Teri meri mulaqat ka aalam.................................................Aqsh..

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Kuch yaadein chahkar bhi bhulayi nahi jaati
Yeh woh daulat hai jo kabhi lutaayi nahin jaati


Haaye teri meri woh, mulaqaat ka aalam
DheroN jo karte the, har ek baat ka aalam

Jab bhi meri bheegi zulfon, se girte qatre
Tere machalte hue un, jazbaat ka aalam

Kehne ko toh laboN par, kuch bhi nahiN tha
Par aankhoN meiN chhupe, sawalath ka aalam

Badhte hue qadam jab bhi, rukna chahte
Teri orre kheenchti woh, barsaat ka aalam

Le liya tha tumne, jab apni aagosh meiN
Dare hue ehsaas aur un, lamhaat ka aalam

Mat pooch un saath, guzareiN hue lamhe aur
“Aqsh” ko tadpaati hui, is tanha raat ka aalam.


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«Reply #1 on: August 13, 2013, 01:16:45 PM »
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good one aksh ji .. keep it up
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«Reply #2 on: August 13, 2013, 01:27:52 PM »
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waah waah waah waah waah kyaa kehne Aqsh ji, bahut bahut khoob, bahut din baad aap apnaa likhaa kuch leke ke bahut bade dhamaake ke saath aaye, aapkaa likhaa dekhaa to control nahi kar paayaa khud ko kuch likhne se, maaf kar dijiyega, bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne... ek dum zabardasssssstttttt ....!!!




mujhe  bhi  yaad  hai   us  raat  kaa samaa
teri  meri  pehli   mulaaquaat    kaa  samaa

bheegi si baarish  mein  bheege huye hum
aur  woh  teri  meethi  har baat kaa samaa

woh  dooriyaan  kab nazdikiyaan ban gayi
mere haathon  mein tere haath kaa samaa

baahon  mein aake tu yun machal gayi thi
yaad hai  mujhe  tere  us saath kaa samaa

mil  ke  do  jism  se  kab ek jaan huye hum
jismon ko jalaataa woh barsaat kaa samaa

jaanaa  yaad hai mujhe us raat kaa samaa
hasi  apni  us pehli mulaaquaat kaa samaa

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«Reply #3 on: August 13, 2013, 01:53:44 PM »
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Waah Waah Super........ Thumbs UP

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«Reply #4 on: August 13, 2013, 01:56:56 PM »
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Kuch yaadein chahkar bhi bhulayi nahi jaati
Yeh woh daulat hai jo kabhi lutaayi nahin jaati


Haaye teri meri woh, mulaqaat ka aalam
DheroN jo karte the, har ek baat ka aalam

Jab bhi meri bheegi zulfon, se girte qatre
Tere machalte hue un, jazbaat ka aalam

Kehne ko toh laboN par, kuch bhi nahiN tha
Par aankhoN meiN chhupe, sawalath ka aalam

Badhte hue qadam jab bhi, rukna chahte
Teri orre kheenchti woh, barsaat ka aalam

Le liya tha tumne, jab apni aagosh meiN
Dare hue ehsaas aur un, lamhaat ka aalam

Mat pooch un saath, guzareiN hue lamhe aur
“Aqsh” ko tadpaati hui, is tanha raat ka aalam.



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«Reply #5 on: August 13, 2013, 02:01:43 PM »
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Kuch yaadein chahkar bhi bhulayi nahi jaati
Yeh woh daulat hai jo kabhi lutaayi nahin jaati


Haaye teri meri woh, mulaqaat ka aalam
DheroN jo karte the, har ek baat ka aalam
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RAAT BHAR PAKA TE THE US AALAM KYA
Jab bhi meri bheegi zulfon, se girte qatre
Tere machalte hue un, jazbaat ka aalam
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Kehne ko toh laboN par, kuch bhi nahiN tha
Par aankhoN meiN chhupe, sawalath ka aalam
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HAA KUCH NAHI BAS K.B.C KHELNA HAI APKO
Badhte hue qadam jab bhi, rukna chahte
Teri orre kheenchti woh, barsaat ka aalam
BARSAAT ME KAHIN PHISAL NA JANA
MAIN TO NAI UTHAONGA

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Le liya tha tumne, jab apni aagosh meiN
Dare hue ehsaas aur un, lamhaat ka aalam
LENA PADA Feared. Feared.
Mat pooch un saath, guzareiN hue lamhe aur
“Aqsh” ko tadpaati hui, is tanha raat ka aalam.

TANHA RAAT KA AALAM Shocked Even More Shocked Even More

WAAH WAAH AQSH JI KAMAL KA LIKHA HAI APNE
BOHUT HI LAJAWAAB

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«Reply #6 on: August 13, 2013, 02:06:08 PM »
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Bahut khoob
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«Reply #8 on: August 13, 2013, 02:19:25 PM »
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just excellent ek muqammal taufaa diyaa hai eid kaa khush raho
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«Reply #9 on: August 13, 2013, 02:23:15 PM »
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«Reply #10 on: August 13, 2013, 02:39:29 PM »
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Kuch yaadein chahkar bhi bhulayi nahi jaati
Yeh woh daulat hai jo kabhi lutaayi nahin jaati


Haaye teri meri woh, mulaqaat ka aalam
DheroN jo karte the, har ek baat ka aalam

Jab bhi meri bheegi zulfon, se girte qatre
Tere machalte hue un, jazbaat ka aalam

Kehne ko toh laboN par, kuch bhi nahiN tha
Par aankhoN meiN chhupe, sawalath ka aalam

Badhte hue qadam jab bhi, rukna chahte
Teri orre kheenchti woh, barsaat ka aalam

Le liya tha tumne, jab apni aagosh meiN
Dare hue ehsaas aur un, lamhaat ka aalam

Mat pooch un saath, guzareiN hue lamhe aur
“Aqsh” ko tadpaati hui, is tanha raat ka aalam.





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Aqsh Ji Aapne To Aaj Maar Daala..Bahut Hi Rumani Aur Dilkash Peshkash...

Padhte-Padhte Ek Maahol Sa Ban Gaya...Har Lafz Mein Mohabbat,Aashiqui,Bechaini,Tadap.....Ufffffff..Kya Kehne..


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«Reply #11 on: August 13, 2013, 02:54:11 PM »
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bahut khoob Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #12 on: August 13, 2013, 03:37:17 PM »
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Bahut khooobsurat , roomaani ghazal hai , Aqsh .
Khas taur se iss sher ka hjawaab nahin:

Le liya tha tumne, jab apni aagosh meiN
Dare hue ehsaas aur un, lamhaat ka aalam

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«Reply #13 on: August 13, 2013, 03:42:17 PM »
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Kaafi intezaar ke baad dhamakedaar ghazal - suna tha sabar ka phal meetha hota hai, aur ab dekh liya - ziyada tareef karon to himaqhat hogi - kyonke suraj ko chiragh dikhana himaqhat hi hoti hai...
Dheron daaaad bas waah hi waah...
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«Reply #14 on: August 13, 2013, 04:33:03 PM »
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aqsh ji bahut hee khubsurat pyar bhari gazal.. in khubsurat yadon ko to bhulaye nahi bhula ja saktaa.. bahut hee besqeemti gazal hazaron daad o mubarakbaad... Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP
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