Tum hameN zahr pilaa do to maza aa jaaye -Panna 2:Ghazals

Ghulam Haider

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«Reply #15 on: September 22, 2012, 01:02:41 PM »

Quote from: sksaini4 on September 21, 2012, 03:34:31 AM

aap isee tarh mahfil ko guljaar banaa do to mazaa aa jaaye
bahut sunder ghazal hai dheron daad

MoHtaram sksaini4 ji wo kalaam hi kya jise paRhne ke ba'd maza na aaye..!!!! bas apni koshish ye hi hoti hai ke koie baat aisi ho jaaye jis se kisi ko kuchh khushi mile, dil ba Haal ho jaaye, isi MeN hamaari khushi hoti hai. Allah aap ko sadaa khush rakhe..


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Ghulam Haider

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Re: Tum hameN zahr pilaa do to maza aa jaaye

«Reply #16 on: September 22, 2012, 01:16:40 PM »

Quote from: Sanjeev kash on September 21, 2012, 07:39:14 AM

BAhut Hi Sunder Rachna Haider Ji Bahut Khub

BaRi khushi ki baat hai ke meri rachna aap ko achchhi lagi, ummeed hai aage bhi aap apne moHabbat bhare comment se himmat baRhaate raheNge....Khush rahiye, salaamat rahiye.


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«Reply #17 on: September 22, 2012, 01:35:11 PM »

Quote from: qadeer_junaid on September 21, 2012, 10:58:46 AM

Haider Bhai ,,Salam Alaikum

Apke ma'yari kalamo'n se najane hum jaise kitni hi nauamoz mustafeed ho rahe hai'n aur Inshallah Hote rahenge...Ghazal ki tareef karna suraj ko diya dikhane jaisi baat hai ....Shahkaar ghazal ke liye aap hazarah dad qubool kare'n ....Ye koi nahi baat nahi ke humne apko parhke sher kahene sikhe'n ..Allah apko ek taweel umr se nawaze ....

Talib e ilm

Qadeertoopchi

Biraadarm Qadeer Junaid, A'laikum al- salaam wa raHmatullah !
Aap jaise munkasirul mizaaj, daqeeq naZar aur a'meeq fikr waale ahl e adab jab is andaaz se kalaam par daad dete haiN to baar e shrmsaari se fikr Hairaan o pareeshaan ho kar reh jaati hai aur jawaaban shukriya adaa karne ke liye alfaaZ nahiN milte. Aap ki daad mere kalaam ke liye sanad ka darja rakhti hai. Aap ki daad o sitaaish ke liye intihaaie sipaas guzaar hooN, Dua'aoN meN yaad rakhiye. Allah aap ki taufeeqaat meN iZ'aafa farmaye.


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Ghulam Haider

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Re: Tum hameN zahr pilaa do to maza aa jaaye

«Reply #18 on: September 22, 2012, 01:48:44 PM »

Quote from: suman59 on September 21, 2012, 01:52:36 PM

Adab ... bahut umda peshkash haider jee Applause

Suman59 ji aadaab !
Kalaam ki qadr o qeemat, us ki pazeeraaie aur qubooliyyat se mutaa'yyan hoti hai. Aap ne daad de kar is adnaa si kaavish ko qeemati banaa diyaa hai. Peshkash ko pasand karne ke liye aap ka shukriya adaa karnaa apnaa farZ' samajhtaa hooN. Allah aap ko khush rakhe salaamat rakhe.


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Ghulam Haider

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«Reply #19 on: September 22, 2012, 01:56:18 PM »

Quote from: nishi gahlaut on September 21, 2012, 01:58:16 PM

Bahut he sundar Gazal hai...bahut khoob..

Nishi Gahlaut ji Ye aap ka Husn e naZar hai jis ne Ghazal ki sundarta ko aur bhi baRha diya hai.
Husn aataa hai jo ghazal meN naZar, Husn wo aap ke khayaal ka hai.


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Ghulam Haider

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«Reply #20 on: September 22, 2012, 10:19:39 PM »

Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on September 21, 2012, 03:48:44 PM

bahut khoob ,Haider saheb.Ghazal parh kar waqai maza aa gaya.bahut mubarakbaad.

Baarak Allaho Feek moHtaram F.H.SIDDIQUI,
Aap ki daad naa cheez ke kalaam ke liye baRi ahammiyyat rakhti hai. Aap ki dili moHabbat aur i'naayaat ke liye shukr guzaar hooN.


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«Reply #21 on: September 22, 2012, 10:26:38 PM »

Quote from: Sps on September 21, 2012, 07:21:21 PM

bahot hi numda ghazal.....bahot khoob, really very nice!

