shaam dhalte hi...... MKV

by mkv on November 25, 2012, 04:05:46 AM
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ChaaNd  taaroN se baat karta huN
Roushnee dekh maiN machalta huN

Raat kaa intizaar rahta hai
Shaam dhalte hi maiN saNwarta huN

Unke vaadoN pe aitbaar mujhe
Apna sab kuch nisaar karta huN

baadloN meN jo aks dikhte haiN
Rang aksar maiN unme bharta huN

Ye ghazal kah di baton baton meN
Bahr aur qaafiyoN se darta huN

Zikra hota ‘mukesh’ rishtoN ka
vo bhi jalte haiN mai bhi jalta huN
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«Reply #1 on: November 25, 2012, 04:21:12 AM »
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Marhaba , Marhaba . Bahut  pyaari ghazal hai .
Har sher ghazab ka hai. dili mubarakbaad pesh
hai . yunhi   aks  mein  rang  bharte  rahye.
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«Reply #2 on: November 25, 2012, 04:44:32 AM »
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ChaaNd  taaroN se baat karta huN
Roushnee dekh maiN machalta huN

Raat kaa intizaar rahta hai
Shaam dhalte hi maiN saNwarta huN

Unke vaadoN pe aitbaar mujhe
Apna sab kuch nisaar karta huN

baadloN meN jo aks dikhte haiN
Rang aksar maiN unme bharta huN

Ye ghazal kah di baton baton meN
Bahr aur qaafiyoN se darta huN

Zikra hota ‘mukesh’ rishtoN ka
vo bhi jalte haiN mai bhi jalta huN


nice ,sir
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«Reply #3 on: November 25, 2012, 04:49:22 AM »
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wah wah
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«Reply #4 on: November 25, 2012, 05:07:45 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause bahut khoob tareef ke liye alfaaz nahi dheron daad
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«Reply #5 on: November 25, 2012, 05:09:28 AM »
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ek halke fulke mahaul wali ghazal rahi mukesh sahab, par fir v ahche sher bane haiN, padhne me mazaa aaya, umeed karte hain ki aage v aapka saath yuNhi bana rahegaa...
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«Reply #6 on: November 25, 2012, 05:26:30 AM »
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mashaa allaah mashaa allahaa marhabaa marhabaa dheron daad
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«Reply #7 on: November 25, 2012, 05:43:11 AM »
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 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Wah Wah Wah Wah Wah Behatreen Ghajal MkV Ji .
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«Reply #8 on: November 25, 2012, 06:28:19 AM »
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ChaaNd  taaroN se baat karta huN
Roushnee dekh maiN machalta huN

Raat kaa intizaar rahta hai
Shaam dhalte hi maiN saNwarta huN

Unke vaadoN pe aitbaar mujhe
Apna sab kuch nisaar karta huN

baadloN meN jo aks dikhte haiN
Rang aksar maiN unme bharta huN

Ye ghazal kah di baton baton meN
Bahr aur qaafiyoN se darta huN

Zikra hota ‘mukesh’ rishtoN ka
vo bhi jalte haiN mai bhi jalta huN

bohut khoob mukesh jee umda ghazal kahi hai. mashallah , wah wah wah wah dherroon daaad aur mubarakbaad qubool kareN.. Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: November 25, 2012, 08:11:53 AM »
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wah bohot khobsoorat likhi hai mukesh bhai Applause
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«Reply #10 on: November 25, 2012, 12:32:15 PM »
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mukesh ji bahut khoob Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

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«Reply #11 on: November 25, 2012, 01:07:44 PM »
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mkv ji. bahut achha likha hai.1 rau meri taraf se .
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«Reply #12 on: November 25, 2012, 11:15:50 PM »
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ChaaNd  taaroN se baat karta huN
Kisi din merii bhii baat kraa do na bhaai. Chaand se kuch sawaal karne hai.
Roushnee dekh maiN machalta huN
Jayada khoobsurat hai kyaa?

Raat kaa intizaar rahta hai
Raat ke intizaar? Par kyoN? Khariyat to hai na?
Vempire, ghost wegerah se dosti kar li hai kyaa?

Shaam dhalte hi maiN saNwarta huN
Maine sunaa thaa shaadii ke baad ye sab sauk khatam ho jaate hai. Par aap to..

Unke vaadoN pe aitbaar mujhe
Sachchi? Mujhe to kuch aur hi lagta hai. Yaad hai na us din ki baat?
Apna sab kuch nisaar karta huN
Aesa na karo bhaai. Baad me pachtana parega. Sudhar jaao
baadloN meN jo aks dikhte haiN
Rang aksar maiN unme bharta huN
Waah jee waah, ye miyaaN to jeete jaagte inshaano pe rang ferne lage. Shaayad beauty parler me kaam karte hai

Ye ghazal kah di baton baton meN
Kab kaheeN hame to sunaaee hi nahi paraa?
Bahr aur qaafiyoN se darta huN
Par kal to aap kah rahe the ki bhabhi ji ke alawa aap kisi se nahi darta
Zikra hota ‘mukesh’ rishtoN ka
vo bhi jalte haiN mai bhi jalta huN
Dono mere ghar aa jaao electricity bach jaayegi


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«Reply #13 on: November 26, 2012, 03:06:14 AM »
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Marhaba , Marhaba . Bahut  pyaari ghazal hai .
Har sher ghazab ka hai. dili mubarakbaad pesh
hai . yunhi   aks  mein  rang  bharte  rahye.
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bahut khushi huee aapka comment dekhkar.
ye sab aapka asheerwaad hai
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«Reply #14 on: November 28, 2012, 01:33:18 AM »
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nice ,sir
Thanks MB jee
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