Teri Yaad Me YuN Raatey ...! RADHIKA

by Radhika_2 on March 01, 2011, 06:53:13 AM
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Teri Yaad Me YuN Raatey KatTi Rahi
Bekarari Dil Ka Sabab Banti Rahi

Udaasi Ka Phera Rehta Hai Har Pal
Zindagi KyuN Aise Chalti Rahi

Mummkin Nahi Dafan Karna EhsaasoN Ko
Phir KyuN TammanayN Machalti Rahi

NaaKaam Rahi Har Koshish Use Paane Ki
Majbooriya Aise Daaman PakaDti Rahi

Jaane Waala Na Aaya Wapas Kabhi
Ruuh Phir Bhi Jism Badalti Rahi

Jab Har MoD Se Ek Raha Nikalti Hai
KyuN "Radhika" Ke Liye Rahe Thamti Rahi
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«Reply #1 on: March 01, 2011, 07:01:34 AM »
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wwwhhhhhhhhaaaaaaaaaaa radhika ji........

behtareen peshkash he apki........bahot khoob ese hi likhte rahiye..

"har lafj me hajaro khayal chupe maloom padte he
band labo me kuch sawal maloom padte he"
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«Reply #2 on: March 01, 2011, 07:10:29 AM »
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kamaal ka post Rahika.
mast hai ji mast.
daad hai dil se.
""
aasma aas liye hai ki ye Jadoo toote
chupp ki zanzeer kate waqt ka daaman chhute

de koi shankh duhai, koi paayal boley
koi boott jaage, koi Sanwli Ghooghat kholey
""
thanx
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«Reply #3 on: March 01, 2011, 07:38:26 AM »
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Teri Yaad Me YuN Raatey KatTi Rahi
Bekarari Dil Ka Sabab Banti Rahi

Udaasi Ka Phera Rehta Hai Har Pal
Zindagi KyuN Aise Chalti Rahi

Mummkin Nahi Dafan Karna EhsaasoN Ko
Phir KyuN TammanayN Machalti Rahi

NaaKaam Rahi Har Koshish Use Paane Ki
Majbooriya Aise Daaman PakaDti Rahi

Jaane Waala Na Aaya Wapas Kabhi
Ruuh Phir Bhi Jism Badalti Rahi

Jab Har MoD Se Ek Raha Nikalti Hai
KyuN "Radhika" Ke Liye Rahe Thamti Rahi

wah wah radhika g kya khub kahi....


ZINDAGI KE SAFAR MEIN EK RAAH MILI
LAGA JAISE ZINDAGI MIL GAYI
KARTE RAHE FARIYAAD KHUDA SE
LAGA JAISE BANDAGI MIL GAYI

"TANHA" THE RAAHE SAFAR MEIN.
LAGA EK SAHI SHAKSHIYAT MIL GAYI
REH GAYA TANHA  BECHARA "TANHA"
AB TO TISHNAGI MIL GAYIIII.
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«Reply #4 on: March 01, 2011, 08:03:35 AM »
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na jaane q unhe paane ki har koshish kaam nhi aati
na jaane q khuda ki ham par meherbani nhi hoti
hamari har koshish sacchi thi lekin
na jaane q vo kamiyab nhi hoti


Radhika ji aap ne bilkul mere maan ki bate apni kavita me ki hai
wah! shayad ye kavita mai un tak pahucha sakti
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Road_Side_Romeo
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«Reply #5 on: March 01, 2011, 10:13:36 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: March 01, 2011, 11:05:58 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause
Khoob Radhika jee..
Khush rahiye..!
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ishk ek ibadat
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«Reply #7 on: March 01, 2011, 12:51:31 PM »
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Jaane Waala Na Aaya Wapas Kabhi
Ruuh Phir Bhi Jism Badalti Rahi


Bahut khoob ...... Radhika Ji !

khoobsurat ehsaas likhe hai aapne ... acchi ghazal huii ji!

tahe dil se daad hazir hai ........  Applause Applause Applause

yuhi likhti rahiye ........ !
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«Reply #8 on: March 01, 2011, 03:32:02 PM »
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Mummkin Nahi Dafan Karna EhsaasoN Ko
Phir KyuN TammanayN Machalti Rahi

Jaane Waala Na Aaya Wapas Kabhi
Ruuh Phir Bhi Jism Badalti Rahi


Good One ... Radhika Ji !

Very Impressive Creation .... Good Expression ... !

Tahe dil se daad hazir hai ...  Applause Applause Applause

aise hi likhti rahen ... khush rahen ... !

duaaoN ke saath ... !
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«Reply #9 on: March 01, 2011, 06:11:37 PM »
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wwwhhhhhhhhaaaaaaaaaaa radhika ji........

behtareen peshkash he apki........bahot khoob ese hi likhte rahiye..

"har lafj me hajaro khayal chupe maloom padte he
band labo me kuch sawal maloom padte he"

Ji ....... bahut bahut shukriya ....... !
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«Reply #10 on: March 01, 2011, 08:18:37 PM »
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Bahut Khubsurat Ehsaas Likhe Hai Aapne Radhika Ji  Excellent
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«Reply #11 on: March 02, 2011, 01:00:35 PM »
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kamaal ka post Rahika.
mast hai ji mast.
daad hai dil se.
""
aasma aas liye hai ki ye Jadoo toote
chupp ki zanzeer kate waqt ka daaman chhute

de koi shankh duhai, koi paayal boley
koi boott jaage, koi Sanwli Ghooghat kholey
""
thanx

Ji .. Thanksssssssss ........ Nirala Ji !
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«Reply #12 on: March 02, 2011, 02:10:49 PM »
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kya baat hai Radhika ji dil hi hath me aagay ye padhkar.....excellent work ji........bht mast
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«Reply #13 on: March 04, 2011, 01:25:32 AM »
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wah wah radhika g kya khub kahi....


ZINDAGI KE SAFAR MEIN EK RAAH MILI
LAGA JAISE ZINDAGI MIL GAYI
KARTE RAHE FARIYAAD KHUDA SE
LAGA JAISE BANDAGI MIL GAYI

"TANHA" THE RAAHE SAFAR MEIN.
LAGA EK SAHI SHAKSHIYAT MIL GAYI
REH GAYA TANHA  BECHARA "TANHA"
AB TO TISHNAGI MIL GAYIIII.


Ji ...... Shukriya ......... !!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #14 on: March 05, 2011, 12:57:55 PM »
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na jaane q unhe paane ki har koshish kaam nhi aati
na jaane q khuda ki ham par meherbani nhi hoti
hamari har koshish sacchi thi lekin
na jaane q vo kamiyab nhi hoti


Radhika ji aap ne bilkul mere maan ki bate apni kavita me ki hai
wah! shayad ye kavita mai un tak pahucha sakti

Ji ...... Shukriya .......... !
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