Sunharaa lamhaa nazdeek aane to do!

by abdbundeli on March 16, 2016, 08:18:07 AM
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Sunharaa lamhaa nazdeek aane to do!
Unko apne hi ghar par bulaane to do!!

Kyaa patah, aaj hi noubahaar aa jage?
Kuchh chhupaate laboun ko bahaane to do!

Ham khafaa hi kahaan hain, ki, maanen nahin;
Ru-b-ru paa, uyoon ko manaane to do!

Yah dahar hai khushi kaa, shab-e-wasl hai;
Khwaabgaah hai sajaa, muskuraane to do!

Jaantaa hun, ki, ahbaab, ahbaab hain!
Apnee duniya, ‘abd’ ko sajaane to do!!

- abd bundeli
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«Reply #1 on: March 16, 2016, 08:34:06 AM »
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«Reply #2 on: March 16, 2016, 11:08:20 AM »
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Abd Jee Aadaab...!

bahut khoob janab bahut khoob ... Bade hi khoob khayaaloN ko umdaa lafz diye haiN aapne...

Behad achchi kalaam huyi hai ... is khoob kalaam par humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez...



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«Reply #3 on: March 16, 2016, 12:53:46 PM »
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bahot badhiya.....
humari ek gujarish hai aapse ..hume itni Urdu nahi aati to jo bhi Urdu ke difficult words hai use meaning ke saath creation ke niche likh diya kijiye...samjne mai aasani rahegi hume...
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«Reply #4 on: March 16, 2016, 12:54:17 PM »
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«Reply #5 on: March 16, 2016, 01:14:39 PM »
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Abd ji behad umda peshkash... dheron daad, bas yun hi behtreen ghazlen likhte rahiye aur hamen padhate rahiye...
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«Reply #6 on: March 16, 2016, 03:02:19 PM »
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«Reply #7 on: March 16, 2016, 07:32:48 PM »
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«Reply #8 on: March 17, 2016, 12:14:54 PM »
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Shukriyah janaab!
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«Reply #9 on: March 17, 2016, 12:16:53 PM »
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Abd Jee Aadaab...!

bahut khoob janab bahut khoob ... Bade hi khoob khayaaloN ko umdaa lafz diye haiN aapne...

Behad achchi kalaam huyi hai ... is khoob kalaam par humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez...



Shukriyah janaab! Khuda Hafiz!
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«Reply #10 on: March 17, 2016, 12:19:12 PM »
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bahot badhiya.....
humari ek gujarish hai aapse ..hume itni Urdu nahi aati to jo bhi Urdu ke difficult words hai use meaning ke saath creation ke niche likh diya kijiye...samjne mai aasani rahegi hume...

Shukriyah Shikha ji! Koshish karuungaa!
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«Reply #11 on: March 17, 2016, 12:19:53 PM »
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Shukriyah janaab!
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«Reply #12 on: March 17, 2016, 12:21:49 PM »
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Abd ji behad umda peshkash... dheron daad, bas yun hi behtreen ghazlen likhte rahiye aur hamen padhate rahiye...

Shukriyah janaab! Sanchit ji, aapkaa swaagat hai!
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«Reply #13 on: March 17, 2016, 12:22:53 PM »
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bahut khooob waah waah

Shukriyah Dr. Sb'!
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«Reply #14 on: March 17, 2016, 12:23:59 PM »
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Buhet badhiya

Shukriyah Maaya ji!
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