Sitam pe sitam...............................................Aqsh

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Sitam pe sitam kyun, kiye jaa rahe ho
Churakar nazar, aaj tadpa rahe ho

Aji khoob apni, adaayein lutakar
Batao kahan se, chale aa rahe ho

Sanam pyaar karna, hame tum sikhakar
Kaho kyun mujhe dekh, katra rahe ho

Bahut dard dekar, mujhe zindagi mein
Nahi shak hame tum bhi, ghabra rahe ho

Saja ke jo rakhee, hamari mohabbat
Jata do na kyun aaj, Sharma rahe ho


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«Reply #1 on: February 10, 2013, 03:19:43 PM »
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bohut umda bohut khubsurat khayaal hai is par do line kehna chahunga agar izaazat ho apki to
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«Reply #2 on: February 10, 2013, 03:22:26 PM »
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Sitam pe sitam kyun, kiye jaa rahe ho
Churakar nazar, aaj tadpa rahe ho

Aji khoob apni, adaayein lutakar
Batao kahan se, chale aa rahe ho

Sanam pyaar karna, hame tum sikhakar
Kaho kyun mujhe dekh, katra rahe ho

Bahut dard dekar, mujhe zindagi mein
Nahi shak hame tum bhi, ghabra rahe ho

Saja ke jo rakhee, hamari mohabbat
Jata do na kyun aaj, Sharma rahe ho



Aji khoob apni, adaayein lutakar
Batao kahan se, chale aa rahe ho

zabardast aqsh ji..
lajawab kadiye...ye line sab se achhi lagi hai...
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«Reply #3 on: February 10, 2013, 03:24:07 PM »
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just excellent full marks
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«Reply #4 on: February 10, 2013, 03:31:45 PM »
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bohut umda bohut khubsurat khayaal hai is par do line kehna chahunga agar izaazat ho apki to
Thank you sahill jee. agar aap chaho toh likh sakte ho
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«Reply #5 on: February 10, 2013, 03:32:24 PM »
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Aji khoob apni, adaayein lutakar
Batao kahan se, chale aa rahe ho

zabardast aqsh ji..
lajawab kadiye...ye line sab se achhi lagi hai...
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thank you sooooooooo much sahal and thnx for the rau also
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«Reply #6 on: February 10, 2013, 03:32:56 PM »
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just excellent full marks
Thank you Saini sir sooooo much
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«Reply #7 on: February 10, 2013, 03:34:20 PM »
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Bahut achchhey, Aqsh ji! Waah!
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«Reply #8 on: February 10, 2013, 03:38:13 PM »
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Bahut achchhey, Aqsh ji! Waah!
thnx abdbundeli jee
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«Reply #9 on: February 10, 2013, 03:41:41 PM »
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Sitam pe sitam kyun, kiye jaa rahe ho
Churakar nazar, aaj tadpa rahe ho

Aji khoob apni, adaayein lutakar
Batao kahan se, chale aa rahe ho

Sanam pyaar karna, hame tum sikhakar
Kaho kyun mujhe dekh, katra rahe ho

Bahut dard dekar, mujhe zindagi mein
Nahi shak hame tum bhi, ghabra rahe ho

Saja ke jo rakhee, hamari mohabbat
Jata do na kyun aaj, Sharma rahe ho




bahut khoob........!
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«Reply #10 on: February 10, 2013, 03:44:19 PM »
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bahut khoob........!
thnx sheba jee
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«Reply #11 on: February 10, 2013, 03:46:31 PM »
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Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah behtareeeeeeeeeeeeen, bahut bahut khoob Aqsh jee. Kaafi achha likha hai, mukammal behr meiN hai aur khyalaat bhi achhe zaahir kiye haiN. YuN hi likhte rahiye.
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«Reply #12 on: February 10, 2013, 03:49:53 PM »
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Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah behtareeeeeeeeeeeeen, bahut bahut khoob Aqsh jee. Kaafi achha likha hai, mukammal behr meiN hai aur khyalaat bhi achhe zaahir kiye haiN. YuN hi likhte rahiye.
Iftakhar jee bahut bahut shukriya housla afzai ka. aage bhi isi tarah saath banaye rakhe.
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«Reply #13 on: February 10, 2013, 04:55:04 PM »
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Sitam pe sitam kyun, kiye jaa rahe ho
Churakar nazar, aaj tadpa rahe ho

Aji khoob apni, adaayein lutakar
Batao kahan se, chale aa rahe ho

Sanam pyaar karna, hame tum sikhakar
Kaho kyun mujhe dekh, katra rahe ho

Bahut dard dekar, mujhe zindagi mein
Nahi shak hame tum bhi, ghabra rahe ho

Saja ke jo rakhee, hamari mohabbat
Jata do na kyun aaj, Sharma rahe ho





Bahut Bahut Khoob Aqshji..

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«Reply #14 on: February 10, 2013, 05:22:02 PM »
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bahut khoooob..
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