Taish- khwaab ke us shahr ki TARAF...!!

by ghayal_shayar on July 28, 2013, 08:42:54 PM
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kyuN aitbaar tujhpe dil-o-jaan haar ke,
ye paiNtre haiN seekhne tujhse shikaar ke...

JaayeNge hum bhi khwaab ke us shahr ki taraf,
Kashti palat jo aaye musaafir utaar ke...

baazaar-e-jeest me thi bahut mehngi zindagi
do chaar din hooN maaNg main laaya udhaar ke,

maiN kya umeed unse karooN sach dikhaane ki,
vo aaina bhi dekhte aaNkheN utaar ke...

tere siwa na ishq kisi se hua hume.
dil ke ye falsafe hain kahaaN baar-baar ke...

dekha hai usko maine bhi kitne kareeb se,
jo chhup gaya hai yaadoN meN mujhko pukaar ke...

jo dard dena ho naya sa dijiyega ab,
humne bhi dekhe haiN yahaaN sab rang pyar ke...

kitne bahaane roz tumhare na milne ke,
do din ko zindagi teri dekheN guzaar ke...
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«Reply #1 on: July 28, 2013, 08:53:20 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: July 28, 2013, 09:12:30 PM »
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«Reply #4 on: July 28, 2013, 11:49:13 PM »
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JaayeNge hum bhi khwaab ke us shahr ki taraf,
Kashti palat jo aaye musaafir utaar ke...

ghazal ke is khayaal pe khusoosi daad
bahut badhiya
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«Reply #5 on: July 29, 2013, 12:47:58 AM »
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Bahut khoob likha hai taish bhai..dhero daad..happy9
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«Reply #6 on: July 29, 2013, 12:59:53 AM »
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bahut bahut khoob..
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«Reply #7 on: July 29, 2013, 01:32:04 AM »
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bahut umda janaab! u r among good poets of Yo aur wo aap sabit karte rahte hain! Daad ke saath Rau banta hai and it's given!
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«Reply #8 on: July 29, 2013, 01:58:44 AM »
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Quote from: Iqtedar on July 28, 2013, 08:53:20 PM
bahot khoooob  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

bhai jaan hausla afzaayi ka bahut bahut shukriya...!!
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«Reply #9 on: July 29, 2013, 03:30:16 AM »
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Quote from: Taish on July 28, 2013, 08:42:54 PM
kyuN aitbaar tujhpe dil-o-jaan haar ke,
ye paiNtre haiN seekhne tujhse shikaar ke...

JaayeNge hum bhi khwaab ke us shahr ki taraf,
Kashti palat jo aaye musaafir utaar ke...

baazaar-e-jeest me thi bahut mehngi zindagi
do chaar din hooN maaNg main laaya udhaar ke,

maiN kya umeed unse karooN sach dikhaane ki,
vo aaina bhi dekhte aaNkheN utaar ke...

tere siwa na ishq kisi se hua hume.
dil ke ye falsafe hain kahaaN baar-baar ke...

dekha hai usko maine bhi kitne kareeb se,
jo chhup gaya hai yaadoN meN mujhko pukaar ke...

jo dard dena ho naya sa dijiyega ab,
humne bhi dekhe haiN yahaaN sab rang pyar ke...

kitne bahaane roz tumhare na milne ke,
do din ko zindagi teri dekheN guzaar ke...

bahut khoob...........!
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«Reply #10 on: July 29, 2013, 03:38:22 AM »
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maiN kya umeed unse karooN sach dikhaane ki,
vo aaina bhi dekhte aaNkheN utaar ke...
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«Reply #11 on: July 29, 2013, 05:06:03 AM »
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वाह वाह क्या बात है बहुत खूब.
Quote from: Taish on July 28, 2013, 08:42:54 PM
kyuN aitbaar tujhpe dil-o-jaan haar ke,
ye paiNtre haiN seekhne tujhse shikaar ke...

JaayeNge hum bhi khwaab ke us shahr ki taraf,
Kashti palat jo aaye musaafir utaar ke...

baazaar-e-jeest me thi bahut mehngi zindagi
do chaar din hooN maaNg main laaya udhaar ke,

maiN kya umeed unse karooN sach dikhaane ki,
vo aaina bhi dekhte aaNkheN utaar ke...

tere siwa na ishq kisi se hua hume.
dil ke ye falsafe hain kahaaN baar-baar ke...

dekha hai usko maine bhi kitne kareeb se,
jo chhup gaya hai yaadoN meN mujhko pukaar ke...

jo dard dena ho naya sa dijiyega ab,
humne bhi dekhe haiN yahaaN sab rang pyar ke...

kitne bahaane roz tumhare na milne ke,
do din ko zindagi teri dekheN guzaar ke...
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«Reply #14 on: July 29, 2013, 02:33:36 PM »
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bahut bahut khooob taish saheb
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