TANHA TANHA RAATEIN HAIN .................... HASAN

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«Reply #15 on: April 15, 2012, 06:33:15 PM »
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aadaab hasan sir kya baat hai. Behad umda ashaar kahe aapne. Choti bahr ki is kalaam me maja aa gaya.
bahut  shukriya  ,mkv  ji . khush  rahiye .
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«Reply #16 on: April 15, 2012, 07:32:27 PM »
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Hijr  se  bojhal  raateiN  haiN ,
YaadoN  ki  baaraateiN  haiN

Pyaar  Mohabbat  dhoka  hai ,
Naasamjhi  ki  baatein   haiN

Ranj-o-alam  aur  Chashm-e-nam ,
Ishq  ki  sub  SaughaateiN  haiN

Tum  bin  Din  soonay - soonay ,
Tanha  tanha  raateioN  haiN

Aapas  mein  sulajh  jaayeingi ,
Teri  meri  baatein  haiN

Laakh  samajh  kar  chaalein  chal ,
Pahli  shahh  per  maatein  haiN

Khafgi  unki  duur  hui ,
Abb  roz  mulaqaateiN  haiN

Unn ke  meethe  sur  ye  'Hasan' ,
Bin  baadal  barsaateiN  haiN


Waaaaaaaah!Waaaaaaaaaaah! Waaaaaaah! Hasan Saheb bahut khoob!
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #17 on: April 15, 2012, 08:55:55 PM »
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this your very poem is ok
Thanx , the  poem  was  for  a  lean   session  
-  which , however ,  turned  hectic .
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«Reply #18 on: April 15, 2012, 11:11:19 PM »
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bahut bahut khoob
Shukriya , Saini  saheb .
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«Reply #19 on: April 15, 2012, 11:46:03 PM »
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Hijr  se  bojhal  raateiN  haiN ,
YaadoN  ki  baaraateiN  haiN

Pyaar  Mohabbat  dhoka  hai ,
Naasamjhi  ki  baatein   haiN

Ranj-o-alam  aur  Chashm-e-nam ,
Ishq  ki  sub  SaughaateiN  haiN

Tum  bin  Din  soonay - soonay ,
Tanha  tanha  raateioN  haiN

Aapas  mein  sulajh  jaayeingi ,
Teri  meri  baatein  haiN

Laakh  samajh  kar  chaalein  chal ,
Pahli  shahh  per  maatein  haiN

Khafgi  unki  duur  hui ,
Abb  roz  mulaqaateiN  haiN

Unn ke  meethe  sur  ye  'Hasan' ,
Bin  baadal  barsaateiN  haiN

BAHUT KHOOBSOORAT PESHKASH Clapping Smiley Clapping SmileyClapping Smiley Clapping Smiley DAAD KABOOL KARE..
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«Reply #20 on: April 16, 2012, 05:33:38 AM »
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 bahut hi khoobsurat ghazal likhi hai aapne. Bahut bahut mubarakbaad.
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #21 on: April 16, 2012, 12:31:53 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile
Qalb  saheb , Bhaut  shukriya .
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«Reply #22 on: April 16, 2012, 10:31:46 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #23 on: April 16, 2012, 11:38:19 PM »
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bhaut sundar  Applause Applause Applause
AMIT  JI  ,  BAHUT  BAHUT  DHANYAWAAD ,
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«Reply #24 on: April 17, 2012, 11:09:25 AM »
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Applause Clapping Smiley...baut badiya hasanji...Usual Smile
SHUKRIYA  ,  DOLLY  JI .
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«Reply #25 on: April 17, 2012, 12:08:27 PM »
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nice.....................!
Once again , Thanxalot !!!
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«Reply #26 on: April 17, 2012, 02:24:16 PM »
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Waaaaaaaah!Waaaaaaaaaaah! Waaaaaaah! Hasan Saheb bahut khoob!
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USHA  JI  , HAUSLA  AFZAI  KE  LIYE  BAHUT  BAHUT  SHUKRIYA  .
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BAHUT KHOOBSOORAT PESHKASH Clapping Smiley Clapping SmileyClapping Smiley Clapping Smiley DAAD KABOOL KARE..
SHUKRIYA  INJURED  WARRIOR  SAHEB .
HOPE  YOU  ARE  FULLY  WELL  NOW .
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«Reply #28 on: April 17, 2012, 08:59:30 PM »
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bahut hi khoobsurat ghazal likhi hai aapne. Bahut bahut mubarakbaad.
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
IFTIKHAR  SAHEB . HAUSLA  AFZAI  KE  LIYE  
BAHUT  BAHUT  SHUKRIYA .
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«Reply #29 on: April 17, 2012, 10:56:33 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
HRIDAY  JI , THANXALOT .
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