Taish- BEHLAA raha huN khud ko ya TADPAA raha hooN maiN...!!

by ghayal_shayar on March 27, 2013, 02:07:42 AM
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Bazm ko is nacheez ka aadaab ek nayi ghazal pesh-e-khidmat hai bazm ke...


Beh'r- 221/ 2121/ 1221/ 212


Naakhoon se yuN zakhm ko sahlaa raha hoon main
Kuch aise ishq dard se farmaa rahaa hoon main

tu shokh ek ghazal, tiraa maqtaa raha hooN maiN,
tere baghair taish adhooraa raha hooN maiN...

Us waqt intezaar me haalat na puchiye,
Jab bhi vo baar baar kahe, aa raha hoon main..

ik taar sa hayaat ka toota abhi-abhi.....
ab kabr me padaa huya sustaa rahaa hu main

charche hamaare ishq ke phaile haiN har jagah,
sharmaa raha hun is pe ke itraa raha huN main...

manjil ki raah se na mulaakaat ho saki,,
lo karke pyaar sach kahu pachhhta raha hu main...

furkat me taish saath hai meena-o-shaayri,
behla raha huN khud ko ya tadpa raha hu main...
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«Reply #1 on: March 27, 2013, 02:11:30 AM »
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Bazm ko is nacheez ka aadaab ek nayi ghazal pesh-e-khidmat hai bazm ke...


Beh'r- 221/ 2121/ 1221/ 212


Naakhoon se har zakhm ko sahlaa raha hoon main
Kuch aise ishq dard se farmaa rahaa hoon main

tu shokh ek ghazal, tiraa maqtaa raha hooN maiN,
tere baghair taish adhooraa raha hooN maiN...

khud zakhm ko kured ke sehlaa raha hoon maiN,,
lagta hai doob ishq me paglaa raha hoon maiN...

Us waqt intezaar me haalat na puchiye,
Jab bhi vo baar baar kahe, aa raha hoon main..

ik taar sa hayaat ka toota abhi-abhi.....
ab kabr me padaa huya sustaa rahaa hu main

charche hamaare ishq ke phaile haiN har jagah,
sharmaa raha hun is pe ke itraa raha huN main...

manjil ki raah se na mulaakaat ho saki,,
lo karke pyaar sach kahu pachhhta raha hu main...

furkat me taish saath hai meena-o-shaayri,
behla raha huN khud ko ya tadpa raha hu main...


wah wah wah kya kahne..........!
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«Reply #2 on: March 27, 2013, 02:19:36 AM »
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waahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh taish ji kya kehne janaab behad khubsurat gazal bani hai iss bar to.... kuch ashaar to bas khanjar se lage dil par....... behad umdaah adaaygee ....... mashaallah kya kahene ........
tu shokh ek ghazal, tiraa maqtaa raha hooN maiN,
tere baghair taish adhooraa raha hooN maiN...

ik taar sa hayaat ka toota abhi-abhi.....
ab kabr me padaa huya sustaa rahaa hu main

charche hamaare ishq ke phaile haiN har jagah,
sharmaa raha hun is pe ke itraa raha huN main...

 
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«Reply #3 on: March 27, 2013, 02:30:50 AM »
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Taish Sahaab Aadaab!


Janab kia baat hai badi hi umdaa aur khoob kalaam kahi hai.. behad gehre aur achche
ashaar rahe janab... Usual Smile


HaaN aik baat nazar aayi aapne jo bher dii hai uske mutabik toH aapki kalaam nazar
nahi aayi..  mere khayaal se aapki bher hai..

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par behad umda kalaam rahi janab bade hi dilfareb aur umdaa khayaal padhne mile aaj
aapki kalam se meri hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye.. bazm meiN aate rahiye..
Shaad O aabaad rahiye..

Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile




Bazm ko is nacheez ka aadaab ek nayi ghazal pesh-e-khidmat hai bazm ke...


Beh'r- 221/ 2121/ 1221/ 212


Naakhoon se har zakhm ko sahlaa raha hoon main
Kuch aise ishq dard se farmaa rahaa hoon main

tu shokh ek ghazal, tiraa maqtaa raha hooN maiN,
tere baghair taish adhooraa raha hooN maiN...

Us waqt intezaar me haalat na puchiye,
Jab bhi vo baar baar kahe, aa raha hoon main..

ik taar sa hayaat ka toota abhi-abhi.....
ab kabr me padaa huya sustaa rahaa hu main

charche hamaare ishq ke phaile haiN har jagah,
sharmaa raha hun is pe ke itraa raha huN main...

manjil ki raah se na mulaakaat ho saki,,
lo karke pyaar sach kahu pachhhta raha hu main...

furkat me taish saath hai meena-o-shaayri,
behla raha huN khud ko ya tadpa raha hu main...

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«Reply #4 on: March 27, 2013, 02:35:54 AM »
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Taish Sahaab Aadaab!


Janab kia baat hai badi hi umdaa aur khoob kalaam kahi hai.. behad gehre aur achche
ashaar rahe janab... Usual Smile


HaaN aik baat nazar aayi aapne jo bher dii hai uske mutabik toH aapki kalaam nazar
nahi aayi..  mere khayaal se aapki bher hai..

221   222    122    1212


par behad umda kalaam rahi janab bade hi dilfareb aur umdaa khayaal padhne mile aaj
aapki kalam se meri hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye.. bazm meiN aate rahiye..
Shaad O aabaad rahiye..

Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile







bhai tareef ka shukriya, par beh'r to wahi hai saaheb, waise agar aap thodi taftees se bataayeN to shayad main aapka doubt clear kar sakuN, kis sher meN aapko aisa nazar aaya...??
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«Reply #5 on: March 27, 2013, 02:39:03 AM »
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Bazm ko is nacheez ka aadaab ek nayi ghazal pesh-e-khidmat hai bazm ke...


Beh'r- 221/ 2121/ 1221/ 212


Naakhoon se har zakhm ko sahlaa raha hoon main
Kuch aise ishq dard se farmaa rahaa hoon main

tu shokh ek ghazal, tiraa maqtaa raha hooN maiN,
tere baghair taish adhooraa raha hooN maiN...

Us waqt intezaar me haalat na puchiye,
Jab bhi vo baar baar kahe, aa raha hoon main..

ik taar sa hayaat ka toota abhi-abhi.....
ab kabr me padaa huya sustaa rahaa hu main

charche hamaare ishq ke phaile haiN har jagah,
sharmaa raha hun is pe ke itraa raha huN main...

manjil ki raah se na mulaakaat ho saki,,
lo karke pyaar sach kahu pachhhta raha hu main...

furkat me taish saath hai meena-o-shaayri,
behla raha huN khud ko ya tadpa raha hu main...



yaar saani bahut badhiyaa haiN saare... baaaki baad maiN matla check kato
apni takhti se

"har" lafz ... zakhm se pahle...
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«Reply #6 on: March 27, 2013, 02:39:53 AM »
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Janab matle ke pahle misre par hi gaur kar lijiye..

naa khoo n se har zakh m sah laa ra ha huN maiN

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Par dusra misra aapki bher meiN sahiN hai .. Huh?
 

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«Reply #7 on: March 27, 2013, 02:42:31 AM »
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bhai haan matle meN vo ghalti ho gayi thi 'har' lafz ki, uske liye main sharminda hun, kyunki jaldibaazi meN kayi baar rough wala misra hi type ho jata hai, isiliye maiN ba-qaayeda beh'r likh deta huN taaki kisi ko bhi kuch khaami dikhe to bata de, bahut bahut shukriya mere bhai, bas yuNhi humesha saath dete raho....
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«Reply #8 on: March 27, 2013, 02:46:15 AM »
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bhai haan matle meN vo ghalti ho gayi thi 'har' lafz ki, uske liye main sharminda hun, kyunki jaldibaazi meN kayi baar rough wala misra hi type ho jata hai, isiliye maiN ba-qaayeda beh'r likh deta huN taaki kisi ko bhi kuch khaami dikhe to bata de, bahut bahut shukriya mere bhai, bas yuNhi humesha saath dete raho....


Bhai aap jante hoN maiN bher meiN kamzor huN...

aap toH aage chale gaye hume bhi sikha kar apne barabar laa lijiye..
HaaN aap aap toH jante haiN indian folks rules and regulation ko aage jaate huye ki taNg khiNchne ka haq toH banta hai uske kareebi kaa.. tongue3 tongue3 tongue3


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«Reply #9 on: March 27, 2013, 02:50:32 AM »
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bhai haan matle meN vo ghalti ho gayi thi 'har' lafz ki, uske liye main sharminda hun, kyunki jaldibaazi meN kayi baar rough wala misra hi type ho jata hai, isiliye maiN ba-qaayeda beh'r likh deta huN taaki kisi ko bhi kuch khaami dikhe to bata de, bahut bahut shukriya mere bhai, bas yuNhi humesha saath dete raho....

isme sharminda hone wali kya baat hai.....
yar
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«Reply #10 on: March 27, 2013, 02:53:28 AM »
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isme sharminda hone wali kya baat hai.....
yar

bhai shayri adab ki cheez hoti hai, kisi mahapurush ne kaha tha, to ghalti ke liye sharmindaa hone se qad thode hi na ghat jaata hai... Usual Smile
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«Reply #11 on: March 27, 2013, 04:15:52 AM »
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So Cute
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«Reply #12 on: March 27, 2013, 06:25:46 AM »
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KYA BAAT HAI..!!
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«Reply #13 on: March 27, 2013, 09:16:19 AM »
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wah wah wah kya kahne..........!

pasand karne ka bahut bahut shukriya sheba ji, bas yuNhi aage v aap saath nibhatai rahiye.... Usual Smile
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«Reply #14 on: March 27, 2013, 01:22:11 PM »
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Bazm ko is nacheez ka aadaab ek nayi ghazal pesh-e-khidmat hai bazm ke...


Beh'r- 221/ 2121/ 1221/ 212


Naakhoon se yuN zakhm ko sahlaa raha hoon main
Kuch aise ishq dard se farmaa rahaa hoon main

tu shokh ek ghazal, tiraa maqtaa raha hooN maiN,
tere baghair taish adhooraa raha hooN maiN...

Us waqt intezaar me haalat na puchiye,
Jab bhi vo baar baar kahe, aa raha hoon main..

ik taar sa hayaat ka toota abhi-abhi.....
ab kabr me padaa huya sustaa rahaa hu main

charche hamaare ishq ke phaile haiN har jagah,
sharmaa raha hun is pe ke itraa raha huN main...

manjil ki raah se na mulaakaat ho saki,,
lo karke pyaar sach kahu pachhhta raha hu main...

furkat me taish saath hai meena-o-shaayri,
behla raha huN khud ko ya tadpa raha hu main...


furkat me taish saath hai meena-o-shaayri,
behla raha huN khud ko ya tadpa raha hu main...

fantastic.
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