Shaam ko shab sey eik baar sahar kar deykho!!

by abdbundeli on April 02, 2010, 06:27:21 AM
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Syaah zulfoun key saath, yaar, lahar kar deykho!
Shaam ko shab sey eik baar sahar kar deykho!!

Subah sey shaam guzarney ki baat kartey ho;
Bas eik baar, meyrey yaar, thhahar kar deykho!

Rooh-e-parcham hai nihaan, teyrey hansin daaman mein:
Khwaab mein hee sahee, mahboob, fahar kar deykho!

Bahaar jaa rahi hai, fir baheygi baad-e-samoom;
Jaa rahey dour ko khushgaam, dahar kar deykho!

Itnaa taya hai, ki, baanhuoun mein lalak jaageygee;
Meyrey aagosh-e-tasawwur mein sihar kar deykho!

Itnee duniya mein abhi bhi muqaam-e-may kam hain;
Shahra dar shahra saaqiyah ka shahar kar deykho!

Zeest-e-dariyaa to fanaa hokey fir rawaan hogee!
Lamhah-e-wasl, 'abd', safar-e-bahar kar, deykho!!

sahar = subah; Rooh-e-parcham = spirit of flag; nihaan = chhupee huyee; baad-e-samoom = khaasee garm hawaa,loo; khushgaam = (gajgaamee) aisee chaal jo deykhneywaaley key man mein khushee bhar dey; dahar = khaasaa lambaa arsaa; aagosh-e-tasawwur = vichaaroun/bhawnaaoun ki god; muqaam-e-may = wah jagah jahaan hameyshaa hi sharaab miltee ho; Shahra dar shahra = eik shahar sey doosarey shahar tak; Zeest-e-dariyaa = nadee ki zindagee; fanaa hokey = mar kar yaanee shookh kar; rawaan hogee = chalney/bahney lageygee; Lamhah-e-wasl = milan kaa pal/kshan; safar-e-bahar = samundar kaa safar.

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«Reply #1 on: April 02, 2010, 10:08:54 AM »
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bahut khoob ABD ji. Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: April 02, 2010, 02:08:56 PM »
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bahut khoob ABD ji. Applause Applause Applause

Thanks SURESH SANGWAN ji!

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«Reply #3 on: April 02, 2010, 09:17:19 PM »
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Bahut Khoob Abd Ji
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«Reply #4 on: April 03, 2010, 06:27:53 AM »
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Bahut Khoob Abd Ji

Thanks Rajesh Ji!

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«Reply #5 on: April 06, 2010, 10:03:43 PM »
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iss haqiqat se inkaar nahi ki ghazal paae ki hai .. lekin kya achha hota jo aap kathhin alfaaz ke maani'e bhi darj kardiye hote ..yehi guzarish hai ki jahaan jahaan kathin lafz hain wahaan unke maani'e likh dein to shair ko samajh ne main asaani hogi .. bhot achhi pesh kash.

Syaah zulfoun key saath, yaar, lahar kar deykho!
Shaam ko shab sey eik baar sahar kar deykho!!

Subah sey shaam guzarney ki baat kartey ho;
Bas eik baar, meyrey yaar, thhahar kar deykho!

Rooh-e-parcham hai nihaan, teyrey hansin daaman mein:
Khwaab mein hee sahee, mahboob, fahar kar deykho!

Bahaar jaa rahi hai, fir baheygi baad-e-samoom;
Jaa rahey dour ko khushgaam, dahar kar deykho!

Itnaa taya hai, ki, baanhuoun mein lalak jaageygee;
Meyrey aagosh-e-tasawwur mein sihar kar deykho!

Itnee duniya mein abhi bhi muqaam-e-may kam hain;
Shahra dar shahra saaqiyah ka shahar kar deykho!

Zeest-e-dariyaa to fanaa hokey fir rawaan hogee!
Lamhah-e-wasl, 'abd', safar-e-bahar kar, deykho!!

sahar = subah; Rooh-e-parcham = spirit of flag; nihaan = chhupee huyee; baad-e-samoom = khaasee garm hawaa,loo; khushgaam = (gajgaamee) aisee chaal jo deykhneywaaley key man mein khushee bhar dey; dahar = khaasaa lambaa arsaa; aagosh-e-tasawwur = vichaaroun/bhawnaaoun ki god; muqaam-e-may = wah jagah jahaan hameyshaa hi sharaab miltee ho; Shahra dar shahra = eik shahar sey doosarey shahar tak; Zeest-e-dariyaa = nadee ki zindagee; fanaa hokey = mar kar yaanee shookh kar; rawaan hogee = chalney/bahney lageygee; Lamhah-e-wasl = milan kaa pal/kshan; safar-e-bahar = samundar kaa safar.
                               