Janaab Sps ji aap ki pur khulooS moHabbat ke liye sipaas guzaar hooN. Be Hadd shukriya


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Ghulam Haider

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«Reply #22 on: September 22, 2012, 10:40:38 PM »

Quote from: ParwaaZ on September 22, 2012, 10:28:58 AM

Haider Sahaab Aadaab!

Mashaa Allaah janab kia kahne aapke andaaz e
bayaaN ke behad umda gazal kahi hai janab...
Behad dilkash aur khoobsurat ahsaas O khayaal
ko umdaa lafzoN meiN baNdha hai...

Sabhi ashaar behad dilkash rahe..
Is umda kavish par humari hazaaroN dili daad O
Mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda hafez...

Janaab ParwaaZ ji, aap ne apne comment se mujhe mutaHayyar kar diya hai ke ab kis TarH aur kin alfaaZ meN aap ka shukriya adaa karooN...
i'zzat jo di hai aap ne mujh se Haqeer ko, Allah sar buland rakhe aap ko sadaa. Pur khulooS moHabbat ke sath aap ka shukr guzaar hooN.


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SARVESH RASTOGI

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Re: Tum hameN zahr pilaa do to maza aa jaaye

«Reply #23 on: September 23, 2012, 08:43:51 AM »

Rukh se parde ko haTaa do to maza aa jaaye.
Jalva e Husn dikhaa do to maza aa jaaye.

Apni masti bhari aankhoN se pilaa kar do jaam,
Ham ko mastaana banaa do to maza aa jaaye.

A’ashiq e zaar ki Haalat pe karam farmaao,
Dard e furqat ki davaa do to maza aa jaaye.

Lazzat e sozish e jaaN ishq meN kuchh ham ko mile,
Shama’ ulfat ki jalaa do to maza aa jaaye.

Apni zulfoN ka banaa kar na rakho Sirf aseer,
Jurm e ulfat pe sazaa do to maza aa jaaye.

Apne haathoN se moHabbat bhare andaaz ke saath,
Tum hameN zehr pilaa do to maza aa jaaye.

Hai Talabgaar e wafaa deke dil apnaa Haider,
Tum agar saath nibhaa do to maza aa jaaye.
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Bahut khoooob Haider Saheb,
Badi khushnuma ghazel pesh ki hai aapne, Mubarak ho.

Aapke jaise ghazalkaar agar milte rahen
Sukoon-E-Rooh mile Dil ko mazaa aa jaye

SARVESH RASTOGI


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Ghulam Haider

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«Reply #24 on: September 26, 2012, 03:50:17 PM »

Quote from: SARVESH RASTOGI on September 23, 2012, 08:43:51 AM

Bahut khoooob Haider Saheb,
Badi khushnuma ghazel pesh ki hai aapne, Mubarak ho.

Aapke jaise ghazalkaar agar milte rahen
Sukoon-E-Rooh mile Dil ko mazaa aa jaye

SARVESH RASTOGI

MoHtaram Sarvesh Rastogi ji, Mere paas aap ki dili moHabbat aur navaazish ke liye Sirf pur khulooS tashakkur ke alfaaZ haiN. Aap ki baRi mehrbaani hai ke aap ne ghazal pasand ki, Daad o mubarakbaad se navaza. Mujhe be Hadd khushi hai ke aap ghazal se luTf-andoz huve. Ummeed hai ke aap ki karam farmaaie mere saath bar-qaraar rahe gi. MukhliS: Haider


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Re: Tum hameN zahr pilaa do to maza aa jaaye

«Reply #25 on: September 27, 2012, 09:43:17 AM »

Quote from: Ghulam Haider on September 21, 2012, 01:17:21 AM

Ahl e bazm aadaab !
MiSra' e TarH "Tum hameN zehr pilaa do to maza aa jaaye" par apni naa cheez si kaavish, aap aHbaab ki khidmat meN pesh kar rahaa hooN.

Rukh se parde ko haTaa do to maza aa jaaye.
Jalva e Husn dikhaa do to maza aa jaaye.

Apni masti bhari aankhoN se pilaa kar do jaam,
Ham ko mastaana banaa do to maza aa jaaye.

A’ashiq e zaar ki Haalat pe karam farmaao,
Dard e furqat ki davaa do to maza aa jaaye.

Lazzat e sozish e jaaN ishq meN kuchh ham ko mile,
Shama’ ulfat ki jalaa do to maza aa jaaye.

Apni zulfoN ka banaa kar na rakho Sirf aseer,
Jurm e ulfat pe sazaa do to maza aa jaaye.

Apne haathoN se moHabbat bhare andaaz ke saath,
Tum hameN zehr pilaa do to maza aa jaaye.

Hai Talabgaar e wafaa deke dil apnaa Haider,
Tum agar saath nibhaa do to maza aa jaaye.

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