main kavitayein likhti hun... charan..

by lovely_charan on February 06, 2013, 08:13:42 PM
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«Reply #15 on: February 06, 2013, 11:23:10 PM »
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bahut bahut badhiya..
what a poetic talent..waah waah
kya baat hai..

pyar jab darpan mein nazar aata hai.. chehra aap hi gulabi ho jata hai.. sadaayein paas nahi aati.. tab.. main kavitayein likhti hun..

bachpan ekdam se ubhar aata hai.. nishchhal man machal jata hai.. samajhdari raas nahi aati.. tab.. main kavitayein likhti hun..

mausam jab rang badalta hai.. kaliyon ka roop nikharta hai.. doori dil se sahi nahi jaati.. tab.. main kavitayein likhti hun..

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«Reply #16 on: February 06, 2013, 11:24:24 PM »
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vishwas aapki na tootegi
meri kalam ki dhaar bhi footegi
ik jyot prem ka jal jaega fir

mai bhi kavitayen likhunga---

jab taras prabhu ki badh jaegi
niras pran ye kilkaegi
kaal kalesh aur dosh mukt
jab maat ye meri dhul jaegi fir

mai bhi kavitaen likhunga--

hars ka wo ik ujiyara sa
tams ka jo tha andhyara sa
chamak agan ki jab aaegi fir

mai bhi kavitaen lkhunga
mai bhi kavitaen likhunga---
------- Usual Smile

aapka jawab to lajawab tha
aur aap bht achi kavita likhti ho
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«Reply #17 on: February 06, 2013, 11:28:38 PM »
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bahut bahut badhiya..
what a poetic talent..waah waah
kya baat hai..

pyar jab darpan mein nazar aata hai.. chehra aap hi gulabi ho jata hai.. sadaayein paas nahi aati.. tab.. main kavitayein likhti hun..

bachpan ekdam se ubhar aata hai.. nishchhal man machal jata hai.. samajhdari raas nahi aati.. tab.. main kavitayein likhti hun..

mausam jab rang badalta hai.. kaliyon ka roop nikharta hai.. doori dil se sahi nahi jaati.. tab.. main kavitayein likhti hun..

Applause Applause keep it up

bahut bahut shukriya aapka.. itni sari tareef nahi kijiye sir.. mujhe aadat nahi hai Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #18 on: February 06, 2013, 11:33:11 PM »
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vishwas aapki na tootegi
meri kalam ki dhaar bhi footegi
ik jyot prem ka jal jaega fir

mai bhi kavitayen likhunga---

jab taras prabhu ki badh jaegi
niras pran ye kilkaegi
kaal kalesh aur dosh mukt
jab maat ye meri dhul jaegi fir

mai bhi kavitaen likhunga--

hars ka wo ik ujiyara sa
tams ka jo tha andhyara sa
chamak agan ki jab aaegi fir

mai bhi kavitaen lkhunga
mai bhi kavitaen likhunga---
------- Usual Smile

aapka jawab to lajawab tha
aur aap bht achi kavita likhti ho

shukriya aapka. hum toh bas seekh rahe hain..

but yeh sach hai ki hum kavita likhenge.. Usual Smile Usual Smile

aur aap bhi bahut bahut ache kavi banenge.. tongue3 Usual Smile
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«Reply #19 on: February 06, 2013, 11:45:12 PM »
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shukriya aapka. hum toh bas seekh rahe hain..

but yeh sach hai ki hum kavita likhenge.. Usual Smile Usual Smile

aur aap bhi bahut bahut ache kavi banenge.. tongue3 Usual Smile
bas ji aap aapki sangat ka asar h
jo mehendi pisne wale ke haatho ki trha hi khud hi laal ho gya Usual Smile

mai banu na banu par aap bht achi kavayatri ban jaogi Usual Smile

likhte rahie
god bless u
thanx
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«Reply #20 on: February 06, 2013, 11:50:21 PM »
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thank you ji.. and god bless you too Usual Smile

i wish ki aap bahut ache kavi bane aur hume bhi kuch sikhate rahein Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #21 on: February 06, 2013, 11:53:20 PM »
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thnx
bt sarfire kavi nhi bn skte :
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«Reply #22 on: February 06, 2013, 11:55:24 PM »
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ban sakte hain.. jaise sirfire aashiq.. waise hi.. hehehhe. . tongue3
anyways.. no kidding.. u r great poet Usual Smile
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«Reply #23 on: February 07, 2013, 12:23:16 AM »
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mujhe shayari nahi aati..
main kavitayein likhti hun..
aakarshak dairy nahi aati..

main kavitayein likhti hun..


dard jab hadd se guzar jata hai...
lahu aankhon mein utar aata hai..
dhadkan bhi saath nahi deti..tab..

main kavitayein likhti hun..

pyar jab darpan mein nazar aata hai..
chehra aap hi gulabi ho jata hai..
sadaayein paas nahi aati.. tab..

main kavitayein likhti hun..

bachpan ekdam se ubhar aata hai..
nishchhal man machal jata hai..
samajhdari raas nahi aati.. tab..

main kavitayein likhti hun..

mausam jab rang badalta hai..
kaliyon ka roop nikharta hai..
doori dil se sahi nahi jaati.. tab..

main kavitayein likhti hun..

kuch kehne ko jab nahi bachta hai..
kisi ka sath hona bhi akharta hai..
apni chhaya bhi nazar nahi aati.. tab..

main kavitayein likhti hun...



kya khoob likha hai lovely. very touchy.......!
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«Reply #24 on: February 07, 2013, 12:24:11 AM »
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thanks a lot sheba ji Usual Smile
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«Reply #25 on: February 07, 2013, 12:49:15 AM »
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Waaaaaaaaaah waah waah waah, bahut khoobsoorat kavita likhi hai Lovely_Charan jee aapne, bahut achhi lagi mujhe. Bahut bahut mubarakbaad meri taraf se. YuN hi aage bhi likhte rahiye.
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«Reply #26 on: February 07, 2013, 12:51:46 AM »
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thank yo uvery much janaab.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #27 on: February 07, 2013, 08:00:51 AM »
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bohut khoob lovely jee naam ki tarha lovely kavita likhi hai aapne yunhi lovely lovely kavita likhti rahen lovely jee. mubarakbaad qubool karEn
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«Reply #28 on: February 07, 2013, 09:47:08 AM »
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waah waah bahut khoob
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«Reply #29 on: February 07, 2013, 01:50:27 PM »
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Nice!
Dilon pe koi pahra na ehsaas ki koi qaid hoti hai
Yeh jo ehsaas hain bas aankhon se bayan hotey hain
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