TANHA TANHA RAATEIN HAIN .................... HASAN

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Hijr  se  bojhal  raateiN  haiN ,
YaadoN  ki  baaraateiN  haiN

Pyaar  Mohabbat  dhoka  hai ,
Naasamjhi  ki  baatein   haiN

Ranj-o-alam  aur  Chashm-e-nam ,
Ishq  ki  sub  SaughaateiN  haiN

Tum  bin  Din  soonay - soonay ,
Tanha  tanha  raateioN  haiN

Aapas  mein  sulajh  jaayeingi ,
Teri  meri  baatein  haiN

Laakh  samajh  kar  chaalein  chal ,
Pahli  shahh  per  maatein  haiN

Khafgi  unki  duur  hui ,
Abb  roz  mulaqaateiN  haiN

Unn ke  meethe  sur  ye  'Hasan' ,
Bin  baadal  barsaateiN  haiN
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«Reply #1 on: April 14, 2012, 02:45:35 PM »
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gazab hai ji......... bahut hi lajawab peshkash

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«Reply #2 on: April 14, 2012, 02:55:24 PM »
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Wow jabadast.
Waah brother aapne to kamal hi kar diya.
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«Reply #3 on: April 14, 2012, 02:56:14 PM »
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Wow jabadast.
Waah brother aapne to kamal hi kar diya.
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«Reply #4 on: April 14, 2012, 03:09:25 PM »
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Siddiqui Sahaab Aadaab!



Masha Allah janab kia kahne aapke... waaH behad khoobsurati
se aapne ishq ko tafseelana bayaaN kiya hai... Usual Smile

Bahut khoob janab sabhi ashaar behad khoob rahe....
Aik khoobsurat aur umdaa kalaam par humari hazaaroN dili daad
O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile


Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile





Hijr  se  bojhal  raateiN  haiN ,
YaadoN  ki  baaraateiN  haiN

WaaH janab kia kahne behad khoobsurat matla kaha hai daad daad daad Usual Smile


Pyaar  Mohabbat  dhoka  hai ,
Naasamjhi  ki  baatein   haiN

Kia kahne janab... waaH behad khoob aur umdaa khayaal daad janab daad Usual Smile


Ranj-o-alam  aur  Chashm-e-nam ,
Ishq  ki  sub  SaughaateiN  haiN

Behad sahiN farmaya janab bahut khoob daad Usual Smile


Tum  bin  Din  soonay - soonay ,
Tanha  tanha  raateioN  haiN

Bahut khoob daad Usual Smile


Aapas  mein  sulajh  jaayeingi ,
Teri  meri  baatein  haiN

WaaH kia kahne bahut khoob daad Usual Smile


Laakh  samajh  kar  chaalein  chal ,
Pahli  shahh  per  maatein  haiN

Kia baat hai bahut khoob janab ....


Khafgi  unki  duur  hui ,
Abb  roz  mulaqaateiN  haiN

Bahut khoob ... Usual Smile


Unn ke  meethe  sur  ye  'Hasan' ,
Bin  baadal  barsaateiN  haiN

bahut achche daad


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«Reply #5 on: April 14, 2012, 03:13:48 PM »
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aadaab hasan sir kya baat hai. Behad umda ashaar kahe aapne. Choti bahr ki is kalaam me maja aa gaya.
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«Reply #6 on: April 14, 2012, 03:29:33 PM »
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Hijr  se  bojhal  raateiN  haiN ,
YaadoN  ki  baaraateiN  haiN

Pyaar  Mohabbat  dhoka  hai ,
Naasamjhi  ki  baatein   haiN

Ranj-o-alam  aur  Chashm-e-nam ,
Ishq  ki  sub  SaughaateiN  haiN

Tum  bin  Din  soonay - soonay ,
Tanha  tanha  raateioN  haiN

Aapas  mein  sulajh  jaayeingi ,
Teri  meri  baatein  haiN

Laakh  samajh  kar  chaalein  chal ,
Pahli  shahh  per  maatein  haiN

Khafgi  unki  duur  hui ,
Abb  roz  mulaqaateiN  haiN

Unn ke  meethe  sur  ye  'Hasan' ,
Bin  baadal  barsaateiN  haiN


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«Reply #7 on: April 14, 2012, 04:16:46 PM »
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bahut bahut khoob
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«Reply #8 on: April 14, 2012, 05:56:55 PM »
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Hijr  se  bojhal  raateiN  haiN ,
YaadoN  ki  baaraateiN  haiN

