे-मुफ़लिस
यतीम बच्चों की परवरिस में, तुझे भी आसूदगी मिलेगी

---- सतीश शुक्ला 'रक़ीब'

ata kiya hai jo rab ne tujhako, saNwaar de too naseeb-muflis
yateem bachchoN kee parwaris meN, tujhe bhee aasoodagee milegee

---- Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'


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Re: Sabhee Ke Haq Ke Liye...Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb' / सभी के हक़ के लिए...सतीश शुक्ला 'रक़ीब'

«Reply #1 on: October 27, 2011, 02:06:31 PM »

Gazal achchi hai magar correct word parvarish hai na ke parvaris

yateem bachchoN kee parwaris meiN, tujhe bhee aasoodagee milegee
yateem bachchoN kee parwarish meiN, tujhe bhee aasoodagee milegee
Gustakhi maaf
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Satish Shukla

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Re: Sabhee Ke Haq Ke Liye...Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb' / सभी के हक़ के लिए...सतीश शुक्ला 'रक़ीब'

«Reply #2 on: October 28, 2011, 07:07:05 AM »

Janab Sadiq Rizvi Sahab,

Nazar-e-inaayat ka bahut bahut shukriya

Aapne jis lafz "parvarish" kee ot ishaara
kiya hai woh bhi sahee kar diya hai.

Ek aur guzaarish hai aapse ki mujh jaise
adana se talib-e-ilm se aap jaisa Shair aur
Adeeb muaafee ke baat kar ke sharminda na karen
aur aage bhee isee tarah rahnumaaee karte rahen
bahut achchha lagega.

Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'


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Re: Sabhee Ke Haq Ke Liye...Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb' / सभी के हक़ के लिए...सतीश शुक्ला 'रक़ीब'

«Reply #3 on: January 16, 2012, 12:02:04 PM »

Quote from: Satish Shukla on October 27, 2011, 12:03:54 PM

PLEASE REFER OTHER POST OF SAME HEADING

अता किया है जो रब ने तुझको संवार दे तू नसीबे-मुफ़लिस
यतीम बच्चों की परवरिस में, तुझे भी आसूदगी मिलेगी

---- सतीश शुक्ला 'रक़ीब'

ata kiya hai jo rab ne tujhako, saNwaar de too naseeb-muflis
yateem bachchoN kee parwarish meN, tujhe bhee aasoodagee milegee

---- Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'

bahut khoob satish ji.........!