Subah Likhti Rahi

by suman59 on February 05, 2013, 04:01:02 PM
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«Reply #15 on: February 06, 2013, 12:05:38 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Waah waah waah suman jee bahut pasand aayi aapki yeh kalaam. dil ko choo gayi. padhkar maza aa gaya. hamari dili mubarakbad qubool kare
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«Reply #16 on: February 07, 2013, 01:29:28 AM »
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wah wah wah
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«Reply #17 on: February 07, 2013, 08:25:37 AM »
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fabulous!

really nice,especially the following inspiring optimistic couplet...
Bahut bechain rehta tha khula aakash choone ko
Bahut khush laga vo kal ek parinde ki rihayi par

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«Reply #18 on: March 09, 2013, 06:53:44 PM »
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बहुत खूब.. युही ही लिखते रहे.. और हमेशा खुश रहे

shukriya Rishi Agrawal jee
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«Reply #19 on: March 09, 2013, 06:54:13 PM »
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Zabardast........ Bahut bahut bahut khooooooobsurat.
Mujhe aesi poetry bahut pasand aatii hai.
Aesii poetry dil ko chho jaatii hai.
Kuch sher wakai daad ke kaabil hai

thank you beta
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«Reply #20 on: March 09, 2013, 06:54:54 PM »
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boht acha likha hai suman ji

thank you saahill jee
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«Reply #21 on: March 09, 2013, 06:56:12 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

 Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #22 on: March 09, 2013, 07:00:15 PM »
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Behtarrrrrrreeeeeeeeeeeeen, superb aur excellent, bahut khoob, maza aa gaya padh kar Suman jee, aur khaastaur pe "Behayaai" aur "Muh Dikhaai" waale she'r bahut pasand aaye.

Aapka bahut bahut shukriya Ahmad jee
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«Reply #23 on: March 09, 2013, 07:04:37 PM »
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bht khoob,suman ji. 3rd sher bht pasand aaya.

Hasan sb,

thanks a lot jee
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«Reply #24 on: March 09, 2013, 07:05:41 PM »
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icon_salut dil ko chhu gayi.................
shukriya sanjayudas jee
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«Reply #25 on: March 09, 2013, 07:06:29 PM »
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wow wow wow.. bahut hi acha laga mujhe.,. awesome..
please accept a rau .. Usual Smile

aapka bahut bahut shukriya dear lovely
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«Reply #26 on: March 09, 2013, 07:07:13 PM »
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Bahut hi rawaan ghazal kahee hai aapne..
philhaal bandhe haathoN se tareef.. Applause Applause Applause
thanks mkv jee
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«Reply #27 on: March 09, 2013, 07:08:24 PM »
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Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

 Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #28 on: March 09, 2013, 07:09:40 PM »
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kamal ho suman aap ,...atti sundar Usual Smile,............bohat c daad,..........
tks dear laaiba
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«Reply #29 on: March 09, 2013, 07:11:16 PM »
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Hriday jee and aarish jee aap dono ka bahut bahut shukriya
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