teri khmosh nigahon say (by vb)

by vb on October 22, 2013, 04:45:10 PM
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Teri khmoshe nigaahon say phir kalaam kiya
Wo jis ka dar tha, shayari ne wohi kaam kiya

Har ake gaam, jaan-gusal tha, zindagi! lekin
Teray har ake faislay ka ehteraam kiya

Kisi k naam huvay, zindagi k peraahin
Sukhan-gari, ye rooh-o-dil kisi k naam kiya

Suna hay maangta phirta hay andheray jis ne
Har ake subah ko teri gali main shaam kiya

Ye zindagi ka safar bhe ajeeb tha apna
Jahan say kaaflay chalay, wahin qayaam kiya




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«Reply #1 on: October 22, 2013, 04:56:48 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: October 22, 2013, 06:18:10 PM »
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bahot khooob, dheron daaad, bas waaaaaah hi waaaah...
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«Reply #3 on: October 22, 2013, 06:36:24 PM »
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Teri khmoshe nigaahon say phir kalaam kiya
Wo jis ka dar tha, shayari ne wohi kaam kiya

Ye zindagi ka safar bhe ajeeb tha apna
Jahan say kaaflay chalay, wahin qayaam kiya

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«Reply #4 on: October 22, 2013, 06:50:17 PM »
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Teri khmoshe nigaahon say phir kalaam kiya
Wo jis ka dar tha, shayari ne wohi kaam kiya

Har ake gaam, jaan-gusal tha, zindagi! lekin
Teray har ake faislay ka ehteraam kiya

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«Reply #5 on: October 22, 2013, 07:04:38 PM »
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Teri khmoshe nigaahon say phir kalaam kiya
Wo jis ka dar tha, shayari ne wohi kaam kiya

Har ake gaam, jaan-gusal tha, zindagi! lekin
Teray har ake faislay ka ehteraam kiya

Kisi k naam huvay, zindagi k peraahin
Sukhan-gari, ye rooh-o-dil kisi k naam kiya

Suna hay maangta phirta hay andheray jis ne
Har ake subah ko teri gali main shaam kiya- this sher is not clear to me ,sir

Ye zindagi ka safar bhe ajeeb tha apna
Jahan say kaaflay chalay, wahin qayaam kiya




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«Reply #6 on: October 22, 2013, 09:23:46 PM »
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Teri khmoshe nigaahon say phir kalaam kiya
Wo jis ka dar tha, shayari ne wohi kaam kiya

Har ake gaam, jaan-gusal tha, zindagi! lekin
Teray har ake faislay ka ehteraam kiya

Kisi k naam huvay, zindagi k peraahin
Sukhan-gari, ye rooh-o-dil kisi k naam kiya

Suna hay maangta phirta hay andheray jis ne
Har ake subah ko teri gali main shaam kiya

Ye zindagi ka safar bhe ajeeb tha apna
Jahan say kaaflay chalay, wahin qayaam kiya




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«Reply #7 on: October 22, 2013, 10:54:06 PM »
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V B Jee Aadaab....!


WaaH janab bahut khoob... bade achche ashaar huye haiN ...
Khususan matla aur maqta behad umdaa lage hume..

Is khoob kalaam par humari hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...
HaaN 4 th sher meiN shayad kuch mistakes huyi haiN... jo waqai khul nahi paa raha hai... aap zarra gaur talab kar leN..

Likhate rahiye... Bazm meiN aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez...

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«Reply #8 on: October 23, 2013, 05:41:58 AM »
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«Reply #9 on: October 23, 2013, 10:01:06 AM »
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shukriya aap sub ka..

marhoom bahayaat and ParwaaZ sahab! ghalati hamari he hay... waisay tu is ghazal main sher koi bhe nahi khulta faqat lafaazi keh lejay... is sher main ake comma bhool gayay hen hum... mukarrar likh detay hen...


Suna hay maangta phirta hay andheray, jis ne
Har ake subah ko teri gali main shaam kiya

ya aisay parh lejay...


Suna hay maangta phirta hay andheray
jis ne Har ake subah ko teri gali main shaam kiya



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«Reply #10 on: October 23, 2013, 04:48:38 PM »
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Bahut khooooooooob....
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«Reply #11 on: October 23, 2013, 04:57:21 PM »
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shukriya aqsh jee aap ka..
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«Reply #12 on: October 24, 2013, 05:43:13 AM »
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«Reply #13 on: October 24, 2013, 02:44:57 PM »
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prashad jee! shukriya aap ka...
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