Taaron ki bheed me chaand hai akela.....premdeep

by premdeep on August 01, 2013, 05:47:09 PM
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Taaron ki bheed me chaand hai akela
zindagi to hai bas chala chali ka mela

Log kyu khamosh hain zabt sab awaaz hai
khushiyon ke baag mein hai gam ka basera

shama hai bujhi hui zindagi sahmi hui
Na jane is  raat ka kab hoga sawera

Apne bhi anjaan se  saye bhi shaitaan se
Har taraf dikhta hai bas dahshat ka chehra

Har insaan se rooth kar jane kaha gum gaye
un sacche zazbaton ko kis lachari ne ghera

Hawa ke rukh badal gaye log mile aur chale gaye
Tuta jo har mod par wo bechara dil tha mera
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«Reply #1 on: August 01, 2013, 05:55:43 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: August 01, 2013, 05:59:16 PM »
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«Reply #3 on: August 01, 2013, 06:09:36 PM »
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Quote from: premdeep on August 01, 2013, 05:47:09 PM
Taaron ki bheed me chaand hai akela
zindagi to hai bas chala chali ka mela

Log kyu khamosh hain zabt sab awaaz hai
khushiyon ke baag mein hai gam ka basera

shama hai bujhi hui zindagi sahmi hui
Na jane is  raat ka kab hoga sawera

Apne bhi anjaan se  saye bhi shaitaan se
Har taraf dikhta hai bas dahshat ka chehra

Har insaan se rooth kar jane kaha gum gaye
un sacche zazbaton ko kis lachari ne ghera

Hawa ke rukh badal gaye log mile aur chale gaye
Tuta jo har mod par wo bechara dil tha mera

nice,sir
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«Reply #4 on: August 01, 2013, 06:11:30 PM »
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #6 on: August 01, 2013, 10:33:32 PM »
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Log kyu khamosh hain zabt sab awaaz hai
khushiyon ke baag mein hai gam ka basera

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waah waah bahut khoob Premdeep jee, aakhiri sher khususann bahut pasand aaya.
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Bahut mast likha hai bhai..Ek RAU to banta hai..happy9
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thanks to all for the apreciation and thanks naswani ji for the rau
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«Reply #10 on: August 02, 2013, 07:02:05 PM »
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bahut khoob paramdeep ji.. Usual Smile
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