Tanhaa hotaa hun: gungunaataa huun!

by abdbundeli on August 15, 2010, 01:25:05 PM
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Tanhaa hotaa hun: gungunaataa huun!
Mein tumhain roz kuchh sunaataa huun!!

Dard key pahaluoun mein jeetaa huun;
Aur, rah-rah tumhain bulaataa huun!

Husn kee eik jhalak kee khaatir,
Kahkashaaoun sey dil lagaataa huun!

Sochataa roz na jaaney kyaa-kyaa?
Khuld ki waadiyoun mein jaataa huun!

Khojtaa kuchh dimaag mein har soo:
Har tasawwur mein tumhain paataa huun!

Chashm tar hain azal sey deykho to!
Phir bhi kahtey ho, dil dukhaataa huun!!

Qasb hain: dil mein, jigar mein gahrey!
Paikar-e-khud ko, khud sataataa huun?

Mein, 'abd', zaar-zaar rotaa huun!
Log kahtey hain: muskuraataa huun!!

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«Reply #1 on: August 15, 2010, 02:25:00 PM »
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Mein, 'abd', zaar-zaar rotaa huun!
Log kahtey hain: muskuraataa huun!!

Wah bhaiyya wahhhhhhhh jitna aapko padha hai pata nahi yeh Ghazal un sab se alag lagi........bohat bohat khoobsurat peshkash.......maza aa gaya.
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«Reply #2 on: August 15, 2010, 02:27:17 PM »
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Tanhaa hotaa hun: gungunaataa huun!
Mein tumhain roz kuchh sunaataa huun!!

Dard key pahaluoun mein jeetaa huun;
Aur, rah-rah tumhain bulaataa huun!

Husn kee eik jhalak kee khaatir,
Kahkashaaoun sey dil lagaataa huun!

Sochataa roz na jaaney kyaa-kyaa?
Khuld ki waadiyoun mein jaataa huun!

Khojtaa kuchh dimaag mein har soo:
Har tasawwur mein tumhain paataa huun!

Chashm tar hain azal sey deykho to!
Phir bhi kahtey ho, dil dukhaataa huun!!

Qasb hain: dil mein, jigar mein gahrey!
Paikar-e-khud ko, khud sataataa huun?

Mein, 'abd', zaar-zaar rotaa huun!
Log kahtey hain: muskuraataa huun!!

                    - abd bundeli



Waah Waah Waah!!!!

Bahut bahut Khoob Abdji.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #3 on: August 15, 2010, 02:35:45 PM »
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bht hi pyari gazal hai ye aapki abdbundeli ji......
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«Reply #4 on: August 15, 2010, 06:38:19 PM »
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bahut khoob likha hai aapne Abdbundeli ji...!!!
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«Reply #5 on: August 16, 2010, 06:03:36 AM »
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Mein, 'abd', zaar-zaar rotaa huun!
Log kahtey hain: muskuraataa huun!!

Wah bhaiyya wahhhhhhhh jitna aapko padha hai pata nahi yeh Ghazal un sab se alag lagi........bohat bohat khoobsurat peshkash.......maza aa gaya.

Thanks a lot Sajid bhai!
Zindagee tamaam waaqyaat sey roo-b-roo hotee hai!

Kabhee hansnaa, kabhee ronaa, kabhee 'athhkheyliyaan' karnaa;
Qayaam-e-zeest mein tab tifl they, phir noujawaan bhee they;
Talab kee raah mein aaye na jaaney kitney 'chouraahey':
Yeh muttahidah anaasir dost, tab dour-e-rawaan bhee they!

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«Reply #6 on: August 16, 2010, 06:08:48 AM »
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Waah Waah Waah!!!!

Bahut bahut Khoob Abdji.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


Bahut-bahut shukriyah khwaish ji! Khush rahiye!

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«Reply #7 on: August 16, 2010, 06:11:25 AM »
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bht hi pyari gazal hai ye aapki abdbundeli ji......


Bahut-bahut shukriyah *KasaK* ji! Khush rahiye! Aabaad rahiye!!

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«Reply #8 on: August 16, 2010, 06:12:50 AM »
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bahut khoob likha hai aapne Abdbundeli ji...!!!

Bahut-bahut shukriyah 'klaskar' ji! Khush rahiye!

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