Sambhalna Chaahe......!!!

by Talat on August 05, 2009, 11:56:00 AM
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«Reply #45 on: August 10, 2009, 01:12:11 PM »
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BAHUT KHOOB TALAT JI...DIL CHHUNE WALE JAZBAAT HAI...

Thanks so much Luv Ji
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«Reply #46 on: August 10, 2009, 01:30:10 PM »
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Hello Talat,
As promised earlier........

woh khwaab hai par hum unko tuut kar chaahe
saahil par zulasti ret, jaise ek lahar chaahe

har waqt zuki zuki rehti hai qaatil nigaahe
kaise samzau dhadkan ko jo unki ek nazar chaahe

kabhi nahin kar payenge izaar-e-mohabbat
goya, hum unko dil ke andar hi andar chaahe

rel ki patariyo ki tarah kabhi na mil payenge
phir qyun hum unke jaisa hi hamsafar chaahe

pani ke dhaare dene ki teri ahemiyat nahin "Bharat"
is baat se na-waaqif tera dil, samandar chaahe !!!





Thanks Bharat for writing this Usual Smile bohot hi khoob  Applause Applause Applause

Khwaab Palkon Pe Bikharna Chaahe,
Dhadkan Bhi Ab Theharna Chaahe

Wo Dil Ki Dastaras Se Hai Bohot Door,
Phir Bhi Ye Har Pal Usse Milna Chaahe

Toot Jaayenge Bikhar Jaayenge Hum,
Zaat Kyun Na Iss Toofan Se Nikalna Chaahe

Ret Pe Likhe Naam Mit Jaate Hain Lekin,
Baarha Tera Naam Wahin Dil Likhna Chaahe
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«Reply #47 on: August 10, 2009, 01:31:09 PM »
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wah wah wah ... celmira ji, humtum ji, kaash ji, bharat ji... wah wah.. bahut hi khoob


jasbir singh

Thanks so much Jasbir Ji
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Talat
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«Reply #48 on: August 10, 2009, 01:33:23 PM »
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great piece of work hamesha ki tarhaan bhut hi khoob, aapke likhne mein kis qadar ki shaistagi hai mashallah younhi likhti rahiye hamesha

Thanks so much Aslam Ji...Thanks a lot  Usual Smile
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Talat
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«Reply #49 on: August 10, 2009, 02:01:47 PM »
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aapki ghazal ke jwaab main kuch likhna himaqat se kuch kam to nahi baharhaal kabhi kabhi aisa bhi karne ko jii karta hai zahir hai ki jo aap likhti hain wo sabki nazar mai hai.........kuch toota phoota sa koshish achi lage to zarra nawaazi............


dil hatheli pe chaand ki surat chamakna chahe
ashq banke meri nazro.n se utarna chahe

ye ajab baat ke tere dil ki nigaah hai uspar
warna ye yaad ke dariya mai behekna chahe

wo shaaksh e gul jo lachakti hai kisi zor se
dar haqeeqat wo teri adaao.n pe mar mitna chahe

ye khayaal mujhko bhi aata hai kabhi aise hi
shama mai kya hai jo har parwaana hi jalna chahe

apni aankho ko tu band rakha kar ey saaqii
koi diwaana kahaan tere dar se talna chahe

isse bad ke kya milegi aur isko izzat afzaaii
meri ghazal tere honto.n pe machalna chahe




Aslam Ji,
..bohot bohot khoob....kyun sharminda karte hain...aap ke saamne to humara likhna kuch bhi nahin...you are an awesome poet  icon_thumleft

Aap jaisa hargiz nahin likh sakte...phir bhi kuch likhne ki koshish ki hai.....



Khwaab Ban Kar Teri Palkon Pe Chamakna Chaahe,
Dil-e-Nashaad Tere Seene Main Dhahadkna Chaahe

Jazbaat Ke Toofaanon Main Ghiri Meri Zindagi,
Teri Yaadon Ke Safeene Main, Bhatakna Chaahe

Parwaana Jal Jaata Hai, Mar Jaata Hai Shama Par
Shama Bhi Khud Parwaane Par Mar Mitna Chaahe

Tamanna Hai Unhe Jaam-e-Mai Aankhon Se Mile Jo,
Nigaah Meri Bhi Lab-e-Tishnaa Tak Uthna Chaahe

Tere Lab Ki Chaashni Tere Alfaaz Main Bikhri,
Mere Honton Pe Ghazal Teri Kyun Na Machalna Chaahe !!
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«Reply #50 on: August 10, 2009, 05:16:56 PM »
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Aslam Ji,
..bohot bohot khoob....kyun sharminda karte hain...aap ke saamne to humara likhna kuch bhi nahin...you are an awesome poet  icon_thumleft

Aap jaisa hargiz nahin likh sakte...phir bhi kuch likhne ki koshish ki hai.....