Pyaar  Mohabbat  dhoka  hai ,
Naasamjhi  ki  baatein   haiN

Ranj-o-alam  aur  Chashm-e-nam ,
Ishq  ki  sub  SaughaateiN  haiN

Tum  bin  Din  soonay - soonay ,
Tanha  tanha  raateioN  haiN

Aapas  mein  sulajh  jaayeingi ,
Teri  meri  baatein  haiN

Laakh  samajh  kar  chaalein  chal ,
Pahli  shahh  per  maatein  haiN

Khafgi  unki  duur  hui ,
Abb  roz  mulaqaateiN  haiN

Unn ke  meethe  sur  ye  'Hasan' ,
Bin  baadal  barsaateiN  haiN


 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #9 on: April 14, 2012, 05:59:17 PM »
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bhaut sundar  Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: April 14, 2012, 08:02:02 PM »
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 Applause Clapping Smiley...baut badiya hasanji...Usual Smile
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«Reply #11 on: April 14, 2012, 10:30:18 PM »
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gazab hai ji......... bahut hi lajawab peshkash

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soudagar ji, Hausla afzai k lye bht bht shukriya.
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«Reply #12 on: April 15, 2012, 11:06:51 AM »
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Wow jabadast.
Waah brother aapne to kamal hi kar diya.
Bahuts hukriya , masoom  saheb.Khush rahye .
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«Reply #13 on: April 15, 2012, 02:10:41 PM »
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Siddiqui Sahaab Aadaab!



Masha Allah janab kia kahne aapke... waaH behad khoobsurati
se aapne ishq ko tafseelana bayaaN kiya hai... Usual Smile

Bahut khoob janab sabhi ashaar behad khoob rahe....
Aik khoobsurat aur umdaa kalaam par humari hazaaroN dili daad
O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile

BAHUT BAHUT SHUKRIYA , PARWAAZ  JI.
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«Reply #14 on: April 15, 2012, 02:34:55 PM »
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Hijr  se  bojhal  raateiN  haiN ,
YaadoN  ki  baaraateiN  haiN
jab mohabbat ka paighaam diya tha us wqat meri koi ahmiyat hi na thi ab ro- gaa rahe ho. Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased
Pyaar  Mohabbat  dhoka  hai ,
Naasamjhi  ki  baatein   haiN
aisa dhokha samajhdaar loag hi zayaada khate hain jaise main Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased
Ranj-o-alam  aur  Chashm-e-nam ,
Ishq  ki  sub  SaughaateiN  haiN
dil diya dard liye .haaye ALLAH ye maine kya kiya. ro to main rahi hoo.n tumhein kya farq. buss likh diya. kuch ehsaas bhi hai crybaby2 crybaby2 crybaby2 icon_scratch icon_scratch icon_scratch Is it SO! Is it SO! Is it SO! Is it SO! Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile
Tum  bin  Din  soonay - soonay ,
Tanha  tanha  raateioN  haiN
acha aur koi mili nahin baad uske. chalo acha hai rote raho. jab mera mann paseeje ga phir sochoo.n gi icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
Aapas  mein  sulajh  jaayeingi ,
Teri  meri  baatein  haiN
pahle kabhi nahin sunaa abb ye aqal kahaan se aayi ji tumhein. bolo to...! icon_silent icon_silent icon_silent icon_silent icon_silent Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased
Laakh  samajh  kar  chaalein  chal ,
Pahli  shahh  per  maatein  haiN
mujhe shatranj nahin aati . aur deko kahe deti hoon mere saath koi chaal mat chalna. Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased
Khafgi  unki  duur  hui ,
Abb  roz  mulaqaateiN  haiN
buss tumhara dil rakhne ke liye mil leti hoo.n shayad tumhein khabar nahin tumhari amma ne mujh se guzarish ki thi. is liye unka dhyaan rakhti hoo.n tumhara nahin. icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
Unn ke  meethe  sur  ye  'Hasan' ,
Bin  baadal  barsaateiN  haiN

chalo isi muqalte mein raho . acha hai.mera aangan to khushq hai

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