-Tumhare Ghum Se Hume Fursaat-

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Tumhare ghum se hume fursaat hi kahan mili
Qatra ke aankh nikal gaye khushii jahan milii

Muhoobat mein luut chuke ashiqon se humko
‘Ishq na farmaiyega hajjor’ yaahii salaah milii

Woh log kaun the ke jinko mila dard se nijaat
Zakhm hi zakhm mile humko nahii dawa milii

Tum to kehte the ke yeh shahar waffon wala hai
Haye! Humko to wohii bewaffaii barhaa milli

Jane yeh kaun sa rog lag gya hai mujhko iilaahii
Na kaaza hi aayi mujhko aur naa hii shiffa milli

Koi hum jaisii bhi muhobat tumko kar ke dhikaye
Wahan wahan kiye sajde tasveer terii jahan milli !!




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«Reply #1 on: July 10, 2009, 11:11:53 AM »
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Oye hoye bro,

Aaj kal lagta hai chote bhaiya ko waqt mil raha hai shayari aur ghazal likhne ka Applause Applause Applause

Bahut khoob !

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«Reply #2 on: July 10, 2009, 11:15:13 AM »
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welcome back HumTum ji!!! Bahoot khoob Likha hai!!!
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«Reply #3 on: July 10, 2009, 11:28:30 AM »
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Waah Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Hum Tum ji... bahoot Khoob
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«Reply #4 on: July 10, 2009, 12:40:23 PM »
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Sab kuch loota kar bhi keemat chuka na paye

Neelam huye phir bhi na humko wafa mili.......
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«Reply #5 on: July 10, 2009, 10:46:12 PM »
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very nice gazal Hum Tum ji,beautiful creation. icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #6 on: July 12, 2009, 06:45:35 AM »
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Wah Kya baat hai Humtum Ji.. Behad Khubsoorat Gazal Likhi hai aapne..!! Bahut dino baad aapki Qalam se Kuch Padhne Ko Mila..!! Really Great work.. Applause Applause


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«Reply #7 on: July 12, 2009, 06:49:56 AM »
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Tumhare ghum se hume fursaat hi kahan mili
Qatra ke aankh nikal gaye khushii jahan milii

Muhoobat mein luut chuke ashiqon se humko
‘Ishq na farmaiyega hajjor’ yaahii salaah milii

Woh log kaun the ke jinko mila dard se nijaat
Zakhm hi zakhm mile humko nahii dawa milii

Tum to kehte the ke yeh shahar waffon wala hai
Haye! Humko to wohii bewaffaii barhaa milli

Jane yeh kaun sa rog lag gya hai mujhko iilaahii
Na kaaza hi aayi mujhko aur naa hii shiffa milli

Koi hum jaisii bhi muhobat tumko kar ke dhikaye
Wahan wahan kiye sajde tasveer terii jahan milli !!




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Wonderful gazal HumTum  Applause Applause Applause
Excellant work  Thumbs UP
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«Reply #8 on: July 12, 2009, 11:26:05 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause

Bohot Khoob HumTum Ji  icon_thumleft


Ishq Waalon Ko To Bas Ek Yahi Adaa Mili,
Ya Mili Furqatain Ya Jhooti Wafa Mili
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«Reply #9 on: July 13, 2009, 04:33:53 AM »
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Shukriya Dosto.

Aur accha lagta agar dusre shayar bhi yha kucch patake chod ke jate... khair ... ik ne to choda hai ... Talat Ji... kya khoob likha hai. Kucch arz hai.


Woh aur honge mili jinko ishq mein sougateiN
Humko to jab bhi mili faqat sazza  milii

Unse muhoobat karne ka kucch ajab tajrubha rha
Kucch dard bhi mila humko kucch dua  milii

Yun to sard mousam mein dafan tha ishq magar
Bhadak gaye shole jab bhi kabhi hawaa milli !!




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«Reply #10 on: July 13, 2009, 01:56:18 PM »
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bahoth qoob har ashar apke umda shayar hone ki dalil hai bahoth qoob nachiz ki dad qobool kijiyega !! allah apko khush rakhe !!


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«Reply #11 on: July 13, 2009, 02:38:42 PM »
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Shukriya Dosto.

Aur accha lagta agar dusre shayar bhi yha kucch patake chod ke jate... khair ... ik ne to choda hai ... Talat Ji... kya khoob likha hai. Kucch arz hai.


Woh aur honge mili jinko ishq mein sougateiN
Humko to jab bhi mili faqat sazza  milii

Unse muhoobat karne ka kucch ajab tajrubha rha
Kucch dard bhi mila humko kucch dua  milii

Yun to sard mousam mein dafan tha ishq magar
Bhadak gaye shole jab bhi kabhi hawaa milli !!




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Waah Bohot khoob HumTum  icon_thumleft

Ishq Main Mile Jo Ghum Saughaat Ban Ke Rehte Hain
Dard Ke Pal Bhi Haseen Lamhaat Ban Ke Rehte Hain

Dhadkanon Main Goonjta Hai Naam Us Sitamgar Ka
Ranj-o-Alam Dil Main Naghmaat Ban Ke Rehte Hain
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«Reply #12 on: July 14, 2009, 07:15:42 AM »
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Bahut Shukriya Qadeer Shahab... Ghazal kee pazeeraayee ke liye dilee mamnoon hoon.  Aapko hamare kucch Ashar pasand aaye mano hamari mehnat safal hui.

Talat Ji - bahut khoob.


                  Apni ankhooN mien chend ashq chupa rakhe hai
                  Dil-e-nadaN mein chend arman dabba rakhe hai

                  Woh aayenge ik roz bas issii umeed mein humne
                  Apne dariche mein chend diye jalaa rakhe hai !!


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«Reply #13 on: July 14, 2009, 01:10:25 PM »
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BOhat Achche Humtum Bhai,.
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«Reply #14 on: July 15, 2009, 09:23:29 AM »
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Talat Ji - bahut khoob.


                  Apni ankhooN mien chend ashq chupa rakhe hai
                  Dil-e-nadaN mein chend arman dabba rakhe hai

                  Woh aayenge ik roz bas issii umeed mein humne
                  Apne dariche mein chend diye jalaa rakhe hai !!


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Un Ki Karchiyan Ab Bhi Aankhon Main Sajaye Baithe Hain

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