tadap ke mar gaye hote............

by sidra04 on October 29, 2013, 09:40:43 PM
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Mehfil ko hamaara aadaab...
Ek tarhi ghazal pesh karne ki gustaakhi kar rahi hoon.. ummeed hai pasand aayegee..



ye aarzoo thi tujhe gul ke roobaroo karte,
tere jamaal ki khushbuu ko chaar soo karte.

kisi Gulaab ka bosaa bhi le na paaye haiN,
Khud apne aap ko kaise lahoo lahoo karte.

parastish meiN agar terii hame miltii maafi,
tahajjud meiN tujhe hum yaad baa-wuzoo karte.

Qafas se chhooT bhi jaate to aur kyaa karte,
tiraa hi zikr sanam hum to koobakoo karte,

ijaazat mil gayii hotii jo baat kahne ki,
to shamma se hi saari raat guftgoo karte.

Anaa ke waaste hum kuch na keh sake jaanaa,
tadap ke marr gaye hote jo aarzoo karte


sidra..
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«Reply #1 on: October 29, 2013, 10:05:28 PM »
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bhut accha likha hai api ji
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«Reply #2 on: October 29, 2013, 10:22:44 PM »
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Bahot hii achha likha hai aapne Sidra jii... Usual Smile
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«Reply #4 on: October 29, 2013, 10:41:43 PM »
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bahot khooob...
Qafas se chhooT bhi jaate to aur kyaa karte,
tiraa hi zikr sanam hum to koobakoo karte,
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«Reply #5 on: October 29, 2013, 10:42:46 PM »
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ab ek rau is kalaam par n doon to naainsaafee hogee ji
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«Reply #6 on: October 30, 2013, 12:09:10 AM »
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Bahut Khoob  Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: October 30, 2013, 12:52:11 AM »
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waaaaaaaaaaaaaaah, behtareeeeeeeeeeen, khoobsoorat andaaze bayaaN, shururu ke teenoN sher bahut pasand aaye aur khaas taur se matla, dheroN daad aur ek Rau meri taraf se, per Rau baad meN de paauNga.
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«Reply #8 on: October 30, 2013, 01:01:55 AM »
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Mehfil ko hamaara aadaab...
Ek tarhi ghazal pesh karne ki gustaakhi kar rahi hoon.. ummeed hai pasand aayegee..



ye aarzoo thi tujhe gul ke roobaroo karte,
tere jamaal ki khushbuu ko chaar soo karte.

kisi Gulaab ka bosaa bhi le na paaye haiN,
Khud apne aap ko kaise lahoo lahoo karte.

parastish meiN agar terii hame miltii maafi,
tahajjud meiN tujhe hum yaad baa-wuzoo karte.

Qafas se chhooT bhi jaate to aur kyaa karte,
tiraa hi zikr sanam hum to koobakoo karte,

ijaazat mil gayii hotii jo baat kahne ki,
to shamma se hi saari raat guftgoo karte.

Anaa ke waaste hum kuch na keh sake jaanaa,
tadap ke marr gaye hote jo aarzoo karte


sidra..
Bahut achhi ghazal hai . magar 3rd aur 5th sher shayed ghalti se bahr se khaarij ho gaye hain . Nazr e saani kar lijye . achhi ghazal k liye bahut mubarakbaad .  
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«Reply #9 on: October 30, 2013, 01:39:33 AM »
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Main Bolunga To Bologe Bolta Hai


ALLAH Reham Kare


Shad o Aabaad Rahiye


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«Reply #10 on: October 30, 2013, 01:51:34 AM »
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Wwwwwaaaaahhhhhhhhhh .....Beintehaayee khoobsurat qalaam ..... Aap ko beshumaar daad Sidra ji ...
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«Reply #11 on: October 30, 2013, 02:47:25 AM »
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ye aarzoo thi tujhe gul ke roobaroo karte,
tere jamaal ki khushbuu ko chaar soo karte.

kisi Gulaab ka bosaa bhi le na paaye haiN,
Khud apne aap ko kaise lahoo lahoo karte.

Qafas se chhooT bhi jaate to aur kyaa karte,
tiraa hi zikr sanam hum to koobakoo karte,

Anaa ke waaste hum kuch na keh sake jaanaa,
tadap ke marr gaye hote jo aarzoo karte

Aadaab sidra jee
mujhe lagta hai bazm ko ek sitara mil gaya hai..
tarhi ghazal pesh akrne ka andaaz pyara raha..aapki is koshish ko kaafi hadd tak kaamyaab kahunga..
bahut pyari bahr hai..mere naye takhallush ka aaghaz isi bahr me likhi ghazal se hua tha.
likhti rahiye..best of luck
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«Reply #12 on: October 30, 2013, 03:42:04 AM »
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Mehfil ko hamaara aadaab...
Ek tarhi ghazal pesh karne ki gustaakhi kar rahi hoon.. ummeed hai pasand aayegee..



ye aarzoo thi tujhe gul ke roobaroo karte,
tere jamaal ki khushbuu ko chaar soo karte.
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kisi Gulaab ka bosaa bhi le na paaye haiN,
Khud apne aap ko kaise lahoo lahoo karte.
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parastish meiN agar terii hame miltii maafi,
tahajjud meiN tujhe hum yaad baa-wuzoo karte.
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Qafas se chhooT bhi jaate to aur kyaa karte,
tiraa hi zikr sanam hum to koobakoo karte,
 Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hardaisa jaadoo chala sanam ka ki qaid se riha hona na hona baraabar hai
ijaazat mil gayii hotii jo baat kahne ki,
to shamma se hi saari raat guftgoo karte.
main confuse hoo.n tumhara charecter yahaan parwaane ka hai kya
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Anaa ke waaste hum kuch na keh sake jaanaa,
tadap ke marr gaye hote jo aarzoo karte

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sidra..


acha likha hai sidra icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower!
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«Reply #13 on: October 30, 2013, 08:51:16 AM »
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«Reply #14 on: October 30, 2013, 03:56:24 PM »
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aap sabhi hzraat ka tahe dil se istaqbaal karti hoon aur dil se shukrguzaar hoon jo aap sab ne is koshish ko apna keemti waqt dyaa....

sudhaar ki koshsih karti rahungee.. basharte aap sab ka saath milta rahe....

thankss again all  of you...

Sidra..
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