Sambhalna Chaahe......!!!

by Talat on August 05, 2009, 11:56:00 AM
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«Reply #1 on: August 05, 2009, 12:25:22 PM »
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Talatji Ati sunder rachana hai aapki....daad kabul kijiye.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Mujhe kuchh line yaad aa rahi hain....naam yaad nahi kisne likhi hain...shayad shabdh bhi idhar-udhar ho....

Roko roko re Ghadee ko koi tou roko koi tou roko
Quaid tou kar leta main ye pal ye lamhe....
Par mujhe tou chahiye wo saans leta jeeta jagta pal

poori yaad nahi hai........


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«Reply #2 on: August 05, 2009, 12:28:02 PM »
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Tallu

Kya baat hai boss Applause Applause Applause

Jagjit Singh ko bolo ab is ghazal ko gaaye Winking Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: August 05, 2009, 12:29:55 PM »
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Talatji Ati sunder rachana hai aapki....daad kabul kijiye.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Mujhe kuchh line yaad aa rahi hain....naam yaad nahi kisne likhi hain...shayad shabdh bhi idhar-udhar ho....

Roko roko re Ghadee ko koi tou roko koi tou roko
Quaid tou kar leta main ye pal ye lamhe....
Par mujhe tou chahiye wo saans leta jeeta jagta pal

poori yaad nahi hai........


Smardia Ji
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Thanks so much aapne itni gehraayi se iss rachna ko padha, bohot aabhari hoon aapki....

Apne jo lines likhi hai, bohot gehre ma'ayene hain inke.....Meri nazar se kabhi guzri hon, aisa yaad to nahin....par jisne bhi likha hai zindagi ki sachcha likhi di in lines main.
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«Reply #4 on: August 05, 2009, 12:43:51 PM »
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Tallu

Kya baat hai boss Applause Applause Applause

Jagjit Singh ko bolo ab is ghazal ko gaaye Winking Usual Smile

LOL....Thanks a lot for appreciation......I will think about it tongue3
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«Reply #5 on: August 05, 2009, 01:15:33 PM »
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bahut khoob

talat dad qubool karain



javed
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«Reply #6 on: August 05, 2009, 01:41:08 PM »
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bahut khoob

talat dad qubool karain



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Bohot bohot shukriya aapka Javed sb.
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«Reply #7 on: August 05, 2009, 02:06:56 PM »
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bahut hi pyare aur dil ko chune waale alfaaz likhe hai aapne Talat ji.
har alfaaz behtrin......har lafj....bahut accha lga padhkar.... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #8 on: August 05, 2009, 04:53:47 PM »
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Wow Talat di. Bahoot Bahoot Khubsoorat Ghazal hai .. bahoot hi Behtareen hamesha ki tarah Usual Smile
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«Reply #9 on: August 05, 2009, 05:07:53 PM »
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Talat Jiiiii.. Kamaal kar diya.. !! Behad Hi Khubsoorat Alfaazon se Saji Gazal Pesh Ki hai aapne.. Dil Ko Chhoo Gai aapki Yeh Gazal.. Bahut Bahut Khoooooooob.. Applause Applause


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«Reply #10 on: August 05, 2009, 05:22:28 PM »
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hamesha ki tarah masha-allah Applause
i especially liked the optimistic ending
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«Reply #11 on: August 05, 2009, 06:24:24 PM »
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Really touching gazal Celmira ji,mindblowing creation. icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
beautiful lines by Smardia ji. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #12 on: August 06, 2009, 10:51:58 AM »
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kya baat hai    celmira ji.....

JO KHAWAAB PURA HO NA SAKHE,WAHI HAR ROZ DEKHNA CHAAAHE,
NA JAANE KYUN AISE KHAWAAB, DIL BAAR BAAR DEKHNA CHAAHE.

MUJHKO KHABAR HAI,WOH KABHI BAN SAKHE GAA NAHIN MERA,
NA JAANE KYUN  FIR BHI YEH MERA MANN,USKE PEECHE CHALNA CHAAHE.

HAAR CHUKI HAI ZINDAGI,AB TOH USKE LIYE,
KYUN FIR DIL GUJREN HUE HAR PAL YAAD RAKHNA CHAAHE.

ZAMEEN PAR RAHEKAR,CHU TO SAKTI NAHIN HUN AB ASMAAN,
FIR BHI NA JAANE KYUN ,GHANTON BHAITKAR YEH DIL TAARE GINNA CHAAHE.

AB TOH AISA LAGTA HAI DIL KO MERE,
KI BAKI ZINDAGI, USKI YAAD MAIN HI GUJAARNA CHAAHE.


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«Reply #13 on: August 06, 2009, 04:41:18 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Bahut Khooob Talat dost!!!

Asaan Se Lafzo mein Aapne Zindagi ki Kuch Sachai Bayaan ki..

Bahut Gehre Jazbaat Pesh kiye hai Aapne..

bahut Ache Dost!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #14 on: August 06, 2009, 04:43:50 PM »
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Good work Celmira and Cara ji!!!! bahoot acha likh ahai app dono ne.....

Celmira rythem of your poem.. kamaal ek ek shabd dil ko chuta hua.... Good creation!!
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