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«Reply #6 on: April 08, 2010, 06:50:54 AM »
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iss haqiqat se inkaar nahi ki ghazal paae ki hai .. lekin kya achha hota jo aap kathhin alfaaz ke maani'e bhi darj kardiye hote ..yehi guzarish hai ki jahaan jahaan kathin lafz hain wahaan unke maani'e likh dein to shair ko samajh ne main asaani hogi .. bhot achhi pesh kash.

Thanks nazar ghouri ji! Aapney jo chaahaa thaa, meiney kar diyaa hai, haalaanki, alfaaz itney 'kathin' to naheen they, muhtarim!

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«Reply #7 on: April 08, 2010, 07:09:39 AM »
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Wah bahut khoobsurat gazal pesh kiya aapne Abd ji.paheli 2 lines bahut pasand aayi .great creation. Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: April 08, 2010, 08:00:25 AM »
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wah wah wah bahut hi khoob bundeli ji...

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«Reply #9 on: April 08, 2010, 01:28:58 PM »
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Wah bahut khoobsurat gazal pesh kiya aapne Abd ji.paheli 2 lines bahut pasand aayi .great creation. Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause

Thanks Madhu!

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«Reply #10 on: April 08, 2010, 01:29:49 PM »
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wah wah wah bahut hi khoob bundeli ji...

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Thanks Jasbir ji!

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«Reply #11 on: April 08, 2010, 03:25:09 PM »
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Bahut bahut khoob
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«Reply #12 on: April 08, 2010, 03:37:53 PM »
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Mohobbat Ki Aatish Edhar Hi Sahi
Mere Gam Se Vo Bekhaber Hi Sahi

Yu Hi Dil Mein Rehe Tum Hamare Sada
Tera Ghar Hai Hum Dar Badar Hi Sahi

Mohabbat Ke Saye Tumhare Liye
Hume Dhoop Ka Ye shehar i Sahi

Ye Manzil Hamesha Rahe Khwaab Mein
Mere Naam Per Reh Guzer Hi sahi

Marsarat Ki Raatein Mubarak tumhe
Hame Intezare-Sehar Hi Sahi

Mere Sher Un Tak Pahunchte Toh Hai
Ki Pattar Pe Gira, Be-Asar Hi Sahi

Nahi Hai Muqaddar Mein Tum Kya Hua
Tere Justaju Mein Guzar Hi Sahi

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«Reply #13 on: April 08, 2010, 05:04:59 PM »
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wah wah wah Malli ji.. wah wah

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«Reply #14 on: April 09, 2010, 07:01:10 AM »
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Bahut bahut khoob


Mohobbat Ki Aatish Edhar Hi Sahi
Mere Gam Se Vo Bekhaber Hi Sahi


Yu Hi Dil Mein Rehe Tum Hamare Sada
Tera Ghar Hai Hum Dar Badar Hi Sahi

Mohabbat Ke Saye Tumhare Liye
Hume Dhoop Ka Ye shehar i Sahi

Ye Manzil Hamesha Rahe Khwaab Mein
Mere Naam Per Reh Guzer Hi sahi

Marsarat Ki Raatein Mubarak tumhe
Hame Intezare-Sehar Hi Sahi

Mere Sher Un Tak Pahunchte Toh Hai
Ki Pattar Pe Gira, Be-Asar Hi Sahi

Nahi Hai Muqaddar Mein Tum Kya Hua
Tere Justaju Mein Guzar Hi Sahi



Thanks malli ji! Khasee achchhee gazal peysh ki hai! Waah!

Asar, asar hai; kabhi beyasar nahin hotaa!
Kuchh to hotaa hai, agar, beej gayaa ho boyaa!
Justajoo keejiye, to, raah nikal aatee hai;
Khwaab aayengey khoob, jab bhi karogey soyaa!!

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