tu andhero mai ujaalo mai

by aaina on June 03, 2009, 12:37:17 AM
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Tu andhero.n ujaalo.n mai mila kar mujhko
Zindagi ab ke sawalo.n mai mila kar mujhko

Ab to  duniya hame jeene nahi daigi aise bhi
Haaledil raqam kar kitaabon mai mila kar mujhko

Apni  thezeeb sadiyo.n ka ye sarmaya hai
Sar se pa tak tu hijaabo.n mai mila kar mujhko

 mujhko youn daikh kar  palko.n ka tera jhuka laina
Jaan laiwa inhi adaabo.n mai mila kar mujhko

Tishnagi jiase tu aslam ki badne nahi daita hai kabhi
 aiseHar dour tu swaabo.n mai mil kar mujkho
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«Reply #1 on: June 03, 2009, 12:40:23 AM »
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Mashallahbahut khoob





javed
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«Reply #2 on: June 03, 2009, 01:55:08 AM »
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Very very nice and beautiful Aaina ji. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #3 on: June 03, 2009, 02:05:08 AM »
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Tu andhero.n ujaalo.n mai mila kar mujhko
Zindagi ab ke sawalo.n mai mila kar mujhko

Ab to  duniya hame jeene nahi daigi aise bhi
Haaledil raqam kar kitaabon mai mila kar mujhko

Apni  thezeeb sadiyo.n ka ye sarmaya hai
Sar se pa tak tu hijaabo.n mai mila kar mujhko

 mujhko youn daikh kar  palko.n ka tera jhuka laina
Jaan laiwa inhi adaabo.n mai mila kar mujhko

Tishnagi jiase tu aslam ki badne nahi daita hai kabhi
 aiseHar dour tu swaabo.n mai mil kar mujkho


Wah wah Aslam ji... bahut bahut accha likha hai aapne.  Thumbs UP
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«Reply #4 on: June 03, 2009, 07:28:08 AM »
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Tu andhero.n ujaalo.n mai mila kar mujhko
Zindagi ab ke sawalo.n mai mila kar mujhko

Ab to  duniya hame jeene nahi daigi aise bhi
Haaledil raqam kar kitaabon mai mila kar mujhko

Apni  thezeeb sadiyo.n ka ye sarmaya hai
Sar se pa tak tu hijaabo.n mai mila kar mujhko

 mujhko youn daikh kar  palko.n ka tera jhuka laina
Jaan laiwa inhi adaabo.n mai mila kar mujhko

Tishnagi jiase tu aslam ki badne nahi daita hai kabhi
 aiseHar dour tu swaabo.n mai mil kar mujkho


Mashallah....Kya baat hai Aslam Ji....Bohot hi Khoob....!!
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«Reply #5 on: June 03, 2009, 07:29:04 AM »
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Apni  tehzeeb sadiyo.n ka ye sarmaya hai
Sar se pa tak tu hijaabo.n mai mila kar mujhko

 


KItna pyaara sher hai ye....Bohot Khoob !!

Gustaakhi ma'af, aapke is sher pe Ahmad Faraz Sahab ka ye sher yaad aa gaya:

Tu Khuda Hai Na Mera Ishq Farishto.n Jaisa
Dono Insaa.n Hai.n To Kyo.n Itne Hijabo.n Main Mile.n !!
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«Reply #6 on: June 09, 2009, 11:43:58 AM »
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Mashallahbahut khoob


javed


bhut bhut shukriya javed sahab is hosla afzaaii ka tahe dil se shukurguzaar hu.n, aapko achi lagi samjha ke mehnat qubool
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«Reply #7 on: June 09, 2009, 11:46:16 AM »
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Very very nice and beautiful Aaina ji. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

thnxx so much madhu ji
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«Reply #8 on: June 09, 2009, 11:47:08 AM »
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Wah wah Aslam ji... bahut bahut accha likha hai aapne.  Thumbs UP


bhut bhut shukriya roja
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«Reply #9 on: June 09, 2009, 11:49:23 AM »
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KItna pyaara sher hai ye....Bohot Khoob !!

Gustaakhi ma'af, aapke is sher pe Ahmad Faraz Sahab ka ye sher yaad aa gaya:

Tu Khuda Hai Na Mera Ishq Farishto.n Jaisa
Dono Insaa.n Hai.n To Kyo.n Itne Hijabo.n Main Mile.n !!

kya baat hai celmira ji bhut khoob jawaab.....
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«Reply #10 on: June 09, 2009, 11:50:37 AM »
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Mashallah....Kya baat hai Aslam Ji....Bohot hi Khoob....!!

thnxxxxxxxx so much ke aapko meri koshish achi lagi...
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«Reply #11 on: June 09, 2009, 03:15:04 PM »
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bahut Bahut Khoob ASLAMJI.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Aur Kya Pyaara Sher Share Kiya hai Talat Dost Aapne.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #12 on: June 10, 2009, 09:41:51 PM »
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bahut Bahut Khoob ASLAMJI.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Aur Kya Pyaara Sher Share Kiya hai Talat Dost Aapne.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


thnxxxx so much khwaish
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