Zahr kar daalaa........................SAINI

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«Reply #45 on: September 24, 2012, 04:57:54 AM »
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sheel didi bahut bahut dhanyawaad
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«Reply #46 on: September 24, 2012, 06:36:18 AM »
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«Reply #47 on: September 24, 2012, 07:06:50 AM »
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Wah Wah Saini Sahib ....qawafi tang the magar apne jis chabuk dasti se kaam liya hai uska jawab nahi ...choti bhr me aise sher kahena kamal nahi kamale fun hai ...Aap meri janib se dad qubool kare'n .....Taham apke ek sher pe nazar ruk gaai ye mumkin hai ke meri kam ilmi ke sabab aisa howa hai ...

Jisne  baantaa   mithaas  dunyaa   ko.
Pesh   usko   hee   zahr  kar  daalaa.

Darje bala sher ke misra-e-oola me lafz mithaas muzakkar bandha giya hai ..jahan tak gareeb ko ilm hai ye maunnas hai ....lafz baantaa ko baanti se badal ke dekhiye ....Baaqi Ap sahebe ghazal bhi hain mai galat bhi ho sakta hun apka muttafiq hona koi zarori nahi ...Ek baar phir apki is tilism angez ghazal ke huzoor hai meri daad..Allah apko khoob nawaze ..

Dua go

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«Reply #48 on: September 24, 2012, 09:23:22 AM »
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sheba ji shukriya
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«Reply #49 on: September 24, 2012, 10:47:16 AM »
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Arish beta shukriya
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«Reply #50 on: September 24, 2012, 11:37:42 AM »
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Ram saraswat ji dhanyawaad
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«Reply #51 on: September 24, 2012, 11:38:51 AM »
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Saare  paanee  ko  zahr   kar  daalaa.
Aur   badhaal   shahr   kar    daalaa.

Waqt bhee kyaa-kyaa gul khilaataa hai.
Ek   qatre   ko   bahr   kar   daalaa.

Tairne    kaa   gumaan   thaa   itnaa.
Khud  ko  hee  zere-lahr  kar  daalaa.

Jaane us  shakhs meN thaa kyaa jaadoo.
Usne muththee  meN  dahr  kar  daalaa.

Khaab  meN  chhoo  liyaa kisee ne use.
Usne   bastee  pe  qahr  kar   daalaa.

Jisne  baantaa   mithaas  dunyaa   ko.
Pesh   usko   hee   zahr  kar  daalaa.

‘Saini’  kee  kyooN tamaam ghazloN ko.
Aaj    maslaa- e- bahr   kar   daalaa.

Dr.Surendra Saini


सारे   पानी को   ज़ह्र  कर  डाला |

और  बदहाल  शह्र   कर   डाला ||


वक़्त भी क्या-क्या गुल खिलाता है |

एक क़तरे को  बह्र   कर  डाला ||
 

तैरने     का  गुमान  था इतना |

ख़ुद  को ही ज़ेरे -लह्र  कर डाला ||
 

जाने उस शख़्स  में था क्या जादू |

उसने  मुठ्ठी में  दह्र कर  डाला ||
 

ख़ाब  में  छू लिया किसी ने उसे |

उसने  बस्ती   पे क़ह्र कर डाला ||
 

जिसने  बांटा  मिठास  दुन्या को |

पेश उसको  ही  ज़ह्र  कर डाला ||
 

‘सैनी ’की क्यूँ तमाम ग़ज़लों को |

आज  मसला -ए-बह्र कर डाला ||
 

डा० सुरेन्द्र सैनी


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«Reply #52 on: September 25, 2012, 12:55:29 AM »
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Qadeer bhai shikriya
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Qalb saheb shukriya
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«Reply #55 on: September 25, 2012, 09:28:53 AM »
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sabhee kaa shukriya
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«Reply #56 on: September 25, 2012, 11:24:16 AM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on September 18, 2012, 10:52:41 AM
Saare  paanee  ko  zahr   kar  daalaa.
Aur   badhaal   shahr   kar    daalaa.

Waqt bhee kyaa-kyaa gul khilaataa hai.
Ek   qatre   ko   bahr   kar   daalaa.

Tairne    kaa   gumaan   thaa   itnaa.
Khud  ko  hee  zere-lahr  kar  daalaa.

Jaane us  shakhs meN thaa kyaa jaadoo.
Usne muththee  meN  dahr  kar  daalaa.

Khaab  meN  chhoo  liyaa kisee ne use.
Usne   bastee  pe  qahr  kar   daalaa.

Jisne  baantee  mithaas  dunyaa   ko.
Pesh   usko   hee   zahr  kar  daalaa.

‘Saini’  kee  kyooN tamaam ghazloN ko.
Aaj    maslaa- e- bahr   kar   daalaa.

Dr.Surendra Saini


सारे   पानी को   ज़ह्र  कर  डाला |

और  बदहाल  शह्र   कर   डाला ||


वक़्त भी क्या-क्या गुल खिलाता है |

एक क़तरे को  बह्र   कर  डाला ||
 

तैरने     का  गुमान  था इतना |

ख़ुद  को ही ज़ेरे -लह्र  कर डाला ||
 

जाने उस शख़्स  में था क्या जादू |

उसने  मुठ्ठी में  दह्र कर  डाला ||
 

ख़ाब  में  छू लिया किसी ने उसे |

उसने  बस्ती   पे क़ह्र कर डाला ||
 

जिसने बांटी मिठास  दुन्या को |

पेश उसको  ही  ज़ह्र  कर डाला ||
 

‘सैनी ’की क्यूँ तमाम ग़ज़लों को |

आज  मसला -ए-बह्र कर डाला ||
 

डा० सुरेन्द्र सैनी
waah bohat acha qafia chuna aap ne or bohat sunder ghazal kahee...bohat c daad ................
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«Reply #58 on: September 25, 2012, 02:54:54 PM »
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