Zindagi Dard-e-Sahra Se Ubharna Chaahe,
Rawayaton Ki Qaid Se Ab Nikalna Chaahe

Dua Ko Haath Uthaaye Hain Lekin Phir Bhi,
Lab-e-Khamosh Pe Koi Lafz Na Machalna Chaahe

Khwaab Ban Kar Teri Palkon Pe Chamakna Chaahe,
Dil-e-Nashaad Tere Seene Main Dhahadkna Chaahe

Jazbaat Ke Toofaanon Main Ghiri Meri Zindagi,
Teri Yaadon Ke Safeene Main, Bhatakna Chaahe

Parwaana Jal Jaata Hai, Mar Jaata Hai Shama Par
Shama Bhi Khud Parwaane Par Mar Mitna Chaahe

Tamanna Hai Unhe Jaam-e-Mai Aankhon Se Mile Jo,
Nigaah Meri Bhi Lab-e-Tishnaa Tak Uthna Chaahe

Tere Lab Ki Chaashni Tere Alfaaz Main Bikhri,
Mere Honton Pe Ghazal Teri Kyun Na Machalna Chaahe !!

bahut accha likha hai Celmira ji Applause
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aaina
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«Reply #51 on: August 11, 2009, 03:45:15 PM »
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Aslam Ji,
..bohot bohot khoob....kyun sharminda karte hain...aap ke saamne to humara likhna kuch bhi nahin...you are an awesome poet  icon_thumleft

Aap jaisa hargiz nahin likh sakte...phir bhi kuch likhne ki koshish ki hai.....



Khwaab Ban Kar Teri Palkon Pe Chamakna Chaahe,
Dil-e-Nashaad Tere Seene Main Dhahadkna Chaahe

Jazbaat Ke Toofaanon Main Ghiri Meri Zindagi,
Teri Yaadon Ke Safeene Main, Bhatakna Chaahe

Parwaana Jal Jaata Hai, Mar Jaata Hai Shama Par
Shama Bhi Khud Parwaane Par Mar Mitna Chaahe

Tamanna Hai Unhe Jaam-e-Mai Aankhon Se Mile Jo,
Nigaah Meri Bhi Lab-e-Tishnaa Tak Uthna Chaahe

Tere Lab Ki Chaashni Tere Alfaaz Main Bikhri,
Mere Honton Pe Ghazal Teri Kyun Na Machalna Chaahe !!


kya baat hai talat bhut hi khoob mashallah bhut hi ahca likha hai aapki koshish sar chad kar bolti hai, youn hi likhti rahiye god bless u
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Pooja
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«Reply #52 on: August 11, 2009, 03:46:47 PM »
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Good work Aaina and Celmira  Applause Applause Applause Applause
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Talat
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«Reply #53 on: August 12, 2009, 04:46:37 PM »
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waah waah ... Bahut Khoob Talat Ji... Arz Kiya Hai...


Muhoobat Mein Dekhoo Waffa Chaahe
Dil Bhi Hai NadaaN Kya-Kya Chaahe

Girakar Tere DaamaaN Par AnsooN
Moti Mein Isko Badalnaa Chaahe

Isko Ishq Ka Chad Gyaa Hai JanuuN
Jalte SholooN Par Chalnaa Chaahe

Jin GaliyooN Se Guzraa Tha Majnu
Unn GaliyooN Se Guzaarna Chaahe !!

HumTum


HUmesha ki tarah bohot khoob Hum Tum  Applause Applause Applause

Kuch aapke hi andaaz main.......


Nadaaniyaan Dil Ki, Kya Chahta Hai,
Iss Daur Main Bhi Wafa Chahta Hai

Raakh Kar Dega Hasti Tumhari Sanam,
Shola Jo Ye Bhadakna Chaahta Hai

Aasaan Nahin Hai Ye Ishq Ki Dagar,
Jo Majnu Ka Tu Naqsh-e-Paa Chahta Hai !!

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Bharat
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«Reply #54 on: August 12, 2009, 05:19:03 PM »
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wah wah wah ... celmira ji, humtum ji, kaash ji, bharat ji... wah wah.. bahut hi khoob


jasbir singh

jasbir singh ji,
Thanks for the appreciation !!!
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Bharat
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«Reply #55 on: August 12, 2009, 05:27:16 PM »
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very nice work bhart

Aaina ji,
Thanks for liking the ghazal ....

You have written very well also....
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Bharat
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«Reply #56 on: August 12, 2009, 05:28:49 PM »
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Thanks Bharat for writing this Usual Smile bohot hi khoob  Applause Applause Applause

Khwaab Palkon Pe Bikharna Chaahe,
Dhadkan Bhi Ab Theharna Chaahe

Wo Dil Ki Dastaras Se Hai Bohot Door,
Phir Bhi Ye Har Pal Usse Milna Chaahe

Toot Jaayenge Bikhar Jaayenge Hum,
Zaat Kyun Na Iss Toofan Se Nikalna Chaahe

Ret Pe Likhe Naam Mit Jaate Hain Lekin,
Baarha Tera Naam Wahin Dil Likhna Chaahe


Talat,
Shukriya !!!
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Talat
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«Reply #57 on: August 13, 2009, 10:58:36 AM »
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bahut accha likha hai Celmira ji Applause

Thanks so much Reaper Ji for always reading and apprexiating my work Usual Smile
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Talat
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«Reply #58 on: August 14, 2009, 05:38:05 PM »
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kya baat hai talat bhut hi khoob mashallah bhut hi ahca likha hai aapki koshish sar chad kar bolti hai, youn hi likhti rahiye god bless u

Thanks so much Aslam Ji...bas yunhi hausla badhate rahiye saath dete rahiye.....Thanks so much  happy3 happy3 happy3
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Talat
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«Reply #59 on: August 15, 2009, 06:46:48 PM »
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Good work Aaina and Celmira  Applause Applause Applause Applause

Thanks Pooja
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